08-08-2022, 11:15 PM | #1 |
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Champ Match: Dominate vs Dave - DOMINATE WINS
Netcees SOL Season II @Dominate @evaD
Week 7 Due Thursday, August 11th at Midnight PST Minimum: 10 Lines Maximum: 14 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
08-09-2022, 12:21 AM | #2 |
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G/luck man
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08-09-2022, 03:47 AM | #3 |
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G’day dommo
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08-11-2022, 10:49 AM | #5 |
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Cool cool. Lemme get an 8hr ext. Deadline is 5pm Friday for me which is a bit awkward.
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Quote:
I nicknamed your bitch cement - found her wet, put a hand in & left a lasting impression I’d never seen a wider snatch … like she allowed five guys at a time to smash Had trains run through that British tunnel. Now she spread her legs like “Mind The Gap” Pull up next to you in the whip... The crew got got 4s to unload My dogs sweeping your car - you get sent to the other side like border control Anyone I’m in a bout with, I’ll outwit. You should sense the danger & leave Bro my bars the same as your mouth is – realllll creative angles with teeth And I killed you in our last match. You can’t STILL think your writing is tight With that approach, Ima ring your bell again... At this point it’s like riding a bike Got the Uzi for your bitch ass. Trigger squeezing, heat pop Keep acting Camp David... Ima let that Middle Eastern Piece Talk
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08-12-2022, 08:59 AM | #7 |
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Dave's Verse
I’m like Rocky in a movie when the vodkas runnin through me So this Aussie boot-licker’s getting smashed without me offering a shooey If he discussing his gat we know he’s just bluffing the facts When his shit hit hardest it’s like mr marcus - fuckin nothing but cap Im rolling out in the SUV if I’m gonna be cruising with friends When This bogan ride in the Ute.. he’s been fuckin his students again.. Hot tub and spa days for Dave’s wife, it doesn’t phase you when you paid right Dom and his girl pool together too: for a McDonald’s saver menu date night So try and dress it up - you ain’t fuckin with the reaper Cinderella story: I’ll see you at midnight when things get ugly with this sweeper Im feelin like a vulture in this league, picking off these losers is tragic If Dominate circle prey from above that’s just his view from the casket RIP Dominate, Lou Carpenter, Merv Hughes, Gary Ablett & Rolf Harris |
08-12-2022, 01:22 PM | #8 |
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Good battle
Dom opener was good Cement was fire Border control was good but the setup had a typo or a error Not my fav Dave first and he usually in my top 3 to read McDonald’s and casket was cool but nothing woo,d me V dom
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08-13-2022, 05:16 AM | #9 |
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GOOD BATTLE..
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08-14-2022, 11:55 PM | #10 |
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Dominate:
Nothing but trash that ur flexin’… But I had to laugh at that mention - I nicknamed your bitch cement - found her wet, put a hand in & left a lasting impression ^ dope flip here bro I’d never seen a wider snatch … like she allowed five guys at a time to smash Had trains run through that British tunnel. Now she spread her legs like “Mind The Gap” ^ lol this was good Pull up next to you in the whip... The crew got got 4s to unload My dogs sweeping your car - you get sent to the other side like border control ^ alright here. See the concept but felt like it could use some retweaking I guess? Anyone I’m in a bout with, I’ll outwit. You should sense the danger & leave Bro my bars the same as your mouth is – realllll creative angles with teeth ^ lmao I fucked with this And I killed you in our last match. You can’t STILL think your writing is tight With that approach, Ima ring your bell again... At this point it’s like riding a bike ^ decent to me. Got the Uzi for your bitch ass. Trigger squeezing, heat pop Keep acting Camp David... Ima let that Middle Eastern Piece Talk ^ decent had to Google Dave: I’m like Rocky in a movie when the vodkas runnin through me So this Aussie boot-licker’s getting smashed without me offering a shooey ^ connection was okay but was something an American audience isn’t really going to know without googling If he discussing his gat we know he’s just bluffing the facts When his shit hit hardest it’s like mr marcus - fuckin nothing but cap ^ this is one I hate to admit that I get lol I’m not sure if everyone will know though. Decent connection Im rolling out in the SUV if I’m gonna be cruising with friends When This bogan ride in the Ute.. he’s been fuckin his students again.. ^ lol alright decent Hot tub and spa days for Dave’s wife, it doesn’t phase you when you paid right Dom and his girl pool together too: for a McDonald’s saver menu date night ^ lol nice bro So try and dress it up - you ain’t fuckin with the reaper Cinderella story: I’ll see you at midnight when things get ugly with this sweeper ^ cool connection Im feelin like a vulture in this league, picking off these losers is tragic If Dominate circle prey from above that’s just his view from the casket ^ this was alright imo not the most vicious closer but serviceable Overall thought there was a lot of good lines exchanged here, Dave was a little more flamboyant with concepts than I thought he would be. I guess the audience could always Google the reference, but I’m not sure how they’d feel about it. Overall Dom was just cleaner and hit harder so he gets my vote V/Dom |
08-15-2022, 06:07 AM | #11 |
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Feeling this whole verse.. First 2 bars were great. Cement was dope as was mine the gap. The bad teeth/british angle gets kinda old but delivered too well not to enjoy. Everything else was decent & hit Dave I love me a Dave verse but Preferred some of your previous ones this season which is a shame as this was a champ match. U still came swinging with Cinderella story and your closer was cool too. Overall, Dom gets my vote |
08-15-2022, 09:31 AM | #12 |
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Cool battle friends .. fun read
Cement flip was dope... and I think it was smart to attack this because it was Dave's only subpar bar last week Train / tunnel was funny and delivered well The gun bars were cool concepts Lol teeth punch was a cool fresh twist on the concept Camp David is fire to me Vs Opener cool concept worded well Mr Marcus cool I'm sorry man I don't get this third Pool together lol my kind of bar... jokes Cinderella okay Closer ehh Dom took this one for me props to both
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08-15-2022, 11:30 AM | #13 |
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Dave’s intro was clever and well written, he took some risk throughout the verse and I didn’t think it paid off this time. Cinderella was cool, and closer was good but the wording in the punch felt off for me
Kind of opposite with doms verse. I wasn’t big on his opening bars, but creative angle, ringing your bell again were Heat and the closer banged Good battle. I fully expect Dave to hit the creative stride he’s become known for in the playoffs, but as for this one Vote Dom
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08-15-2022, 12:34 PM | #14 |
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Congrats Dom verse was fire start to finish especially closer
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