11-01-2014, 08:45 AM | #1 |
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fresh vs. Persist [Persist Wins]
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11-01-2014, 06:09 PM | #2 |
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11-02-2014, 01:21 AM | #3 |
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Catch Fresh infront of his man, my gun drawn ready to bust ya'll
Leave you fallin back into ya niggas arms.. My bullets givin out trust falls |
11-02-2014, 08:41 AM | #4 |
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11-02-2014, 03:35 PM | #6 |
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Persist coulda worded the second line a lil better but still had a more effective punch than fresh
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11-02-2014, 04:05 PM | #7 |
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i got persist winning but tbh fresh should have won this
using ...and laugh fucked his bar up i enjoyed his concept more but his wording in the second line backfired mvgt persisr @BROKE LESNAR @Defiant im voting on this for my 4 links in the ba, i'll check again but i think I voted on everything there |
11-03-2014, 06:16 PM | #8 |
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This is one of the better bars I've seen from persist, actually not bad- fresh you slacked here.
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11-03-2014, 11:12 PM | #9 |
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Fresh wording dragged the impact while persist kept it tight and it hit... I got P on the w with better impact tho fresh had a cool concept
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11-03-2014, 11:13 PM | #10 |
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wasn't feeling freshes bar.. felt the execution was too wordy and the concept was old. Persist had a pretty dope line that could have used a harder hitting execution. Seen a similar bar done by Orc (I think it was) in RB during the gauntlet that crushed this one but it was cool nonetheless. Fresh would have had to come hard to top it but couldn't pull it off.
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11-04-2014, 12:14 AM | #11 |
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I've seen a couple trust fall concepts but this one def was nicely done, Fresh seemed like he didn't put much into his bar imo ..v/Persist
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11-04-2014, 12:41 PM | #12 |
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was pretty dope. reminded me of a sho bar |
11-04-2014, 01:11 PM | #13 |
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The and laugh pause in freshest bar threw me off here. I like what he was going for but that took all sting away. Persists bar was decent I've seen a few trust fall bars but this approach was different. Over persist had the smoother hitting bar
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11-04-2014, 01:32 PM | #14 |
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Fresh bar was crazyyyyyyyyy stretched. Fresh tried to hit him with the 1-2, 3, 4, and 5.
Anyways, Fresh bar was way to wordy which took away from the impact. Persist bar was ok at best. Not a fan of "Gun Bars" cause they're corny to me considering they are just false threats but it was a cool concept executed pretty smoothly. v/Pers |
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