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08-25-2014, 04:27 AM | #3 |
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target merged. pounded so hard it hurts to fart or burp
cuz the way dudes get up in Antacid prolly cause heartburn most of us have a WCW, his crushes are sweaty and larger we all know they give DDP. he just calls them wrestling partners cant see him goin hard on a beat since he sucks with keys if anyone throwing hands up while Hearing Def, they must be talk is cheap. u can drop a CD and call it a hot release Brochure it is, and you couldn't even give out a copy for free 15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks 10 lines @Defiant your turn Last edited by jilti; 08-29-2014 at 12:09 PM. |
08-28-2014, 06:45 AM | #4 |
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I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it Your girl is using u, the facts she so beyond grim if u see jilt on his big day, it's trolling n she won't actually marry him You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change If you're with people rest assured it's all dicks He's even the 'Linchpin' of a social group, it's his plan of attack to rape several chicks Ima crush u faggot, I wanna see u fret n plea prick if u Harbour any ill thoughts,il throw u in 1 before u think of getting sea sick Last edited by Defiant; 08-28-2014 at 06:57 AM. |
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opener was nice. def like the wp Rofl @DDP..that shit leaned me hearing def was abv avf Brochure was nice closer was eh DEFIANT opener was ok trolling... nah Noteworthy LOTB linchpin..nah closer..ok v/jilti consistency
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Def had linchpin n note worthy.
Jill had brochure, ddp, indy Close but jill was smoother in his wording plus funnier. Good showing from both. V jill |
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15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats
you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks vs I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change jilti had lotb. misses mostly due to originality of flipped concept and laziness of the np's. def edged this out with more consistency. mvgt defiant |
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10-29-2014, 05:53 PM | #11 |
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target merged. pounded so hard it hurts to fart or burp
cuz the way dudes get up in Antacid prolly cause heartburn ok most of us have a WCW, his crushes are sweaty and larger we all know they give DDP. he just calls them wrestling partners ok cant see him goin hard on a beat since he sucks with keys if anyone throwing hands up while Hearing Def, they must be noooo played talk is cheap. u can drop a CD and call it a hot release Brochure it is, and you couldn't even give out a copy for free clever 15-15 in battles? face facts, its not Hall of Fame stats you'll never get Indy,500 Records are only good on race tracks ok I make this battle interesting, dude u ain't dreaming shit So watch what I bring to the table, cause you'll be the one fucking cleaning it alright Your girl is using u, the facts she so beyond grim if u see jilt on his big day, it's trolling n she won't actually marry him eh You're posts are embarrassing, watch as I'm negging from range So far from being noteworthy here, he's on his hands n knees begging for change took me a sec cause note isn't american lingo but this totally works If you're with people rest assured it's all dicks He's even the 'Linchpin' of a social group, it's his plan of attack to rape several chicks ok Ima crush u faggot, I wanna see u fret n plea prick if u Harbour any ill thoughts,il throw u in 1 before u think of getting sea sick not feeling good battle, thought it was close but jilti edged it on consistency v/jilti |
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jilti: I didn't like using Defiant to become Ant, but that was a clever line. The DDP line was terribly played, as are almost all 1990s/2000s wrestling lines you can imagine. "Hearing Def" was weak wording and an obvious concept. But "Brochure" was new to me, and the closer was pretty solid.
Defiant: Your wording was uncharacteristically sloppy here, particularly on the wedding line. The cleaning the table concept was lame for a Latino punch. "Noteworthy" was OK, sort of like "Brochure" in that I'm not sure I've heard it and not sure why it wouldn't have been used before. The linchpin line didn't work to me because lynchings are murders, not rapes. But the last line was the worst, ridiculously played and a bad way to end it. It would have taken a really good line to win there, though. Vote: jilti
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