08-16-2018, 06:31 AM | #1 |
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I am the greatest writer, writing Homer's Odessy I write wholesome and solemnly, I have a cultural following I am Jesus Christ's disciple, with a soul that's promising I have Solomon's wisdom, I am certain in schism I am burning with wisdom, my birth was the birth of a christian Learn in a mission, about the ministry of the Gospel I have philosophical genius, that could rival Aristotle I am Ossiris as author, with the pride of a father I am a soul to a philosopher, when my writing is pondered I have the armor of God, my bible is my sword to conquer facade's For I will always write for his name, and honor the rod Karma is blocked, by my spirit and purity I will always believe in God, that is for certainty |
08-16-2018, 10:33 AM | #2 |
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Let's feed some pieces before posting front page piece #7.
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08-16-2018, 10:43 AM | #3 |
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comparing yourself to these hollow, deified caricatures will get tiring after a while.
stating in no uncertain terms that you are a philosophical genius or that you're the greatest writer while showcasing neither is not a strong persuasive strategy. subject matter is not entirely interesting because of this point alone. Cakebrah also has a great point. i'm not going to enforce any kind of feedback link rule for you obv cause thats not what we do here. but don't abuse it and spam all of your verses in a week without offering commentary of your own, its just uncool.
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