Hush 1-0 Vs Slechtn 1-0 - HUSH WINS

Allen Knight · 09-19-2016, 06:24 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Hush

@selchtn

Slechtn · 09-19-2016, 06:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

I tried some shit that was 1.5 milly on the scoville chart
Don't do it lol

First & Last time you'll try me, Hush. That's cuz you know better.
Fire out the milli n' leave ya chest burnin'... It won't be the Ghost Pepper.

Hush · 09-22-2016, 04:15 PM

I might be in the phantom by next summer . Never been no liar
Ucan get ya whip covered in fire if u pull up. Now U a ghost rider

Inno · 09-22-2016, 05:28 PM

Dope battle.

At first read I had slec. But on a second look I think hush's wording and delivery
Was a bit smoother so I'll give him the edge. Dope battle fellas

Hush

Kin · 09-22-2016, 09:22 PM

Ghost pepper vs ghost rider...

Slech... most peoples first is last time tryin ghost peppers... only part of ur set up in there goin wit punch.. but u not sayin u are the ghost pepper... u say the opposite. It wont be the ghost pepper.. so didnt work wit set up.. actual punch was ok

Hush..one word relating to punch in set up... similar to slech....urs also doesnt work for double meaning of wordplay...u being in phantom... then calling him ghost rider....but still wording on its own was cool...ghost rider bars been done...but u had a clever flip on the whip in fire

Vote Hush PuppieZ

Hush

Chemist · 09-22-2016, 10:25 PM

both came fairly nice.
Slecht had a nice set up, smooth and came with a direct personal, Tied in Hush's own hot sauce thread with the ghostpepper shit loool
Hush was smooth too. , I wasn't feeling the set up here tho. The self praise first line killed it for me, honestly.

I almost felt like It was close to a feed but I re-read it a couple times

personal over smooth punch here
vote / slecht , had a more relevant set up and the tie in was direct with the personal

Pinot Grij · 09-23-2016, 12:23 AM

both punches are well written and eerily similar. Hard to draw the line. Felt Slecht had some more complexity tho.

Vote -- Slechtn

sral · 09-23-2016, 08:03 AM

i got Slecht here too yo

both had nice lines but Slecht's personal/current event gave him that edge

Awww Shit · 09-23-2016, 03:30 PM

Both were good bars and I do feel that Hush's was put together scheme wise a bit better, but this is a punchline battle..

The ghost rider bar just didn't do it for me vs. a decent personal punch

Vote - Slechtn

Maximus · 09-23-2016, 04:36 PM

both were good lines, but i just preferred Hush's cos i think it hit a lil bit harder for me

Dope girl · 09-23-2016, 04:54 PM

This is tough decision cause both dope

I enjoyed hush punchline more

vote-Hush

Allen Knight · 09-26-2016, 02:08 PM

UPPPIN FOR VOTES THIS TIED UP 4-4.
@Destroyer @Bags @Infiltration @Bash @Killing Spree @Orc @Cyrax

Vote u faggots.

Cyrax · 09-26-2016, 02:22 PM

good battle, hush got this one

Saint · 09-26-2016, 02:51 PM

I wish slecht woulda tied in more bcuz his concept was fresher
i have Hush w/ the edge for better wording.

Certain · 09-26-2016, 03:36 PM

Hush had much better wording. Slechtn had a better concept, but it seemed so muddled by the first half of the second line. Hush's concept was good enough to take it.

Vote: Hush

09-19-2016, 06:24 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Hush 1-0 Vs Slechtn 1-0 - HUSH WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Hush @selchtn

09-22-2016, 10:25 PM	#6
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	both came fairly nice. Slecht had a nice set up, smooth and came with a direct personal, Tied in Hush's own hot sauce thread with the ghostpepper shit loool Hush was smooth too. , I wasn't feeling the set up here tho. The self praise first line killed it for me, honestly. I almost felt like It was close to a feed but I re-read it a couple times personal over smooth punch here vote / slecht , had a more relevant set up and the tie in was direct with the personal __________________ Last edited by Chemist; 09-22-2016 at 10:37 PM.

09-23-2016, 12:23 AM	#7
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	both punches are well written and eerily similar. Hard to draw the line. Felt Slecht had some more complexity tho. Vote -- Slechtn __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

09-23-2016, 08:03 AM	#8
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	i got Slecht here too yo both had nice lines but Slecht's personal/current event gave him that edge __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-23-2016, 03:30 PM	#9
Awww Shit YUUGE Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 314 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Both were good bars and I do feel that Hush's was put together scheme wise a bit better, but this is a punchline battle.. The ghost rider bar just didn't do it for me vs. a decent personal punch Vote - Slechtn __________________

09-22-2016, 04:15 PM	#3
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	I might be in the phantom by next summer . Never been no liar Ucan get ya whip covered in fire if u pull up. Now U a ghost rider

09-22-2016, 05:28 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Dope battle. At first read I had slec. But on a second look I think hush's wording and delivery Was a bit smoother so I'll give him the edge. Dope battle fellas Hush

09-22-2016, 09:22 PM	#5
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Ghost pepper vs ghost rider... Slech... most peoples first is last time tryin ghost peppers... only part of ur set up in there goin wit punch.. but u not sayin u are the ghost pepper... u say the opposite. It wont be the ghost pepper.. so didnt work wit set up.. actual punch was ok Hush..one word relating to punch in set up... similar to slech....urs also doesnt work for double meaning of wordplay...u being in phantom... then calling him ghost rider....but still wording on its own was cool...ghost rider bars been done...but u had a clever flip on the whip in fire Vote Hush PuppieZ Hush

09-23-2016, 04:36 PM	#10
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	both were good lines, but i just preferred Hush's cos i think it hit a lil bit harder for me

09-23-2016, 04:54 PM	#11
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,706 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	This is tough decision cause both dope I enjoyed hush punchline more vote-Hush

09-26-2016, 02:08 PM	#12
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	UPPPIN FOR VOTES THIS TIED UP 4-4. @Destroyer @Bags @Infiltration @Bash @Killing Spree @Orc @Cyrax Vote u faggots. Last edited by Allen Knight; 09-26-2016 at 02:11 PM.

09-26-2016, 02:22 PM	#13
Cyrax Round 1 fight Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 58 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 7990386	good battle, hush got this one

09-26-2016, 02:51 PM	#14
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,209 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	I wish slecht woulda tied in more bcuz his concept was fresher i have Hush w/ the edge for better wording.

09-26-2016, 03:36 PM	#15
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Hush had much better wording. Slechtn had a better concept, but it seemed so muddled by the first half of the second line. Hush's concept was good enough to take it. Vote: Hush __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.