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Old 08-16-2018, 03:17 PM   #1
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Meanwhile in my Subconscious:

A Quark for every choice and non choice at the same time in superposition,
only this time line designs time of confined mind to the prison of it's decision.
The apex of technology, the start of Oneirounatical neuroscience emerged
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this is just a journal for my next novel. I know it did not rhyme. Thanks guys.
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Old 08-16-2018, 03:23 PM   #2
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This is basically a rough draft of an idea I had for my next novel that I am writing. I needed to store it here, so I didn't forget it lol.

Shoutouts to Zytorg and Zimdar.
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I want more of this. And would like to read your previous works @veritas
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Old 08-20-2018, 09:22 AM   #4
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The apex of technology, the start of Oneirounatical neuroscience emerged
the poor were oblivious, while the rich took advantage and splurged.
Imagine if you could record every dream you ever had and study it?
Imagine if every dream was really another universe waiting on you to discover it?

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Old 08-24-2018, 12:10 AM   #5
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this was pretty cool. I don't know what oneinuerotical means and i'm not googling it but the multiple universe line was hawt.
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I think it's a few things combined? Idk lol, it read dope so don't care yo.
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