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Old 04-14-2016, 05:38 PM   #1
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Default Week 7: Adonis vs Echo (ADONIS WINS BY NOSHOW)


Season 6


Verses are due SUNDAY 4/17 11:59 PST

Voting ends TUESDAY 4/19 11:59 PST

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Topic: Back to Living Again


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Old 04-15-2016, 08:11 AM   #2
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I’ve had enough loss through the years
And this memoir is sordid but clear
Memory shot, happily inebriated
Insulated. A close knit group
Acts alike, checkered past
The fact of life is hope you last
Don’t collapse; fold or pass
Hold the line, conceal the base
Don’t just chase the dragon,
Take a taste.
Be captivating, Picture perfect
Shake the photo, quickly, un-blur it
Admire the writings on the wall
“Fucking Cursive”
Wadding in the wind
Radiant, ever glades being poached and trimmed.
Smoke out… Don’t vent
Cope with opiates
Take a toke and hold it in
*choke*choke*
Exhale the evidence

ALL ABOARD!


Captain Vessel
Don’t sink the bow,
Stand up stern and drink your doubts
Float away in that raft of yours
Sip courage until you take BAC control
Steer clear of the powdered sand
Pristine beaches on lovely land
They lack the tracks, a simple scar that maps it out
Connect the dots and take the route
“X” marks the spot, now take a bow
Standing ovation, Applause in Awe
You spent over half your life in overdose
So I figured you’d fit right in-
In Comatose











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Old 04-15-2016, 08:15 AM   #3
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Old 04-18-2016, 09:35 PM   #4
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you're down a vote if you post now bud, what happened with your life? Necees is the most important thing of all, you're fucking up right now
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