09-24-2014, 04:18 PM | #1 |
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dropping knowledge on fools
yo mic check 1,2
patrick jumps on the stage and the lights go on and the crowd cheers!!!! its the masta, patrick bateman getting psycho on the beat green got my head in the clouds, but my ears to the street da da da da da da da boom boom dada dada boom ya boy been on the beat since I was off in the womb I got the drive and hunger to succeed I got the killer instinct to make you all bleed can't no body hinder my progression I am really chill, but I can get with the agression class in session, the best in, the world. your bitch be like whose that dick? but she be on it, doggonit, it's Patrick I'm in the club drinking jack bitch peeping your girl like whose that bitch now she face down on my mattress you aint shit, thats why she rubbing on some gadjets I be on that kill, smoking kill, and selling weight I move so much traffic, dem boyz call me interstate punch your bitch in her titty till it looks like a dinner plate then laugh like I am here to fuck, I aint here to date |
09-24-2014, 07:13 PM | #2 |
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Please post your self rapping this cuz that
Is straight fire cuz. I don't much understand All dez other post talking about some shit I can't even spit ova a mix. Yah feel me tho son? This the shit yall need to be post in foreal for real. |
09-24-2014, 08:17 PM | #3 |
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I gave you rep bruh thanks man
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09-28-2014, 05:16 PM | #4 |
Yeah Im kinda like that
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I got the drive and hunger to succeed
I got the killer instinct to make you all bleed can't no body hinder my progression I am really chill, but I can get with the agression class in session, the best in, the world. your bitch be like whose that dick? but she be on it, doggonit, it's Patrick This is dope bro. I really like how you rhyme things. Like suceed with bleed. And progression with agression session and the best in world. That dick it's Patrick. That is fire son. Content is not so complicated that I can barely read it. Keeping it simple, not raising too many expectations, it makes me feel really comfortable reading line to line because I know that my mind won't be too confused by any of it. Thinking too much is for school and not a hit song in my opinion. It's actually something even a terrible rapper like myself with weak little girly lungs, could possibly rap to on a really slow instrumental or something. Makes me want to live vicariously through your lyrics. Much doper than all this other nonsense that would never really get play on the radio or youtube or whatever. Also I second on the audio. Keep it up bro. |
09-28-2014, 05:52 PM | #5 | |
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Word bro thanks I just repped you. |
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