|
08-23-2020, 12:33 AM
|
#1 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2020
Posts: 44
Rep Power: 0   |
WayUp
|
|
|
|
|
08-23-2020, 02:56 PM
|
#2 |
|
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,738
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
Rep Power: 15446142   |
Hey man I like the vibe here, and I understand you’re freestyling but I’m not really a fan of this type of hip hop unless it’s done originally or uniquely. You’ve proven yourself as a fantastic writer in the open mic section so if you take time, write a dope track and use this style to deliver it it’s going to be flames. You’ve got a decent voice and know your way around the instrumental good stuff
|
|
|
|
|
08-24-2020, 09:14 PM
|
#3 |
|
rhyme capsule.
Join Date: Sep 2018
Posts: 2,145
Rep Power: 0 |
yea bro take time on your freestyle so that it is polished and not a freestyle but when you do do that make sure you deliver it like you did this freestyle
then it will be good i think?! |
|
|
|
|
08-24-2020, 10:29 PM
|
#4 |
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2020
Posts: 44
Rep Power: 0 |
I'm the girl on it. The boy isn't on the site.
|
|
|
|
|
08-24-2020, 10:30 PM
|
#5 |
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2020
Posts: 44
Rep Power: 0 |
We made the song one take thought I'd share cause I'd love to make something with anyone.
Last edited by Etherwave; 08-24-2020 at 10:33 PM. Reason: Typo |
|
|
|
|
08-25-2020, 08:28 AM
|
#6 |
|
rhyme capsule.
Join Date: Sep 2018
Posts: 2,145
Rep Power: 0 |
this will end well.
|
|
|
|
|
08-25-2020, 08:38 AM
|
#7 |
|
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,738
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
Rep Power: 15446142 |
Oh well in that case you’ve got a good voice
Do you use band lab primarily to record? I’d be down to collab I just don’t have any recording equipment anymore |
|
|
|
|
08-25-2020, 08:39 AM
|
#8 | |
|
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,738
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
Rep Power: 15446142 |
Quote:
Do you use band lab primarily to record? I’d be down to collab I just don’t have any recording equipment anymore |
|
|
|
|
|
08-29-2020, 04:29 PM
|
#9 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 344
Battle Record: 5-4
Rep Power: 95147 |
I wish your vocals were mixed louder and more clearly, because you have a good voice. You could have had more of a lead on this, IMO. For what it’s worth, I’m not a fan of the kind of rapping that the MC was doing (and it was clearly not a freestyle)... but, when you guys both moved into more R n B mode, it was enjoyable. He’s a better singer than an MC, for whatever that’s worth. You should definitely keep making music.. You have some chops for it. Cheers.
__________________
https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals |
|
|
|
|
11-06-2020, 09:51 PM
|
#10 |
|
Steadily Lurking
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Beyond your reach
Posts: 1,328
Battle Record: 7-7
Champed - Netcees Writers League
Rep Power: 5599637 |
Ok, I see you Etherwave. Musically inclined brotha!
__________________
 https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz |
|
|
|
|
07-26-2022, 11:04 PM
|
#11 |
|
Junior Member
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18
Rep Power: 0  |
There is a ridiculous amount of potential with your voice, I would love to have you on a hook
__________________
Check out CursewerdZ on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.go |
|
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
