12-07-2020, 03:27 PM | #21 |
Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
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Felt the audio was a little too loud for your vocals. Made them difficult to listen to. You stayed on beat and the delivery was solid enough but I felt it could've been delivered with a little more intensity and variation in tone. Far, far from the worst I've heard though. Lyrics were packed out with multis and good vocabs, also some good punches thrown in.
As a diss, I felt the middle finger was delivered solidly enough. keep elevating dude. |
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