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Old 04-16-2015, 12:53 AM   #1
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  • Verses are due Thursday, April 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 04-16-2015, 03:19 AM   #2
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Let's go 16 and squash beef fam, you down? @Allen Knight
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Old 04-16-2015, 12:26 PM   #3
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Check, an 16 is cool.
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Old 04-17-2015, 11:30 PM   #4
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u suck wit bitches - awkward when it comes to bone
So if Allen taking a girl out.. It's her comfort zone
Fkn alcoholic, wallow in sorrows cuz you assed out
Get jackdenyou'll licka shot till you pass out
I admit. he did get a girl. But I'm not the one to tattle.
She had Knight in shining armor.. cuz he ain't never fought a battle
Heard he banged a girl named November.. He was on his grind
Till 6 seconds in knight came sooner like ending daylight savings time
After the same chick? No comp here, she said no.. Told em twice
Then chose to stay at my crib over knight
We both got perfect records, but not after the votes in tonight
Cuz imma hand you ur first L like u neva smoked in ya life
This tug of war, Sharp set you up I'll kill this pussy.. Bang a kitten
But i should give you some slack..... Then fuck around and hang you with it!
I see u with a throat tat.. some boring lyrics at best
You claim Alpha? Bet. I'm in wolf mode.. Coming to take a bite out ya neck
A bullet'll leave you sitting in a wheelchair, fractured skull
You riding with ya woes... I gotta clear shot from Da grassi knoll

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Old 04-18-2015, 12:13 AM   #5
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wtf u said 16 the fuck is that 32 lines LOL
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Old 04-18-2015, 01:04 AM   #6
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im bringin an aluminum bat to ur house & knock
i'll give Mewtwo swings to the skull & leave his cranium pokin out his top
i stay beatin ur moms vag, ur a fuckin loser chump
that bitch Levitt wen my dick disappears in her pussy like a Looper jump
my fists'll destroy ur grill faggot, i'll toss ur best
after these uppercuts Lanyard jaw's gonna be hanging off ur neck
ur sluts a fat piece of shit & eatin's wreckin her bones
Cuz your Dollhouse cheeseburgers the size of fuckin replica homes
my goons ready to kidnap muthafuckas, i'll phone my zone
one Culkin make u go MIA, u wont be leaving ur fuckin Home Alone
i listen to illmatic before wars, then rip my targets flaws
talkin shit about Nozzle geta hose tapped from ur mouth to a car exhaust
ur ho's a virgin but i'll fuck her, ur to much of a coward too
shit i told that stupid whore Eucalyptus dick & then i'll de-flower you
the moment u joined NBL it crashed, i'll smoke u fast
Mutated the league w/ his wackness n transformed it from dope to trash

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Old 04-19-2015, 01:23 AM   #7
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u suck wit bitches - awkward when it comes to bone
So if Allen taking a girl out.. It's her comfort zone
okay
Fkn alcoholic, wallow in sorrows cuz you assed out
Get jackdenyou'll licka shot till you pass out
lick a shot? stretch
I admit. he did get a girl. But I'm not the one to tattle.
She had Knight in shining armor.. cuz he ain't never fought a battle
didn't connect & knight flips are beyond played
Heard he banged a girl named November.. He was on his grind
Till 6 seconds in knight came sooner like ending daylight savings time
bad wording, stupid setup
After the same chick? No comp here, she said no.. Told em twice
Then chose to stay at my crib over knight
knight flip. night flip. night flip.
We both got perfect records, but not after the votes in tonight
Cuz imma hand you ur first L like u neva smoked in ya life
k but played
This tug of war, Sharp set you up I'll kill this pussy.. Bang a kitten
But i should give you some slack..... Then fuck around and hang you with it!
no
I see u with a throat tat.. some boring lyrics at best
You claim Alpha? Bet. I'm in wolf mode.. Coming to take a bite out ya neck
Bet that he claims alpha...? not sure if AK has lyrics tattooed on his neck but i think this would work way better in a pic battle regardless
A bullet'll leave you sitting in a wheelchair, fractured skull
You riding with ya woes... I gotta clear shot from Da grassi knoll
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im bringin an aluminum bat to ur house & knock
i'll give Mewtwo swings to the skull & leave his cranium pokin out his top
nah
i stay beatin ur moms vag, ur a fuckin loser chump
that bitch Levitt wen my dick disappears in her pussy like a Looper jump
k
my fists'll destroy ur grill faggot, i'll toss ur best
after these uppercuts Lanyard jaw's gonna be hanging off ur neck
little forced but okay
ur sluts a fat piece of shit & eatin's wreckin her bones
Cuz your Dollhouse cheeseburgers the size of fuckin replica homes
lmaoo
my goons ready to kidnap muthafuckas, i'll phone my zone
one Culkin make u go MIA, u wont be leaving ur fuckin Home Alone
good
i listen to illmatic before wars, then rip my targets flaws
talkin shit about Nozzle geta hose tapped from ur mouth to a car exhaust
your love for Nas is truly admirable
ur ho's a virgin but i'll fuck her, ur to much of a coward too
shit i told that stupid whore Eucalyptus dick & then i'll de-flower you
lol word
the moment u joined NBL it crashed, i'll smoke u fast
Mutated the league w/ his wackness n transformed it from dope to trash
nah

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AK had two strong hits (Culkin, Dollhouse) one of which definitely snagged line of the battle, some okay hits and a slight miss or two- the only bad bar being Mewtwo. Mutilate had a couple bad misses, mostly stale nameflips, and questionable delivery especially in those setups. No one really came w/ personals except maybe the Alphabet one which was badly worded.

Definitely had AK taking this one w/ more creative bars and universally better execution.
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Old 04-19-2015, 08:51 AM   #8
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Meh
Ak one of the few whose consistent but the wordplay here was kinda weak but expected after reading the first verse, mutilates best attempt was the opener which we've seen many times before, I saw a armor shining knight vs AK, wow not good, bad verse Ak had dollhouse which was better than anything in verse one

AK wins easily
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Old 04-19-2015, 10:03 AM   #9
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u suck wit bitches - awkward when it comes to bone
So if Allen taking a girl out.. It's her comfort zone
not bad
Fkn alcoholic, wallow in sorrows cuz you assed out
Get jackdenyou'll licka shot till you pass out
ok idea but kinda convoluted delivery
I admit. he did get a girl. But I'm not the one to tattle.
She had Knight in shining armor.. cuz he ain't never fought a battle
played
Heard he banged a girl named November.. He was on his grind
Till 6 seconds in knight came sooner like ending daylight savings time
better but still played
After the same chick? No comp here, she said no.. Told em twice
Then chose to stay at my crib over knight
I know it's played but I like this flip. the problem with this is that it's after 2 other knight flips
We both got perfect records, but not after the votes in tonight
Cuz imma hand you ur first L like u neva smoked in ya life
good wording but played
This tug of war, Sharp set you up I'll kill this pussy.. Bang a kitten
But i should give you some slack..... Then fuck around and hang you with it!
not feeling as much
I see u with a throat tat.. some boring lyrics at best
You claim Alpha? Bet. I'm in wolf mode.. Coming to take a bite out ya neck
okay but more swagging than a punch. would be cool in a flex verse but meh here
A bullet'll leave you sitting in a wheelchair, fractured skull
You riding with ya woes... I gotta clear shot from Da grassi knoll
kinda stretched


im bringin an aluminum bat to ur house & knock
i'll give Mewtwo swings to the skull & leave his cranium pokin out his top
ok
i stay beatin ur moms vag, ur a fuckin loser chump
that bitch Levitt wen my dick disappears in her pussy like a Looper jump
not feeling the levitt/loveit
my fists'll destroy ur grill faggot, i'll toss ur best
after these uppercuts Lanyard jaw's gonna be hanging off ur neck
solid
ur sluts a fat piece of shit & eatin's wreckin her bones
Cuz your Dollhouse cheeseburgers the size of fuckin replica homes
nice
my goons ready to kidnap muthafuckas, i'll phone my zone
one Culkin make u go MIA, u wont be leaving ur fuckin Home Alone
nice
i listen to illmatic before wars, then rip my targets flaws
talkin shit about Nozzle geta hose tapped from ur mouth to a car exhaust
ok
ur ho's a virgin but i'll fuck her, ur to much of a coward too
shit i told that stupid whore Eucalyptus dick & then i'll de-flower you
kind of works, nothing major tho
the moment u joined NBL it crashed, i'll smoke u fast
Mutated the league w/ his wackness n transformed it from dope to trash
ok but not feeling the wordplay



cool tbh, shame mutilate had those 3 knight bars that were played otherwise it coulda been closer but I got allen comfortably

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Old 04-20-2015, 05:43 PM   #10
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Ak was consistent. dollhouse was lolz. wasn't feeling as much from mutilate, those name lines are mad played. Alright verses though

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Old 04-20-2015, 09:03 PM   #11
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Mutilate had the opener it was ok worded nic but your shit was to basic just gotta try and drop a bit more complex, like if your battling a dude whos been around forever dont use the first nameplays u can think of. Did u think knight in shining armor was not gonna be used before. Ak came decent more than enough for the win liked the levitt and dollhouse shit


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