08-13-2018, 12:50 PM | #1 |
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LIGHTNING ROUND: BodySnatcher (5-3) vs. Ryno (1-2) - BS WINS
LIGHTNING ROUND!!!
- Battle is set now! - Punches Due ASAP! - Voting will end tonight - Battles will be closed tonight SAME 1-2 PUNCH RULES APPLY! @BodySnatcher @Ryno |
08-13-2018, 01:41 PM | #2 |
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gamble w/ ya life ill leave ya split, odds r im preparin' to sleight the clip
if im puttin' money on snatch, its to have my homies leave'em drilled like a bitch Last edited by Ryno; 08-13-2018 at 02:49 PM. |
08-13-2018, 02:22 PM | #3 |
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U gotta Ace in the hole? Bro ur gunless & ur files have always been very clean Dumping? If Ryno ever squeezed shit, I bet it would look like a Jim Carrey scene |
08-13-2018, 05:52 PM | #4 |
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Ryno was ok here, after reading it a couple times, just seemed like he was trying to do too much here.
BS dropped a funny line here and landed pretty well. Voting for BS |
08-13-2018, 06:14 PM | #5 |
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Thought Ryno was going to go a different way with it after I read the setup, thought it had potential but wasn't feeling the punch.
Body had a pretty funny line, enjoyed his more. v/ BS |
08-13-2018, 06:29 PM | #6 |
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Ryno - cool nameflip that I haven’t seen on him yet it’s a bit predictable. Was still worded pretty good and had enough impact to hit.
Body - the line itself is cool but tbh I’m not feelin the whole gif scheme in order to explain your punch. I think that hurt you here. Vote Ryno |
08-13-2018, 07:28 PM | #7 |
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I thought both were pretty cool...I like Ryno's name play but thought Body's 2nd line was nice enough to seal the deal for me. (Lol @ the Jim gif)
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08-13-2018, 07:29 PM | #8 |
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U gotta Ace in the hole? Bro ur gunless & ur files have always been very clean
Dumping? If Ryno ever squeezed shit, I bet it would look like a Jim Carrey scene Lol this line was funny as hell...I didn't really like the bar overall, but I must admit it was funny. Ryno setup was pretty cool, but he didn't finish off the punch right. Line itself was decent, but overall I have to give this one to Body. V-Body
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08-13-2018, 08:12 PM | #9 |
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Ryno got this... body’s Bar was nice but ryno came with the name play which is more personal hitting.
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08-13-2018, 09:15 PM | #10 |
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7-2 BodySnatcher
Needs more votes. @Destroyer @Chyeahhh!!! @Dynomight @Useless @Witty @Flow @Jabari Black @Blue Bayou @Viper @Twodrop Last edited by For Battling; 08-14-2018 at 04:45 AM. |
08-13-2018, 09:27 PM | #11 |
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BS got it, he had the funnier punch...Ryno was ok, but the np was a bit weak.
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08-13-2018, 10:31 PM | #12 |
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Lol rhyno I like the concept. Funny np. The wording wasn’t bad but the phrase ‘to have my homie leave him drilled like a bitch’ was a bit flat. This also coulda benefited from a better/more tie ins.
Body I think your punch was even funnier. Good concept. Execution was pretty good. Only critique is the execution was lazy. It woulda took a while to get if I didn’t have a gif. I do think the concept carried you though. You didn’t enough to squeak by with he win but not by much cus Rhyno was on ya ass. Rhyno I see you bruh. Been having good punches but you’ve just been put in front of better competition. Mvgt Body |
08-13-2018, 11:58 PM | #13 |
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Ryno was ok
But goneeeeee @ body's punch. The ace tie in coulda been better but that's nitpicking V. Bs |
08-14-2018, 04:45 AM | #14 |
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BodySnatcher Wins 7-2
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