PORTAL

dead man · 09-06-2020, 01:09 AM

corpus callosum
bonded close like swords in a stone
velour black sorcerer robe. lounging in a forest of locusts
snap apart your cartilage and cortical bone
judo chopping plates in half like portion control
bored of this whole shit. still the portal is open
draw me in like charcoal bricks and portraiture poses
lord of the snow, mongol warrior swap fortune for blood
axe inside his temple and a fork in his tongue
smoky lung. king cobra clutch when our endorphins are rusty
i guess keeping it in check wasn't important enough
we threw our paper money into corporate corruption
invested all our organelles in mortgage and trusts
chemic instability, deplorable function
when getting out of bed requires a poisonous drug
you know you're fucked.

dm

Geno · 09-07-2020, 11:42 PM

Dope flex..
Soon as you said black velour sorcerer robes i knew this shit was gonna be amaxing lmao.

Dope dm

dead man · 09-12-2020, 09:52 PM

lets do something white earl

oats · 09-13-2020, 12:46 AM

I like it. Not sure if the King Cobra refereed to the snake of the malt but I dig it either way. Also I recently read a book of poetry called The Autobiography of Death (Kim Hyesoon) that I think you’d enjoy.

dead man · 09-13-2020, 01:03 AM

thanks for the rec man. i'll search it up.

Sinacog · 09-13-2020, 01:49 AM

I thought this was a good written, Dead Man. I truly enjoyed this work. I truly enjoyed this work. It was very good. Nice one.

09-06-2020, 01:09 AM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,465 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	PORTAL corpus callosum bonded close like swords in a stone velour black sorcerer robe. lounging in a forest of locusts snap apart your cartilage and cortical bone judo chopping plates in half like portion control bored of this whole shit. still the portal is open draw me in like charcoal bricks and portraiture poses lord of the snow, mongol warrior swap fortune for blood axe inside his temple and a fork in his tongue smoky lung. king cobra clutch when our endorphins are rusty i guess keeping it in check wasn't important enough we threw our paper money into corporate corruption invested all our organelles in mortgage and trusts chemic instability, deplorable function when getting out of bed requires a poisonous drug you know you're fucked. dm __________________ Zack Wicks for president

09-07-2020, 11:42 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,324 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Dope flex.. Soon as you said black velour sorcerer robes i knew this shit was gonna be amaxing lmao. Dope dm __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-12-2020, 09:52 PM	#3
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,465 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	lets do something white earl __________________ Zack Wicks for president

09-13-2020, 12:46 AM	#4
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,073 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	I like it. Not sure if the King Cobra refereed to the snake of the malt but I dig it either way. Also I recently read a book of poetry called The Autobiography of Death (Kim Hyesoon) that I think you’d enjoy. __________________ You should be water

09-13-2020, 01:03 AM	#5
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,465 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	thanks for the rec man. i'll search it up. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

09-13-2020, 01:49 AM	#6
Sinacog Satan Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,150 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129212	I thought this was a good written, Dead Man. I truly enjoyed this work. I truly enjoyed this work. It was very good. Nice one.