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Old 03-28-2020, 09:28 PM   #41
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No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.

Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140

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Universe. I just wanna say: your verses are for the most part good. but your wordplay is corny as ffffffff Please refrain from it,


Using this thread to link multiple OM pieces. We got it. You're better than average. Maybe slow down on the wordplays.
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Old 03-28-2020, 09:30 PM   #42
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There's lots of nonprofit orgs out there, reach out via email respectfully, show your resume, and ask if they're interested in adding a contributor to their blog (doesn't have to be a byline, can be anonymous). Try 5-8 nonprofits, definitely smaller and less popular, and see what they say. It's a constructive use of your time and may open the door to contracting work.

e.g. https://www.shantibhavanchildren.org/blog/
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Old 03-29-2020, 05:07 AM   #43
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No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.

Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140

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Haha, you clearly thought they rhymed. Defence mode activated.

lol trying to claim you were using a different rhyme scheme exclusively for the first bar when your basic, boring, conversational, Dr Seuss two syllable rhyming style is identical in every verse you write. You could of at least claimed it was a regional accent or that English is your third language or something.

Either way, you shouldn't be anywhere near a HOF or OM nom. You've got a lot to improve on. Have a great day.
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Old 03-29-2020, 06:18 AM   #44
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lmao wasn’t Larkin the worst person in Clash?

funny he should bring up non-HOF worthy contenders when he was below Sound in their pecking order
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Old 03-29-2020, 06:56 AM   #45
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lmao wasn’t Larkin the worst person in Clash?

funny he should bring up non-HOF worthy contenders when he was below Sound in their pecking order
If only I knew something about you to come back with.
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Old 03-29-2020, 07:42 AM   #46
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Who... me? Nah. That's not what I'm up to at all...

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Old 03-29-2020, 08:38 AM   #47
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lmao wasn’t Larkin the worst person in Clash?

funny he should bring up non-HOF worthy contenders when he was below Sound in their pecking order
Larkin I agree w. but don't hate on Sound
He had his moments
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Sorry if my response was too harsh after you told me you would "literally rip my fucking face off"...

Your attempted high ground here is unsubstantiated.
Sorry about that.

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Ouch.

I'll let that slide though because of your Bret Hart avi.
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Larkin I agree w. but don't hate on Sound
He had his moments
I've not been around these boards for a while but your the mentally retarded one right? The guy who gets shitted on in every corner of this forum and still comes back each day because they crave the attention.
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I'm the bad guy. Your point?
I could've rode some dick too but chose not to be a faggot ftc

Don't take what I said to heart
You weren't even bad. Just out of place, like CASH needed an L and couldn't find one lol
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I'm the bad guy. Your point?
I could've rode some dick too but chose not to be a faggot ftc

Don't take what I said to heart
You weren't even bad. Just out of place, like CASH needed an L and couldn't find one lol
Is that how you see it in your mind? The bad guy?

Your just the kid nobody likes, gets bullied everyday but still comes back because he has no-where else to go.

Push those emotions deep down Bartone, denials a great pill... you chose to try and play the Bad Guy because its the only way you can get people to talk to you.
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It had nothing to do with a L


I always hated the name and idea of the group



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Have you thought about writing articles for a website? Could be a way to express yourself and learn from the process, in addition to open mic constructiveness. In case one falls through, the other is there. There's lots of online publications looking for writers.
Nah, but it's a good idea, actually. I think it could be a great outlet and interesting for some to read. During one of my sessions my therapist opened up a lil and said I'm hands down the best client he's had in terms of putting emotions and situations to words the 20 years he's been working with people. In his words I'm able to recognize and set apart destructive thoughts and patterns aside from how things should be, and even tho a lot can do it he's yet to see someone being able to explain it in laymans terms in ways anyone can understand it. What'd usually take him 5-6 sessions to get we'd only need 1 or less. Could make for some good honest writing if I tried to hone it in that regard.

You got any online publications in mind I should hit up, or should I just google around?
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