[10-Line Topical] dead man vs. Certain [dead man WINS]

Zen · 07-27-2014, 02:10 PM

I gotta be honest, going into this I thought ten lines would be make both verses suck since there wouldn't be enough room for content, but I was wrong. These ten liners were better than most of the verses in the AOWL last season. True story.

Both of you were better in one aspect. Black had the better rhymes, and Certain had the better concept. Black's verse flowed effortlessly, while I wondered what was going to happen next in Certain's verse. The vote all boils down to which one of these things a reader prefers, rhymes or content. I like the rhymes the most, so black gets my vote. Cool stuff, brahs. A 10 line league doesn't seem like a bad idea.

07-27-2014, 02:10 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	I gotta be honest, going into this I thought ten lines would be make both verses suck since there wouldn't be enough room for content, but I was wrong. These ten liners were better than most of the verses in the AOWL last season. True story. Both of you were better in one aspect. Black had the better rhymes, and Certain had the better concept. Black's verse flowed effortlessly, while I wondered what was going to happen next in Certain's verse. The vote all boils down to which one of these things a reader prefers, rhymes or content. I like the rhymes the most, so black gets my vote. Cool stuff, brahs. A 10 line league doesn't seem like a bad idea.