Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Forum > Open Mic Section > Audio

User Tag List

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 07-21-2022, 01:13 PM   #1
CursewerdZ
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18




Rep Power: 0
CursewerdZ is an unknown quantity at this point
Default Just some tracks for ya

Check out CursewerdZ on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/BMQ2L
CursewerdZ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2022, 02:15 PM   #2
Sharp
HE / HIM / FRAC
 
Sharp's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,600
Battle Record: 56-21

Accomplishments
- 50+ Wins

Champed
- The Ultimate Writer
- NBL Cypher
- 1-2 Punch League

Rep Power: 12601534
Sharp has disabled reputation
Default

Hey bud

Best way to get feedback here is leave feed on OM pieces and link yours. Usually will get you more than just dropping a link

I know the audio section is mostly dead but the OM itself has a few recent ish pieces
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dope girl View Post
Everyone loves Sharp
Sharp is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2022, 03:37 PM   #3
CursewerdZ
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18




Rep Power: 0
CursewerdZ is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

Yeah I was planning on combing through some posts after work to reply on...

Btw...why I get kicked out of Discord? Ppl just supposed to let Bags talk down to them without saying shit back? He on some kinda pedestal or somethin? Got me fuuucked up lol
I came in chill af too and had to fight off attacks and aggressive dick pic demands lmao

Last edited by CursewerdZ; 07-21-2022 at 03:39 PM.
CursewerdZ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2022, 09:20 PM   #4
Sharp
HE / HIM / FRAC
 
Sharp's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,600
Battle Record: 56-21

Accomplishments
- 50+ Wins

Champed
- The Ultimate Writer
- NBL Cypher
- 1-2 Punch League

Rep Power: 12601534
Sharp has disabled reputation
Default

Idk. I'm in and out of conversations during the week usually. I didn't kick you and I don't think you were banned (meaning you should be able to rejoin from the same link)... Discord is just wild sometimes. Half the cord asks everyone for dick pics semi ironically and rod calls everyone every slur so it wasn't personal

I'll give these a listen soon either way
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dope girl View Post
Everyone loves Sharp
Sharp is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2022, 11:44 PM   #5
CursewerdZ
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18




Rep Power: 0
CursewerdZ is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

I tried the link a couple times lol no luck.
CursewerdZ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2022, 12:48 AM   #6
Sharp
HE / HIM / FRAC
 
Sharp's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,600
Battle Record: 56-21

Accomplishments
- 50+ Wins

Champed
- The Ultimate Writer
- NBL Cypher
- 1-2 Punch League

Rep Power: 12601534
Sharp has disabled reputation
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by CursewerdZ View Post
I tried the link a couple times lol no luck.
Weird. I just reset something, feel free to try again if you want/still have the link.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dope girl View Post
Everyone loves Sharp
Sharp is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2022, 03:30 AM   #7
Adverse
low tide in serotonin bay
 
Adverse's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,733
Battle Record: 37-28


Champed
- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

Rep Power: 15446141
Adverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant future
Default

What’s up man?

I peeped 10-96 and I liked the vibe you were going for, the beat was awesome and honestly the flow and lyrics were nice. Most of my issue was with the delivery, it just felt like it could have been delivered harder, it just feels more spoken than it was aggressive, and with the lyrical content you’re going for I think you’d benefit more from being a little more angry when you spit

My other issue is there’s no tonal change between the verses and the hook and they just kind of blend together. Which I think comes down to editing/delivery problems. The content itself was dope and I dug the flow and beat. Keep spitting man
Adverse is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2022, 10:56 AM   #8
CursewerdZ
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18




Rep Power: 0
CursewerdZ is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

Thanks for the feedback, but the vibe was something I wanted to keep throughout the song so the hooks biggest standout is the delivery style vs the 2 verses so I felt being aggressive would kill the vibe....it's a ride and smoke a blunt type vibe, plus that shit knocks hard if you got a system. I do make it a point to make each song significantly different than the last...I got some high energy aggressive shit coming soon...you'll like 5 Minute Abs whenever I get it mixed down...shit is 5 min bar out
CursewerdZ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2022, 10:58 AM   #9
CursewerdZ
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2022
Posts: 18




Rep Power: 0
CursewerdZ is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

I also tried to leave feedback on like 6 different posts but every godamn one of them removed their songs lol
CursewerdZ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-23-2023, 07:44 PM   #10
Urban Dialect
Senior Member
 
Urban Dialect's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 414




Rep Power: 3890660
Urban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant futureUrban Dialect has a brilliant future
Default

this is hot! lol
nice
Urban Dialect is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-16-2023, 12:14 AM   #11
Pharaohs Army
Banned
 
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,963
Battle Record: 6 - 14



Rep Power: 0
Pharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by CursewerdZ View Post
Check out CursewerdZ on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/BMQ2L
Hi Curse,
I've digested about 3 trax...
Based on that sample size, you have a lot of potential, my friend...I think the writing/bars are there...
All you need to do is work on your delivery a little...to make it hit HARDER...
This involves many, many practice takes, bit more inflection & change-ups....AND a little more trying to hit the snare, or be a bit more on beat...

um, your "10-96" would be a good example.
Based on those lyrics/material it SHOULD be a little more fire than it is...
Not trying to knock or diss you, I just know it can sound better...

I myself am still practicing and everything I've said to you can apply to me, of course...But as I keep practicing these are the things I've noticed about 3 of your trax....

lollll
"Sociopath" track just came on auto-play....Niiice I thought...whoever that first rapper is a littttle more on beat (and more inflection) than #2 (which may be you?))....jus keep practicin...
Ah, now "without warning" is playing...again, you did not do the writing quite justice...YET...need more energy BUT
it is admirable that you are creating... AND posting tracks, keep it up

waiting on that one you told ad about, 5 minute abs or whatever

Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 03-16-2023 at 12:30 AM.
Pharaohs Army is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-06-2023, 09:32 PM   #12
Geno
White Earl
 
Geno's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,311
Battle Record: 10-15

Accomplishments
- Open Mic HOF (4x)

Champed
- Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8

Rep Power: 50036757
Geno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to Geno
Default

Hey bro. Bags aint around on the discord we be in anymore. Idk maybe swing by.. i think this will get you into our forum. 1

https://discord.com/invite/6AhnEeZY
__________________
-A.bove T.he R.est
Geno is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:16 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2023, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2023 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+