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Old 07-11-2020, 10:18 PM   #1
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Old 07-11-2020, 10:47 PM   #2
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Old 07-12-2020, 02:44 AM   #3
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zygote is cool.. but the whole idea of having a ghost writer on a forum is totally wack so in essence I genuinely wasn't feeling this..
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Old 07-12-2020, 06:38 PM   #4
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jesus fucking christ, bro

not your finest moment

i think this ranks among the worst in your time here, actually

and you've already had some pretty bad ones, so...

edit - i did originally turn it off after 30 seconds but decided to listen all the way through and holy shit @ that mic presence

the quality is bad, the beat choice and rendition questionable

but compounded with the fact you're just reading a random guy's script off the internet, recording it and then posting it is really getting me for some reason

i don't know what i expected. sorry.

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Old 07-15-2020, 07:09 PM   #5
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jesus fucking christ, bro

not your finest moment

i think this ranks among the worst in your time here, actually

and you've already had some pretty bad ones, so...

edit - i did originally turn it off after 30 seconds but decided to listen all the way through and holy shit @ that mic presence

the quality is bad, the beat choice and rendition questionable

but compounded with the fact you're just reading a random guy's script off the internet, recording it and then posting it is really getting me for some reason

i don't know what i expected. sorry.
It was 1 take.
And for how little experience I have with recording it's NOT terrible by MY standards. Was on beat for the first 3/4ths. Did run out of breath at the end.
I know I have a lot of room for improvement. "Ranking the worst in my time here" is a little much IMO
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Old 07-16-2020, 02:10 AM   #6
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I mean I think for what this was it was a cool little homage thing and yeah your delivery was a little meh but at the same time like you said it was one take and you read it off paper, I think that reflected here and was kinda meh but I don't think it was the "worst"
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Horrendous.


Do more.
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I know your showing this to other ppl and assume you aren’t giving Zygote his writing credits



This isn’t normal
This isn’t hip hop
This isn’t cool
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I know your showing this to other ppl and assume you aren’t giving Zygote his writing credits
Wrong on your assumption. I put his name in the title and also the description I said "written by Zygote".
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I disagree that it's not hip hop. And I think the first 3/4 are Not Terrible. Somewhat okay.

But whatever. You can have your opinions.
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Aight maybe I took it the wrong way


And yea u was on beat


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yea this wasn't good

if it isn't among your worst things here please detail to me what you think was worse?
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Old 07-20-2020, 10:12 PM   #13
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yea this wasn't good

if it isn't among your worst things here please detail to me what you think was worse?
I think I've heard a spoken word of yours. How bout you post a track where you're rapping over a beat for all to hear, like I did.
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I think I've heard a spoken word of yours.
yea i was pretty good. i also wrote it.

@Pakistani Hand Cannon spits lava on the mic. holla at him if you tryna get bodied further.
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yea i was pretty good. i also wrote it.

@Pakistani Hand Cannon spits lava on the mic. holla at him if you tryna get bodied further.
I still maintain that this is Okay. Not bad.

If @Pakistani Hand Cannon wants to post a rap that's better. By all means. Please do,
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I think Ox was a little harsh on you...I'm no audio head so critique from me means nothin', thought it was aight though...def noticed you ran outta breath lol...gracias for linkin' fam.
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I'll take that as a compliment.
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Dang, Pharaoh you make a brotha wanna do an underground tape deck hiss fisher price recording high school collab. I think you potential my man in the nostaglik underground scene. Keep rocking bro!
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