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Old 08-29-2020, 10:28 AM   #1
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Old 08-29-2020, 10:58 AM   #2
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you've got skills, bro.

weird death. take care to not canonize, or worst still deify, anyone, though.

all said, rip.
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Old 08-29-2020, 01:09 PM   #3
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No doubt, Eng...much respect.
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Old 08-29-2020, 01:54 PM   #4
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Old 08-29-2020, 10:56 PM   #6
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@Pharaohs Army thanks bro...for sure
@Lars It’s good to be back, fam... for however long.
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Each read leaves me more impressed than the last. This is compact af and solid throughout. Best piece I've read in while, a lot of sadness involved and sit with the feeling that it's straight from the heart. Feel free to pm if needed, take care.
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