04-12-2013, 06:18 PM | #1 |
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Finals: ill nik-A vs Knucklehead {ill nik-A wins}
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04-12-2013, 07:13 PM | #2 |
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04-12-2013, 10:05 PM | #3 |
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don't think this one has been used
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I got 20 I can post after work
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gotta write for the league if i have time i'll do this tonight if not i'll drop tmrw
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Did yall decorate that crib? At its best seems awful cuz if u consider that art… I’m just surprised u didn’t try to change that to Netcees also my threads be raw yo, matching like a G while yall shit is just corny Lol at redheads wearing red… together yall would make a matador turn a bullfight into an orgy This kid must be horny cuz ur bitch-game is in a very upsetting state ur gir has a joker smile that would make Batman laugh at the thought of her getting raped u wanna get her a wedding cake & get away from ur usual trendy homo We all knew u had bad taste… before seeing the wolfman getting hit on by the Wendy’s logo Many know though, so bet u’re feeling like a pimp & son its true But who asks to take a pic of a pic unless u need proof that a girl actually wanted one with u Fuck this dude, u wanna be black badly but we see failures in criteria Even though ur nose tip… can help fund a retirement pension for most waiters in Nigeria No hater just familiar, if scoring’s a ‘must’ then u can start with that But forget a deodorant stick… u’ll need a tree trunk to apply it with all that chick’s armpit fat Charge, hit that! Instead u look like a virgin with his breath kept tight that chick’s wrist has a bigger twist… than any ending to another one of ur sexless nights u just cant write; I kill em with wisdom, u got the skills of a victim Last time I saw such a bad wreck… there were 2 gingers lost in Gilligan’s kitchen ill is just vicious, yall just rejects, nik’s bad to the bone with a G rep If I wear a T-shirt its usually a V neck… if ur girl doesn’t wear a T-shirt its still a V neck
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Ur starting to grey in the hair bro... & that's been killin' ur game. now Carlos thinks it weird when u drool for queers U might've only now started using Just For Men.. but u've lived by that bedroom rule for years don't deny ^ that, ur girls been denyin' pussy. she ain't calm, still.. .. & she ain't a Silver Surfer.. she just filed for divorce once you hit lvl 200 on FarmVille Srs. U old fucks needa get off social network & learn ur place crook U ain't Hit the Town in months.. but received the Key to SimCity behind ur head on Facebook Ur age is takin' a toll, u ain't GOAT nomore. get shit straight in ya head Your Chin looks like it goes back & forth more than when Hush & Chyeaah debate in a thread That neck won't help u get dates. Thinkin' u slim is horse-shit Bitch, you ain't Fly for Dinner.. but it looks like you had a few to many of them for it Ur verses ain't Breakin Bad. By my hand this Mexican is goin' to hell If this makes u retire, u'll go out w/ a bang.. shit, u're only 2 yrs from a wheelchair w/ a bell Gettin' bored w/ u '99 txtcees. Ur neck reaches ur gut with 1 hell of a keg Just got done battlin' Dynamix.. & now I'm wondering how the hell they work with ur legs Why this artifact rockin' Js. U been around to long for this hoe shit U only cop shoes everytime u Cross Jordan 'cus u didn't have any when u made the trip w/ Moses But them shits knockoffs. U ain't fresh nor nice with pens Can't be the GOAT when u cop kicks from the part of town that practices Voodoo & sacrifices them Same pose, same clothes, same scenery. U make it boring u shit-brick If this tourneys goin' Up in Smoke.. it's because the tripod & camera u got in '34 just took this pic |
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04-21-2013, 12:49 PM | #10 |
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Did yall decorate that crib? At its best seems awful
cuz if u consider that art… I’m just surprised u didn’t try to change that to Netcees also This kid must be horny cuz ur bitch-game is in a very upsetting state ur gir has a joker smile that would make Batman laugh at the thought of her getting raped Many know though, so bet u’re feeling like a pimp & son its true But who asks to take a pic of a pic unless u need proof that a girl actually wanted one with u No hater just familiar, if scoring’s a ‘must’ then u can start with that But forget a deodorant stick… u’ll need a tree trunk to apply it with all that chick’s armpit fat Charge, hit that! Instead u look like a virgin with his breath kept tight that chick’s wrist has a bigger twist… than any ending to another one of ur sexless nights u just cant write; I kill em with wisdom, u got the skills of a victim Last time I saw such a bad wreck… there were 2 gingers lost in Gilligan’s kitchen ill is just vicious, yall just rejects, nik’s bad to the bone with a G rep If I wear a T-shirt its usually a V neck… if ur girl doesn’t wear a T-shirt its still a V neck vs Ur starting to grey in the hair bro... & that's been killin' ur game. now Carlos thinks it weird when u drool for queers U might've only now started using Just For Men.. but u've lived by that bedroom rule for years don't deny ^ that, ur girls been denyin' pussy. she ain't calm, still.. .. & she ain't a Silver Surfer.. she just filed for divorce once you hit lvl 200 on FarmVille Srs. U old fucks needa get off social network & learn ur place crook U ain't Hit the Town in months.. but received the Key to SimCity behind ur head on Facebook Ur age is takin' a toll, u ain't GOAT nomore. get shit straight in ya head Your Chin looks like it goes back & forth more than when Hush & Chyeaah debate in a thread Why this artifact rockin' Js. U been around to long for this hoe shit U only cop shoes everytime u Cross Jordan 'cus u didn't have any when u made the trip w/ Moses i thought knuckle started dope, kinda fell off towards the end, the just for men line was dope, nika wa pretty consistant throughout, nearly his whole verse coulda been quoted. The v neck line was dope, its close but i think nika takes this, could go either way but this battle is probally the best ive read on this site so far vote - ill nik-a |
04-21-2013, 07:45 PM | #11 |
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Did yall decorate that crib? At its best seems awful
cuz if u consider that art… I’m just surprised u didn’t try to change that to Netcees also my threads be raw yo, matching like a G while yall shit is just corny Lol at redheads wearing red… together yall would make a matador turn a bullfight into an orgy This kid must be horny cuz ur bitch-game is in a very upsetting state ur gir has a joker smile that would make Batman laugh at the thought of her getting raped Many know though, so bet u’re feeling like a pimp & son its true But who asks to take a pic of a pic unless u need proof that a girl actually wanted one with u No hater just familiar, if scoring’s a ‘must’ then u can start with that But forget a deodorant stick… u’ll need a tree trunk to apply it with all that chick’s armpit fat Charge, hit that! Instead u look like a virgin with his breath kept tight that chick’s wrist has a bigger twist… than any ending to another one of ur sexless nights ill is just vicious, yall just rejects, nik’s bad to the bone with a G rep If I wear a T-shirt its usually a V neck… if ur girl doesn’t wear a T-shirt its still a V neck Ur starting to grey in the hair bro... & that's been killin' ur game. now Carlos thinks it weird when u drool for queers U might've only now started using Just For Men.. but u've lived by that bedroom rule for years don't deny ^ that, ur girls been denyin' pussy. she ain't calm, still.. .. & she ain't a Silver Surfer.. she just filed for divorce once you hit lvl 200 on FarmVille Srs. U old fucks needa get off social network & learn ur place crook U ain't Hit the Town in months.. but received the Key to SimCity behind ur head on Facebook Ur age is takin' a toll, u ain't GOAT nomore. get shit straight in ya head Your Chin looks like it goes back & forth more than when Hush & Chyeaah debate in a thread That neck won't help u get dates. Thinkin' u slim is horse-shit Bitch, you ain't Fly for Dinner.. but it looks like you had a few to many of them for it But them shits knockoffs. U ain't fresh nor nice with pens Can't be the GOAT when u cop kicks from the part of town that practices Voodoo & sacrifices them Dope battle, I was kind of split because I felt like nika was more consistent while knuck's best hits were the hardest of the battle (just for men and chin going back and forth were slick). Re-read it and felt like nika's consistency did it for him. Think I read through this 3 times and got the impression knuck won the first time, then nika the next two, so I give the edge to nik for keeping the hits up more frequently. This one'll probably come down to preference since its more about the lolz, but nika's verse did it for me. Dope shit guys. V/ Nika |
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Did yall decorate that crib? At its best seems awful
cuz if u consider that art… I’m just surprised u didn’t try to change that to Netcees also my threads be raw yo, matching like a G while yall shit is just corny Lol at redheads wearing red… together yall would make a matador turn a bullfight into an orgy Many know though, so bet u’re feeling like a pimp & son its true But who asks to take a pic of a pic unless u need proof that a girl actually wanted one with u Charge, hit that! Instead u look like a virgin with his breath kept tight that chick’s wrist has a bigger twist… than any ending to another one of ur sexless nights vs Ur starting to grey in the hair bro... & that's been killin' ur game. now Carlos thinks it weird when u drool for queers U might've only now started using Just For Men.. but u've lived by that bedroom rule for years Ur age is takin' a toll, u ain't GOAT nomore. get shit straight in ya head Your Chin looks like it goes back & forth more than when Hush & Chyeaah debate in a thread That neck won't help u get dates. Thinkin' u slim is horse-shit Bitch, you ain't Fly for Dinner.. but it looks like you had a few to many of them for it But them shits knockoffs. U ain't fresh nor nice with pens Can't be the GOAT when u cop kicks from the part of town that practices Voodoo & sacrifices them close battle here. both had some cool shit. but I think nik went at the pic a bit better the knuck did tbh, though knuck had better concepts he just didnt execute them crisp enuff here. got both tied in quotes but v/Nik a lil more consistent in execution and pic tie ins Last edited by Utmost; 04-22-2013 at 09:54 AM. |
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alright well this was a pretty good battle. both came out swinging, Knucklehead had some awesome concepts that he really fucked up with his delivery that woulda made this a hell of a lot closer. ill-nik used the pic 10x better and missed on one or two, but absolutely was more consistent. yeah, i know flow/ structure always come second to punchlines, but it definitely didn't help Knuck's case that he was pushing 30 syllables in his punches alone. only counted them out cause they were so fucking stretched. BUT even ignoring that bit completely, nik took this with a more polished and fresher verse
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