10-24-2021, 11:48 AM | #1 |
obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599678 |
kudzu
i feel like an addict.
i whispered.. as i fell asleep by myself waking up in shivers and 0 responses to my pleading for help i'm normal, i'm honest sitting beside a 2 week headache and a toilet of vomit telling my tylenol i'll be back before dawn. another broken statement soaking in promise my minds a loitering bomb, the hopeless subconscious my most genuine curse is never being sorely immodest you make me trust, and make me love you. wrap your arms around my kudzu my battle armor cast in blood, the vagabond of listless lust you're the art of war to my sun tzu dragging on, my past is gone. just catacomb the ambiance grabbing on to massive oars to run across the transient summers dawn is halcyon. a cup of coffee. allocate the demitasse, and pillow talk your champion touching softly. rugged often, my flesh peels off when i'm around you. come with trigger warnings, and oxytocin purple-flavored dulcet moans, coach your climax until you're gone we left our mantras and conscious open erotica, the constant dosage our jupiter's and venus forged carbon copy, and common stories almost called derogatory hear the demons speaking for me we want peace, and peace and glory but what brought peace is knowing thieves only steal things worth hoarding the mana source. the chakra pouring muladhara. i want more kehlani to your body. roar growling and the sounds explored you look good on paper, and good in person my only failure is mine alone. flushing out the ill-behavior. to amputate and cut off the source. this faucet drain pumps blood no more it's just stained |
11-03-2021, 11:21 PM | #2 |
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,962
Battle Record: 6 - 14
Rep Power: 0 |
I thought the first two stanzas were pretty dope bb. Good rhymes and rhythm and content.
Nothing's wrong with the third, just not as dope. Second's the best. I'll wait for the day when you break the mold with a "different" kind of piece. But you're pretty good at these. |
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