Favorite netcee battlers or writers over the years?

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@Frank @sral
SOMEONE help a lil
This is not a lame spammy gay roast here guys I AM TRYING TO STFU (I swear) Right gamble?
NCG's I have looked season 4 AND 5 AOWL archives i swearrr thought I'd see the
Buddha Jeso contest thought it was like circa week V type deal but I cannot find it
anyone got me here?
for all hte walkbaks and respect I truly love writing and most u guuys here
Lol this all from memory (not brag) i don't browse archives enough right aj right lars right karp?
cus i don't wnana bite meta even more, etc
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...esodist+unborn

Originally Posted by JESODIST

HE IS

Trapped in the Form of Humanity,
His insides are Dark matter creating its Own Reality,
The Marvelous Phantom throwing Scandalous Tantrums from Miraculous Sanctums,
Bright moon feeds light to his fortress instead of Candles and Lanterns,
Forget everything he taught by sorcerers and slowly started to Dismantle the Patterns,
Emphatically guarding the tree of life firmly Planted in Taverns,
Telepathically communicating with spirits Stranded in Saturn,
He was Bound to a Chair for a Thousand Years,
With Battle wounds that stratch from the Mouth to the Ear with huge Cuts Everywhere,
Hell risen walking an Ominous trail after Denouncing all his Monsterous Peers,
Which caused in him an Insidious Ressurection, Encompassing evil to the Brink of Perfection,
Altering his molecular structure his arms become blades that Rip into Sections,
Any Victim that enters the cave where he Sits in Detention
Mind without a gaze in a Sinking Dimension,
Army of demons appear on his Hideous Complexion, Awaiting orders Too Hideous to Mention,
Science would consider him an Incredible Find, Feeding of his Indelible Mind,
which packs milleniums of wisdom after Repeating the Cycle of lifes Several Times,
But to no avail since his entire region is cemened and Confined in walls of Dark Gas,
He Unleashes legions of dementors from his Perfectly Alighnined Chakras,
The one responsible for all the Crop Circles,His skin is uncrushable and Dark Purple,
Whisper a Prayer to the Breeze before Entering the Layer of the Beast,
With Alien Feats sacrificing the pagans beneath until the spirit of Satan is Released.
Any form of negativity will make his power Blatantly Increase,
When the Father is Enraged Masses are Amazed at how much Darker is the Gaze,
His Hammers and Blades Splattering your Face as you pant and Stagger in the Maze,
Of his mind's deadly owned Helish abyss where the Martyrs are Encased,
Till their Rendered Waste thoughts and devilish deeds are Altered Ereased,
You're just a Rebel with a Gage Reveling in Plagues at the Very Base of the Devil's Cage,
He is an Infernal Mage Spawned from the Eternal Blaze someone you must Never Phaze,
A Calm and fly emcee with an Army that stretches as far as the Eyes can Sea,
Engaging in Wars Violently, Meditate on Stars Silently,
A Preacher of Dark Quotes with Creatures of all Sorts,
let me put this Really Clear a battle against him will Lead you no Where,
He's a Dark spectre that Live in your Fears got you Half severed and Bleeding in Tears,
whiplashing your gaze with a reflection of death in the glare of the Speeding Spears,
the big gashes he set will have your brain Dripping from Ears,
The Beast is Here be Really Prepare to be burried alive in the Pit of Despair,
back riddled with gashes from too much back packing the World on his Shoulders,
Born to Conquer He sits calmly over an Avalange of Boulders,
Preared for your Down Soldiers to be Crushed and Smoldered,
wondering deep in the enchanting forest roaming the nights are Colder,
denounced civilization and borders from here on the only way he Go is Further,

Now, for those who didn't click the link, Jeso's pic is a powerfully harsh/sad SCARRED WHIPPED BACK OF A BLACK MALE (NOT african amerian, right? Cuz they are all Americans now no matter how many 1619-1861 ETC.... you know so like and certainly NOT "N*****"? As this Alias not logfging on HOL atm because right Urban? Right Murda? Rican [edit* hispanic likely]? Aero..jesus muff...hush half amen half etcc w.e.,,,so liek yeah...As a HUGE BACKER Of MR. MLK who judges by content of character...jesus ZELPH KEP TTHE WHOLE EXPLAIN in the NBL first week (THANK YOU PIG ZUO HALLLF AND HATE YOU FUCK YOU FOREVER NICE MODDING PRIVVIES? on the OTHER 50% in the onlllly reaaaaaal love/hate dynamic right?)

As Blue, Lars, Wordz, and all etc know It's mostly respect AND BRAGGIGN on their lame overrate generic OK here:

I Love Buddha truthfully but we got a 6-1 JOB here right Frank?,,,Ironically with a CALM ONE LINE vote-complain from Mr. Jeso Anomoly Freak here who contested calmly disagreed and wrote to a differnt pic? lol yeah

FRANK mr. MODERN MOD of NEW AOWL SHIT WITH A UNICORN VOTE HERE
ARrrrguably so important for history and for spammy pharaohs meta development?:
right Brock Les? Right Blanco Bish? Right @campbell and 1 or 2 others i forgot tagging STILL TAGGING LESS THAN SPAMMY FRANK lol

Originally Posted by Frank

Unborn Buddah...
You have an advanced generic style. You write generically so specifically. Doesn't matter what the topic is, the content doesn't differentiate much from one piece to the next. You have a limited scope and a broad vision. Meaning you have the third eye, but it's narrowly fixated. Your writing suffers from inflexibility. You need to work on writing less ambiguously and practice on embodiment of full on topic immersion. I find you super dope, superficially speaking. You've adapted to my rendition, and your momentum is improving as well as your pitch perfect syllable placement. I would like to see you stray from your comfort zone and individualize your efforts more. I know you were mimicking Jesodist, but you have similar styles, so the uncanny style play isn't so noticeable. Solid, but uninspired. Suggest topics and pictures, because I would be interested in seeing if the topics and pictures suggested, suggest you are too enveloped in a certain theme, and that perhaps you need to be tested with more diverse topics that require a less all encompassing approach. Your writing will always stand out as academic, but in order to truly transcend to the next level of topical writing you should become more versatile.

Jesodist...
Heavy shit. Writing is supremely savage to me. It screams torment and destruction. Just vintage carnage. Your writers voice is slowly becoming top 10 distinctive on Netcees. Unduplicatable. Originally dated. Fresh in the sense: NOBODY writes like this anymore. It's EZ board OG-like. Circa AOL Chatroom. It's like you time traveled into this futuristic league from the olden days, and your finding out your style is no longer what's in. Back in the day this style was considered the standard. Lots of quotables in this. It was difficult to trudge through in a grueling manner. Content was heavy. I think people are too caught up in capitalization, and let that dictate their votes too heavily. I will say this, you don't seem to have a true template for your capitals. They are all over the place, which suggests to the reader that you are not in control of a style that is already distracting enough. If you went back and tactically capitalized letters with clearer intention this piece would've read cleaner. Beginning sentences with non capital letters here and there, then capitalizing non rhymes and ends of the schemes, there has to be more method to the madness. Coherency in the chaos.

This was close because Unbornbuddah came much more polished. But content wise, aside from the visual blunder, Jesodist over powered UnbornBuddah. His writing also accurately embodied the picture more satisfyingly.

MVGT Jesodist
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