06-01-2018, 06:45 AM | #21 |
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06-01-2018, 06:46 AM | #22 |
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It was some BUHLSHIT
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06-01-2018, 06:50 AM | #23 |
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U know I got dat tho
I was expecting like 5-6 additions so when there wasn't I was like Ohhh pssh run it But to my chagrin WEN DIS STARBURST THIS AIRHEAD LEAKING OUT SKITTLES GOT ME oh man I'm geeking Why u had to bring it up Its funny to me again
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06-01-2018, 07:19 AM | #24 | |
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06-01-2018, 07:20 AM | #25 |
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Lol I can live with that . Idk bout way close but its Gucci To each their own .
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06-01-2018, 07:26 AM | #28 |
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Probably for the best.
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06-01-2018, 07:28 AM | #29 |
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Not even, hater
Smfh Sit yo Buttcheeks ass down b4 I flawless u again
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06-01-2018, 07:32 AM | #30 |
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06-01-2018, 07:35 AM | #31 |
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Muff huffin wip its early in the AM.
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06-01-2018, 07:37 AM | #32 |
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I'm away from the dope game bruh @Amen
No more time in the lab lol Yo that night I got angry @ you I was ZOOTED But u already know I'm sure xD I didn't dress appropriately lmao Soaked all in my pores holy fuck
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06-01-2018, 07:37 AM | #33 |
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06-01-2018, 07:40 AM | #35 |
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Unneccesary but sure I can dig it out of curiosity
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06-01-2018, 07:50 AM | #36 |
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A lil sum'n sumn
What in the entire FUCK. thissa holy disgrace Names 69': Well it suits you : u got pussy ridden all over yur face I thought this was dope tbh, fresh to me, though 69 and written all over your face stuff been done before (I've seen a cum line used with written all over your face previously too) but the pussy ridden made it a fresh enough flip for me to like it. I can see why some may not, though, if I look at it objectively. Who gave you a mic. Fool, Yur lame & its trife How u go from looking like a foreign exchange student to not goin 2 school a day in ur life This was okay, nothing too hard hitting or comedic just a straight observational insult that worked for me. Recent pic is telling . Trusttt, his brodies aware U tell someone 2 to "go against the grain ' : & its jus ur homie combing your hair Again, kind of cool, can see some people not liking the idiom of going against the grain but it was cool. You gettin no ass . Bro you smell of inferior Cropped half the bitch face out the pic but we can still tell that she's hideous Nice observation away from the obvious insults, maybe people didn't give it credit as it insulted her more than the guy in question here though? Perhaps. Listen i dont envision that youll ever even sniff the top That scarf is an Infinity Knot: like wen ppl ask if I listen to the shit u drop This one didn't really work all the way for me. I get it, for sure, but it would be infinitely knot and so I could maybe see Incredible marking you down for that. That first pic is death . Gawdd homie, its morbid & its clear that THATS a little broad : well my nigga, so is ur forehead Again, I like this perosonally, seen stuff done with 'broad shoulders' etc before but little broad was a newer twist on it I guess. I fuck with it. Light jab. why that picture though? the moment is harddly important Now presenting:" the first nigga in our family to NOT get deported" Straight clowning, I'm keen on it but obviously everyone's different and in this era of wordplay heavy/gun bars maybe it has gone overlooked? Preference could be headed in a diff direction? That relationship weird. Its dumb scary, my mans Here's the naked truth. She's holding you like she's the one wearin the pants Same with the last line really, bit of clowning with not a lot more going on in the line to tie it in. I can fuck with it but I preferred the line before tbreal That 2nd pic is tragic :bro stop the despair Can't see the Game w/ Hanson: but mmm BOP nigga ur rocking their hair Again, this one hit but lightly, wording didn't really give it that zing it needed to make it pop. I like it, it's just missing something. Fact u talked shit to him? That's a blatant arrest Ur not raps Heir Apparent you jus need to b deprived from taking a breath Not too keen on this one in truth, especially as it's the closing line, I'd have probably scrapped this in truth. The verse started off with some dope shit, couple good comedic lines that maybe weren't to everyone's tastes and also felt rushed wording wise like you keyed it together and I know you've been on a roll with those lately but I think if you had taken the time to word a few of these more strongly they would have had more impact, taking them from a jab to a haymaker or three. Last edited by Diablo; 06-01-2018 at 07:54 AM. |
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06-01-2018, 07:55 AM | #38 |
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I can break down @BodySnatcher verse too if he wants?
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Nigga Tf Ok ok ok Ur back in my good graces love you
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06-01-2018, 07:57 AM | #40 |
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It's only fair I'm sure muff would like to know what you thought on body's verse too.
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