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Old 10-14-2014, 04:33 PM   #1
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Netcees Newbie Tourney VII

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Monday,
    October 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Saturday, October 18th 2014
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
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  • Extensions are 24 hours

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Old 10-14-2014, 04:56 PM   #2
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Good luck, Jilti. It's the finals, 18?
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Old 10-14-2014, 05:02 PM   #3
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Calling out @Tic Tac
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I'll go 20, I'm not doing 30.
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Tic Tac aka Galactic aka RB's Burglar


hopes of Taking the Finals is a failing one he's making up
cuz only Testicle pass is to get to the rest of the genitalia
got dem god damn hands that land Pinpoint accurate and fast
after the attack, we'll Spot Tac on the ground like a ***tus jack match
beaten so bad wont be allowed treatment when bowels leakin
you'll be looking around seeing Menstrual by while Gal bleedin
but'cha been known as a scared little bitch before Nerves were exposed
now he'll notice Every Body Column Spineless when i rip out the cervical bones
gotta scope with heat sensored beam tracing beneath each frame lens
and when i aim at him you'll CT dotted like a Connecticut abbreviation (CT.)
how cute, this dude is rb's burglar with a cool little flashlight
but last night ya girl snuck in my room and grabbed the jewels like a bank heist
can't lie, the Pussy aint worth a dime so didnt pay first
just gave her Catalog then booked before turning over paper
see im favored this Tournament b/c i'm always On my game burglar
only way i'd show up to Attorney Office if i need legal representation for his blatant murder
gonna Lose no matter what alias u choose to sign in now
but this time he'll take an Elastic when left Stretched out in the final round
u can post a near lethal classic, i'll still ether that shit
so when Gal drop, Jil gonna catch a body like cheerleader practice

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Old 10-26-2014, 03:57 PM   #6
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I think @Allen Knight just put my name on a thread knowing it would get alot of views bcuz i'm the big thing right now tbh
Skill-wise we’re not even close so fuckin w/ me could be quite costly
If you’re the Hottest thing out, I’m at 0 Kelvin w/ a tank top & iced coffee
I’m wreckin you friend. One punch’ll put ya neck thru ya head
Call ^ it a Political move when I give Gillebrand new beating that could get her elected again
Whether you’re ill or not IDC, it’s a fact you’re a loser in writing
Cuz the truth is, we watched God son you so bad even Nas accused you of biting
I’ll punch til this kid’s abused, put ‘em back to sleep like he hit the snooze
Don’t worry I’m just Pullin your Leg……..til you end up like Victor Cruz
Ya girl says you suck in bed you rookie, she can’t wait til I pet her cookie
She said she needs Space. And not even the whole Universe could get you pussy
You wanted to go 30, but w/ 20 look how long it took you stupid
So it’s clear you’re fighting against the clock…..til I put you through it
You ain’t Presidential you cocky fgt, none of ya rhymes are fulfillin ya speech
Man I swear I haven’t seen a Head case this bad since good ‘ol Bill was impeached
One wrong move & Bullets’ll spray, trust this kid is the loser
Last time you saw a Bullet spray there was a crack in the lid of your juicer
Dog I light blunts to relax on the couch, I chill when I smoke
Ironically, last time Agility fell over & passed out w/ the blunt still in his throat
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Is greedy or ill clinton Hispanic and from los angeles?
He ain’t a gang banger, if there’s fight talk he’ll go to a safe place & leave the discussion
I’ve seen Hispanic room…& he’s got a crowbar, 2 sets of chrome wheels & all 15 of his cousins
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Tic Tac aka Galactic aka RB's Burglar


hopes of Taking the Finals is a failing one he's making up
cuz only Testicle pass is to get to the rest of the genitalia 10/10

got dem god damn hands that land Pinpoint accurate and fast
after the attack, we'll Spot Tac on the ground like a ***tus jack match 10/10

beaten so bad wont be allowed treatment when bowels leakin
you'll be looking around seeing Menstrual by while Gal bleedin 1/10

but'cha been known as a scared little bitch before Nerves were exposed
now he'll notice Every Body Column Spineless when i rip out the cervical bones 10/10

gotta scope with heat sensored beam tracing beneath each frame lens
and when i aim at him you'll CT dotted like a Connecticut abbreviation (CT.) 5/10

how cute, this dude is rb's burglar with a cool little flashlight
but last night ya girl snuck in my room and grabbed the jewels like a bank heist 5/10

can't lie, the Pussy aint worth a dime so didnt pay first
just gave her Catalog then booked before turning over paper 7/10

see im favored this Tournament b/c i'm always On my game burglar
only way i'd show up to Attorney Office if i need legal representation for his blatant murder 8/10

gonna Lose no matter what alias u choose to sign in now
but this time he'll take an Elastic when left Stretched out in the final round 10/10

u can post a near lethal classic, i'll still ether that shit
so when Gal drop, Jil gonna catch a body like cheerleader practice 10/10 (I know this catch a body play has been used before, blatantly, but lmao using gal and jil to make it work was great)





18 lines @Tic Tac @Sharp i'll edit in 2 more lines if u guys want, no problem
76
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Skill-wise we’re not even close so fuckin w/ me could be quite costly
If you’re the Hottest thing out, I’m at 0 Kelvin w/ a tank top & iced coffee 10/10

I’m wreckin you friend. One punch’ll put ya neck thru ya head
Call ^ it a Political move when I give Gillebrand new beating that could get her elected again 10/10

Whether you’re ill or not IDC, it’s a fact you’re a loser in writing
Cuz the truth is, we watched God son you so bad even Nas accused you of biting 5/10

I’ll punch til this kid’s abused, put ‘em back to sleep like he hit the snooze
Don’t worry I’m just Pullin your Leg……..til you end up like Victor Cruz 5/10

Ya girl says you suck in bed you rookie, she can’t wait til I pet her cookie
She said she needs Space. And not even the whole Universe could get you pussy 10/10

You wanted to go 30, but w/ 20 look how long it took you stupid
So it’s clear you’re fighting against the clock…..til I put you through it 5/10

You ain’t Presidential you cocky fgt, none of ya rhymes are fulfillin ya speech
Man I swear I haven’t seen a Head case this bad since good ‘ol Bill was impeached 10/10

One wrong move & Bullets’ll spray, trust this kid is the loser
Last time you saw a Bullet spray there was a crack in the lid of your juicer 5/10

Dog I light blunts to relax on the couch, I chill when I smoke
Ironically, last time Agility fell over & passed out w/ the blunt still in his throat 7/10

He ain’t a gang banger, if there’s fight talk he’ll go to a safe place & leave the discussion
I’ve seen Hispanic room…& he’s got a crowbar, 2 sets of chrome wheels & all 15 of his cousins 10/10
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Damn. My final count was 77/76 in favor of Tic Tac. Lmao. That's close af tbh. When I originally predicted this season I had Tic winning it with the finals exactly where I had them. Had Jilti not received a 1/10 score on the Menstrual bar, had he managed to secure anything within the 5/10 range, shit even 3/10, he would have won. My reasoning for scoring that bar 1/10 is bc of the concept. Even though it was a np, the PMS-lines are as cliched as cum/defeat lines. Granted Tic had some cliched stuff too, but nothing as redundant as that Menstrual line.

Really great Finals. Tic did what he needed to do. Be consistent. He didn't need haymaker after haymaker, he just needed his punches to land. Jilti had haymakers but he also swung wildly and missed. That's what cost him this battle, imo.

v-Tic Tac

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Old 10-28-2014, 09:40 AM   #8
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hopes of Taking the Finals is a failing one he's making up
cuz only Testicle pass is to get to the rest of the genitalia
but'cha been known as a scared little bitch before Nerves were exposed
now he'll notice Every Body Column Spineless when i rip out the cervical bones
(how cute, this dude is rb's burglar with a cool little flashlight
but last night ya girl snuck in my room and grabbed the jewels like a bank heist)
can't lie, the Pussy aint worth a dime so didnt pay first
just gave her Catalog then booked before turning over paper
see im favored this Tournament b/c i'm always On my game burglar
only way i'd show up to Attorney Office if i need legal representation for his blatant murder
gonna Lose no matter what alias u choose to sign in now
but this time he'll take an Elastic when left Stretched out in the final round
(u can post a near lethal classic, i'll still ether that shit
so when Gal drop, Jil gonna catch a body like cheerleader practice)



Skill-wise we’re not even close so fuckin w/ me could be quite costly
If you’re the Hottest thing out, I’m at 0 Kelvin w/ a tank top & iced coffee
I’m wreckin you friend. One punch’ll put ya neck thru ya head
Call ^ it a Political move when I give Gillebrand new beating that could get her elected again
I’ll punch til this kid’s abused, put ‘em back to sleep like he hit the snooze
Don’t worry I’m just Pullin your Leg……..til you end up like Victor Cruz
Ya girl says you suck in bed you rookie, she can’t wait til I pet her cookie
She said she needs Space. And not even the whole Universe could get you pussy
You ain’t Presidential you cocky fgt, none of ya rhymes are fulfillin ya speech
Man I swear I haven’t seen a Head case this bad since good ‘ol Bill was impeached
(One wrong move & Bullets’ll spray, trust this kid is the loser
Last time you saw a Bullet spray there was a crack in the lid of your juicer)
He ain’t a gang banger, if there’s fight talk he’ll go to a safe place & leave the discussion
I’ve seen Hispanic room…& he’s got a crowbar, 2 sets of chrome wheels & all 15 of his cousins


5 quotes and 2 near quotes from jil
6 quotes and 1 near quite from tic

Fuck this is close. I feel like each votes gonna come down to taste but I found Tic's verse slightly more effective. I think jil had solid hits while Tic had just a little that worked more. read it a few times and I feel like Tic wins. Dope finals guys

V/Tic
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Jim verse was full of badly worded scrub shit


Forced wp and longbar esque trash

I liked 1 bar the jewels line
It was cliche but it landed

Rest I can pass on


First half of tics verse was ass
Unreadable newb ahit

But

The space line
Fire
I loled


Then the juicer line
WAs impressive


Close battle tho
But the memorable lines belong to tac
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hopes of Taking the Finals is a failing one he's making up
cuz only Testicle pass is to get to the rest of the genitalia
how cute, this dude is rb's burglar with a cool little flashlight
but last night ya girl snuck in my room and grabbed the jewels like a bank heist
gonna Lose no matter what alias u choose to sign in now
but this time he'll take an Elastic when left Stretched out in the final round
u can post a near lethal classic, i'll still ether that shit
so when Gal drop, Jil gonna catch a body like cheerleader practice


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I’m wreckin you friend. One punch’ll put ya neck thru ya head
Call ^ it a Political move when I give Gillebrand new beating that could get her elected again
Ya girl says you suck in bed you rookie, she can’t wait til I pet her cookie
She said she needs Space. And not even the whole Universe could get you pussy
One wrong move & Bullets’ll spray, trust this kid is the loser
Last time you saw a Bullet spray there was a crack in the lid of your juicer
Dog I light blunts to relax on the couch, I chill when I smoke
Ironically, last time Agility fell over & passed out w/ the blunt still in his throat


tied in quotes

gillebrand and need space were dope

testicle was dope but worded eh.

jils non quotes were worse and his wording wasn't on tics level

v/tic
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I like tic tacs a lot because it is clear that he gains advantages by covert means. And he doesn't realize how hypocritical it is that he blames others for doing the same which is actually very funny if you think about it. And though he respects the skills of those around him, I can tell that he doesn't want to play a game that is completely rigged and would rather express himself for therapeutic purposes. Tic Tac seems completely confused why others can't seem to understand that. He is in search of a place where he can vent his frustrations and feel better in the morning. Not to be in a pissing contest with fake video game characters since he has a PS4 for that. Jilti was harder tho. So I give it to him.
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I like tic tacs a lot because it is clear that he gains advantages by covert means. And he doesn't realize how hypocritical it is that he blames others for doing the same which is actually very funny if you think about it. And though he respects the skills of those around him, I can tell that he doesn't want to play a game that is completely rigged and would rather express himself for therapeutic purposes. Tic Tac seems completely confused why others can't seem to understand that. He is in search of a place where he can vent his frustrations and feel better in the morning. Not to be in a pissing contest with fake video game characters since he has a PS4 for that. Jilti was harder tho. So I give it to him.
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that's bullshit sharp i was going to lmao at it first but i didn't want to freepost in the finals thread out of respect for u running the tourney and all
you declared this tourney over and delayed it a week


I've earned the freepost


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***tus jack, jewels, CT

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Iced coffee, gillebrand, universe, Hispanic

Maybe I see this different but honestly Jil had some forced wp and bad wording through most of his verse. More so bad wording. Tac wasn't as consistent but he definitely takes this easy in my eyes.

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got dem god damn hands that land Pinpoint accurate and fast
after the attack, we'll Spot Tac on the ground like a ***tus jack match
but'cha been known as a scared little bitch before Nerves were exposed
now he'll notice Every Body Column Spineless when i rip out the cervical bones
u can post a near lethal classic, i'll still ether that shit
so when Gal drop, Jil gonna catch a body like cheerleader practice

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Skill-wise we’re not even close so fuckin w/ me could be quite costly
If you’re the Hottest thing out, I’m at 0 Kelvin w/ a tank top & iced coffee
I’m wreckin you friend. One punch’ll put ya neck thru ya head
Call ^ it a Political move when I give Gillebrand new beating that could get her elected again
You ain’t Presidential you cocky fgt, none of ya rhymes are fulfillin ya speech
Man I swear I haven’t seen a Head case this bad since good ‘ol Bill was impeached
One wrong move & Bullets’ll spray, trust this kid is the loser
Last time you saw a Bullet spray there was a crack in the lid of your juicer
He ain’t a gang banger, if there’s fight talk he’ll go to a safe place & leave the discussion
I’ve seen Hispanic room…& he’s got a crowbar, 2 sets of chrome wheels & all 15 of his cousins


Nice final, I felt one came off more consistant if the other wouldve kept up with the same impact as the bar I quoted this wouldve been much closer, props to both for the finals.. v/Tac
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