A believer

Dragon · 08-16-2018, 06:31 AM

Ultimate rhymer, fulfilling goals and prophecy
I am the greatest writer, writing Homer's Odessy
I write wholesome and solemnly, I have a cultural following
I am Jesus Christ's disciple, with a soul that's promising
I have Solomon's wisdom, I am certain in schism
I am burning with wisdom, my birth was the birth of a christian
Learn in a mission, about the ministry of the Gospel
I have philosophical genius, that could rival Aristotle
I am Ossiris as author, with the pride of a father
I am a soul to a philosopher, when my writing is pondered
I have the armor of God, my bible is my sword to conquer facade's
For I will always write for his name, and honor the rod
Karma is blocked, by my spirit and purity
I will always believe in God, that is for certainty

PancakeBrah · 08-16-2018, 10:33 AM

Let's feed some pieces before posting front page piece #7.

dead man · 08-16-2018, 10:43 AM

comparing yourself to these hollow, deified caricatures will get tiring after a while.

stating in no uncertain terms that you are a philosophical genius or that you're the greatest writer while showcasing neither is not a strong persuasive strategy.

subject matter is not entirely interesting because of this point alone.

Cakebrah also has a great point. i'm not going to enforce any kind of feedback link rule for you obv cause thats not what we do here. but don't abuse it and spam all of your verses in a week without offering commentary of your own, its just uncool.

08-16-2018, 06:31 AM	#1
Dragon Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 83 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	A believer Ultimate rhymer, fulfilling goals and prophecy I am the greatest writer, writing Homer's Odessy I write wholesome and solemnly, I have a cultural following I am Jesus Christ's disciple, with a soul that's promising I have Solomon's wisdom, I am certain in schism I am burning with wisdom, my birth was the birth of a christian Learn in a mission, about the ministry of the Gospel I have philosophical genius, that could rival Aristotle I am Ossiris as author, with the pride of a father I am a soul to a philosopher, when my writing is pondered I have the armor of God, my bible is my sword to conquer facade's For I will always write for his name, and honor the rod Karma is blocked, by my spirit and purity I will always believe in God, that is for certainty

08-16-2018, 10:33 AM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Let's feed some pieces before posting front page piece #7. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

08-16-2018, 10:43 AM	#3
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,465 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	comparing yourself to these hollow, deified caricatures will get tiring after a while. stating in no uncertain terms that you are a philosophical genius or that you're the greatest writer while showcasing neither is not a strong persuasive strategy. subject matter is not entirely interesting because of this point alone. Cakebrah also has a great point. i'm not going to enforce any kind of feedback link rule for you obv cause thats not what we do here. but don't abuse it and spam all of your verses in a week without offering commentary of your own, its just uncool. __________________ Zack Wicks for president