07-11-2020, 10:18 PM | #1 |
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Zygote Battle Rap 5
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07-12-2020, 02:44 AM | #3 | |
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zygote is cool.. but the whole idea of having a ghost writer on a forum is totally wack so in essence I genuinely wasn't feeling this..
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07-12-2020, 06:38 PM | #4 |
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jesus fucking christ, bro
not your finest moment i think this ranks among the worst in your time here, actually and you've already had some pretty bad ones, so... edit - i did originally turn it off after 30 seconds but decided to listen all the way through and holy shit @ that mic presence the quality is bad, the beat choice and rendition questionable but compounded with the fact you're just reading a random guy's script off the internet, recording it and then posting it is really getting me for some reason i don't know what i expected. sorry. Last edited by Eŋg; 07-12-2020 at 06:46 PM. |
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And for how little experience I have with recording it's NOT terrible by MY standards. Was on beat for the first 3/4ths. Did run out of breath at the end. I know I have a lot of room for improvement. "Ranking the worst in my time here" is a little much IMO |
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07-16-2020, 02:10 AM | #6 |
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I mean I think for what this was it was a cool little homage thing and yeah your delivery was a little meh but at the same time like you said it was one take and you read it off paper, I think that reflected here and was kinda meh but I don't think it was the "worst"
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07-16-2020, 02:18 AM | #7 |
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Horrendous.
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07-16-2020, 08:44 AM | #8 |
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I know your showing this to other ppl and assume you aren’t giving Zygote his writing credits
This isn’t normal This isn’t hip hop This isn’t cool
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I disagree that it's not hip hop. And I think the first 3/4 are Not Terrible. Somewhat okay. But whatever. You can have your opinions. |
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07-16-2020, 05:14 PM | #10 |
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Aight maybe I took it the wrong way
And yea u was on beat Rock out brother
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07-17-2020, 07:31 PM | #11 |
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yea this wasn't good
if it isn't among your worst things here please detail to me what you think was worse? |
07-20-2020, 07:41 PM | #12 |
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In this Empirical-Game far form a Pitiful Dame https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYspXO6I6C8 |
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07-21-2020, 06:48 PM | #15 |
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yea i was pretty good. i also wrote it.
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If @Pakistani Hand Cannon wants to post a rap that's better. By all means. Please do, |
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07-22-2020, 11:13 PM | #17 |
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I think Ox was a little harsh on you...I'm no audio head so critique from me means nothin', thought it was aight though...def noticed you ran outta breath lol...gracias for linkin' fam.
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straight audio aids
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Dang, Pharaoh you make a brotha wanna do an underground tape deck hiss fisher price recording high school collab. I think you potential my man in the nostaglik underground scene. Keep rocking bro!
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