Artifice vs. Lotto Smirk - Lotto wins ( needs record updating )

Artifice · 03-25-2016, 05:45 PM

10 lines, due in 24 hours...

i'll post my two voting links with my verse if that's cool...

Artifice · 03-26-2016, 06:18 AM

http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...25&postcount=7
http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...23&postcount=8

may be a bit rusty but shit I still have to be respected
cuz once i take a stab at this ur just a casualty with tetanus
ur rep's shit... it's all over-board like wrecked ships
direct hits served u over easy like eatin' eggs for breakfast
my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse
plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth
tracin' the dirt when i slaughter u... don't doubt mine
cuz when i kill it chalk ur body of work up to a fuckin' outline
but on the real the name Lotto is naturally fitting
cuz that one in a billion shot is yours... of actually winning

Lotto Smirk · 03-26-2016, 01:58 PM

Who are you??

Ya girl Hates the holidays cus that mini dick barely treat her
Cus ya girl has to have a rabbit to please her n it reminds her of easter
u fire guns? never! just take all that stuff back
cus u ain't ballin deep that's just the technique when u be gargling nutsack
claim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery
cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history
this a game to me I love the buzz! gun'll blast no conversation
leave u w/ holes in ya body exposing bones u'll image the patient in operation
Was gna sper his life, but I'll enjoy killing this fag for the pleasure
so Art'll get marked up w/ the beam ready to go off like display security measures

Done..

Saint · 03-29-2016, 01:28 AM

Voting sucks lately.

But lotto got it, fresher concepts, last two were ok enough to get the win. artifice had some old ass shit in there lol. the best idea was the tetanus one, imo.. Only bcuz u could've tied it in better...

Habitat · 03-31-2016, 09:27 AM

Artifice
may be a bit rusty but shit I still have to be respected
cuz once i take a stab at this ur just a casualty with tetanus
-Nah bro, stab at this is old as shit
ur rep's shit... it's all over-board like wrecked ships
direct hits served u over easy like eatin' eggs for breakfast
-nah this is weird i never heard anyone say "served u over easy"
my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse
plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth
-this was nice
tracin' the dirt when i slaughter u... don't doubt mine
cuz when i kill it chalk ur body of work up to a fuckin' outline
-chalk / outline are outdated
but on the real the name Lotto is naturally fitting
cuz that one in a billion shot is yours... of actually winning
-too predictable

Lotto
Ya girl Hates the holidays cus that mini dick barely treat her
Cus ya girl has to have a rabbit to please her n it reminds her of easter
-funny but not very hard hittin
u fire guns? never! just take all that stuff back
cus u ain't ballin deep that's just the technique when u be gargling nutsack
-nah bro
claim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery
cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history
-wording is awful here
this a game to me I love the buzz! gun'll blast no conversation
leave u w/ holes in ya body exposing bones u'll image the patient in operation
-ehh i guess this is ok
Was gna sper his life, but I'll enjoy killing this fag for the pleasure
so Art'll get marked up w/ the beam ready to go off like display security measures
-didn't like this

I have one nice hit to 2 okish hits

Gotta go with the nice hit which was Artifice. That face of the earth bar was LOTB

v/art

Schadenfreude · 03-31-2016, 03:50 PM

An aight battle, Art had a lot of dated concepts, the only bar that hit was the tetanus opener, the rest have been flip better before. I've battle Smirk 2 or 3 times, so I understan that it's hard to come up w/ fresh material, but still. As for Lotto, not your usual standard, but good enough to eck out a victory - the 'artifact' line & your opener were suffient, so LOTTO SMIRK wins, imo.

Joe Boston · 04-01-2016, 10:15 PM

Really nothing too quotable from Art here lots of basic concepts nothing that really stood out from a creative standpoint. Lotto took this easily creative nameplays humor factor and just overall better content. The opener was funny af.

V/Lotto

Sorry on phone cant do full breakdown

Adverse · 04-03-2016, 04:33 PM

Lotto had a lot of cool concepts but none really hit for me, and Art got the line of the battle with the whole 'Wipe Smirk off the face of the earth' in my opinion that's what the battle came down to, and in my opinion that made the difference here. So i'm going to vote for him. if you guys need anything explained hit me up.

Vote - Art

SMaSH · 04-07-2016, 09:57 PM

my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse
plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth

Vs

laim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery
cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history

Those were the standout bars from both. I was feeling lotto verse a bit more than art. That smirk line was decent but I feel like lotto had better attempts and less misses.

Vote lotto smirk

AzazelDaBeast · 04-11-2016, 11:02 AM

Pretty Good Battle,

Art - Decent Verse, Didn't really felt the Punches cos some of them were Played, That First Punch was Pretty Solid though & that Smirk off the earth Flip was Nice as well, Other Bars could've had an Impact but damn I've seen those "Over board, Body/Outline" Concepts many time.

Lotto - Nice Drop, I kinda liked your shit Cos it was Creative & you were more consistent, Fresh concepts overall, Some of them could've been more Polished though.

Overall, Winner got this with Creative & Fresh Concepts & well executed Punches while loser had Played concepts but also had few solid Jabs tho. No hate.

Lotto Smirk GMFV.

03-25-2016, 05:45 PM	#1
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944945	Artifice vs. Lotto Smirk - Lotto wins ( needs record updating ) 10 lines, due in 24 hours... i'll post my two voting links with my verse if that's cool...

03-26-2016, 01:58 PM	#3
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665829	Who are you?? Ya girl Hates the holidays cus that mini dick barely treat her Cus ya girl has to have a rabbit to please her n it reminds her of easter u fire guns? never! just take all that stuff back cus u ain't ballin deep that's just the technique when u be gargling nutsack claim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history this a game to me I love the buzz! gun'll blast no conversation leave u w/ holes in ya body exposing bones u'll image the patient in operation Was gna sper his life, but I'll enjoy killing this fag for the pleasure so Art'll get marked up w/ the beam ready to go off like display security measures Done.. Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 03-26-2016 at 02:20 PM.

03-26-2016, 06:18 AM	#2
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944945	http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...25&postcount=7 http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...23&postcount=8 may be a bit rusty but shit I still have to be respected cuz once i take a stab at this ur just a casualty with tetanus ur rep's shit... it's all over-board like wrecked ships direct hits served u over easy like eatin' eggs for breakfast my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth tracin' the dirt when i slaughter u... don't doubt mine cuz when i kill it chalk ur body of work up to a fuckin' outline but on the real the name Lotto is naturally fitting cuz that one in a billion shot is yours... of actually winning

03-29-2016, 01:28 AM	#4
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,209 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	Voting sucks lately. But lotto got it, fresher concepts, last two were ok enough to get the win. artifice had some old ass shit in there lol. the best idea was the tetanus one, imo.. Only bcuz u could've tied it in better...

03-31-2016, 09:27 AM	#5
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519558	Artifice may be a bit rusty but shit I still have to be respected cuz once i take a stab at this ur just a casualty with tetanus -Nah bro, stab at this is old as shit ur rep's shit... it's all over-board like wrecked ships direct hits served u over easy like eatin' eggs for breakfast -nah this is weird i never heard anyone say "served u over easy" my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth -this was nice tracin' the dirt when i slaughter u... don't doubt mine cuz when i kill it chalk ur body of work up to a fuckin' outline -chalk / outline are outdated but on the real the name Lotto is naturally fitting cuz that one in a billion shot is yours... of actually winning -too predictable Lotto Ya girl Hates the holidays cus that mini dick barely treat her Cus ya girl has to have a rabbit to please her n it reminds her of easter -funny but not very hard hittin u fire guns? never! just take all that stuff back cus u ain't ballin deep that's just the technique when u be gargling nutsack -nah bro claim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history -wording is awful here this a game to me I love the buzz! gun'll blast no conversation leave u w/ holes in ya body exposing bones u'll image the patient in operation -ehh i guess this is ok Was gna sper his life, but I'll enjoy killing this fag for the pleasure so Art'll get marked up w/ the beam ready to go off like display security measures -didn't like this I have one nice hit to 2 okish hits Gotta go with the nice hit which was Artifice. That face of the earth bar was LOTB v/art

03-31-2016, 03:50 PM	#6
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	An aight battle, Art had a lot of dated concepts, the only bar that hit was the tetanus opener, the rest have been flip better before. I've battle Smirk 2 or 3 times, so I understan that it's hard to come up w/ fresh material, but still. As for Lotto, not your usual standard, but good enough to eck out a victory - the 'artifact' line & your opener were suffient, so LOTTO SMIRK wins, imo.

04-01-2016, 10:15 PM	#7
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	Really nothing too quotable from Art here lots of basic concepts nothing that really stood out from a creative standpoint. Lotto took this easily creative nameplays humor factor and just overall better content. The opener was funny af. V/Lotto Sorry on phone cant do full breakdown

04-03-2016, 04:33 PM	#8
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,739 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446142	Lotto had a lot of cool concepts but none really hit for me, and Art got the line of the battle with the whole 'Wipe Smirk off the face of the earth' in my opinion that's what the battle came down to, and in my opinion that made the difference here. So i'm going to vote for him. if you guys need anything explained hit me up. Vote - Art

04-07-2016, 09:57 PM	#9
SMaSH Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2016 Posts: 138 Battle Record: 4-7 Rep Power: 3284962	my shit's deep, i'll ground u six feet layin' this verse plus i'm pleased to wipe this Smirk off the face of the earth Vs laim u a vet but'll never reach HOF u lack more than delivery cus artifact ur punches are old so please stop searching n digging up history Those were the standout bars from both. I was feeling lotto verse a bit more than art. That smirk line was decent but I feel like lotto had better attempts and less misses. Vote lotto smirk

04-11-2016, 11:02 AM	#10
AzazelDaBeast Unknown Beast Join Date: Apr 2016 Location: Alpha century Posts: 5 Rep Power: 0	Pretty Good Battle, Art - Decent Verse, Didn't really felt the Punches cos some of them were Played, That First Punch was Pretty Solid though & that Smirk off the earth Flip was Nice as well, Other Bars could've had an Impact but damn I've seen those "Over board, Body/Outline" Concepts many time. Lotto - Nice Drop, I kinda liked your shit Cos it was Creative & you were more consistent, Fresh concepts overall, Some of them could've been more Polished though. Overall, Winner got this with Creative & Fresh Concepts & well executed Punches while loser had Played concepts but also had few solid Jabs tho. No hate. Lotto Smirk GMFV.