02-12-2018, 11:26 PM | #1 |
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Contenders Match: Habitat (6-3) vs. Profit (5-3) - HABITAT WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Habitat @Profit |
02-13-2018, 06:47 AM | #2 |
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Check. How does 12 sound?
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02-13-2018, 11:22 PM | #3 |
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Sounds good bro. 12 it is
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02-15-2018, 06:31 AM | #4 |
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I may need an ext. this week
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02-15-2018, 11:01 AM | #5 |
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No problem man
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02-15-2018, 03:15 PM | #6 |
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ur overrated as fuck, I don't even have to try an diss you
anyone who wants to read Samoa ur shit can get banished to an island w/ you ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5 so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business 12 @Profit
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02-15-2018, 04:35 PM | #7 |
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Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band Heard um judge ya girls butt, & u got defensive like her booty be nice Doooog, every critical thinker ass got issues.... & the smart 1's r usually right I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age U stress text sooo much u take advice, but ion think it works dog Cos when Orc said just do u.. it ain't mean avoid pussy to jerk off |
02-16-2018, 11:41 AM | #8 | |
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All rights Profit go down Vs Sour diesel Natural habitat Do u I didn't get critical thinker but maybe I'm not doing enough of that. Limelight could have been good but I've seen shit like it everywhere. And I'm sure sour diesel is played but it read hard af to me Hab all his exes die bc of a heavy heart? Don't understand the diss. Samoa is played tf out so is farewell. Forgiveness just read weird to me. V/Profit kinda close but not Oh critical think her ass got issues? W/e
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02-17-2018, 12:18 PM | #9 |
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ur overrated as fuck, I don't even have to try an diss you
anyone who wants to read Samoa ur shit can get banished to an island w/ you ok decent ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5 so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye ok coulda been better cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart this was your best bar so far got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck I liked the all rights reserved concept here not bad had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit that was nice I liked that u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business lol ok I guess vs. Last week Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung alright I guess The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB this was alright kind of light to me U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band nah didn't like this Heard um judge ya girls butt, & u got defensive like her booty be nice Doooog, every critical thinker ass got issues.... & the smart 1's r usually right this was good I liked this I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age I liked this too but it coulda been better U stress text sooo much u take advice, but ion think it works dog Cos when Orc said just do u.. it ain't mean avoid pussy to jerk off nah wasn't feeling this overall: yeah I'm going go ahead and give this BOTW... easily... you guys were much better than all the other battles I read... easy... maybe it was just a slow week but for me this was the best battle of the week... coulda been better though in some ways... anyways I'm going give my vote to habitat just because I think he was a bit harsher with his shit... and just a bit stronger with his punches so yeah.... although this coulda gone either way really..... vote: habitat
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02-17-2018, 12:47 PM | #10 |
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Habitat -- foregiveness/heart line was dooope. I try to play with concepts like this sometimes but can never seem to stick them. Otherwise, some good jabs but the wordplay just felt a lil unoriginal.. Samoa, Farewell, All Rights Reserved... it was cool but not attention grabbing.. closer was nice too.
Profit Speaking of jabs -- Profit had some decent little lines, but I didn't feel a knockout punch or a clever line that really ended it for me. Sour diesel is cool -- RB is aight -- boy band feels like it comes out of nowhere. I guess I feel like there wasn't a lot of pointed, harsh lines towards your enemy. Maybe it was a wording thing, but it felt off. Vote -- Habitat ... that forgiveness line was the knockout punch in this one for me
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02-17-2018, 01:14 PM | #11 |
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ur always on the Back End when people list the bottom 5
so it's a given you won't Farewell against me, you can kiss your ass goodbye Lol Nice... cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart Sheessssh Hab... u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business Dope ender... ----------- Last week Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung Nice Opener... U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band Lol...Coo I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age Nice, but not harsh... Honestly to me this was a nice battle read on both ends. Imma go with Hab on the edge out. He had two lines were the most harsh in this battle which edged him out. Good battle Vote: Hab
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02-18-2018, 09:44 AM | #12 |
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cannon ready, one shot'll rip his families entire life apart
a bullet don't need forgiveness... n' it'll be too late when you find it in ur heart got the upper hand cuz ur styles outdated, ima swing on this chump the left hand has ya neck.. n' I've got All Rights Reserved for this unoriginal fuck u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business Vs Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung The lil talent left in text is HERE, & this lame makes it far? geez I knooow the comp on the limelight, but u can't even hit main stage on RB U ain't built fa this, a Canadian dork rappin? Fuuuck that noise fam To u rap ain't natural habitat.. so stay in ur comfort zone w/ur boy band Yo these were fire from both. Fresh your first 2 were decent but old wordplays. I give you credit for your flip on the Samoa one tho. Profit’s beginning of his verse was heat. He cooled off towards then end. This is super close but I gotta edge Habitat with better misses, because they were even in quotes. Salute to both of you. v/Habitat |
02-18-2018, 10:46 AM | #13 |
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Dont mean u dope cos u won, another contenders? give up hope cos ur done
Fuck if u got by a few punches from sour,.. diesel hit ur chest till u choke up a lung I understand how ur games played, in the archives' where this lame stays S'cool fresh twists old concepts.. too bad the flips r the same age vs had so many gf's you'd think w/ ladies the guy was a hit but you always say goodbye with a heavy heart.. cuz all ur exes die of the shit u're a failure at everything, it's astonishing to witness so it's no surprise to see profit go down after I give him the business hab man the beginnin killed ya in this one.. samoa n farewell wordplays have been used since the beginnin. u know that bro. in a battle where one more good punch wulda stole u this one that hurt ya. profit.. I fucks with the style. I liked a few punches, I culda prolly quoted one more n u had enuff to win this one. vote - profit |
02-18-2018, 12:39 PM | #14 |
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No offence to profit but i really struggled with yours here. I couldnt find one bar i liked, not to say i cant see the jabs in there but for a contenders i expected some haymakers an got none. Also the wording just seemed off, there was something in each of the first 3 bars but i dont know, just didnt work didnt hit direct. Overall its not a bad drop (flips age line stands out) just expected more. No hate i enjoy your drops usually.
Habitat underrated i thought his drop was fresh, in contract to profit i really enjoyed nearly all your bars. I mean again there was alot more jabs then id like but the whole thing was smooth reading an fresh. I just really enjoyed the constant turn of phrase. Heavy heart closer an bullet heart line to name a few favs. Opener was weak but yeah, enjoyed this. Vote habitat Last edited by Flow; 02-18-2018 at 12:43 PM. |
02-19-2018, 02:53 AM | #15 |
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Hab -- Find in ur heart, all rights réservés
Business was eh ok Pro: sour diesel, fresh twist some other ok ones that fell do to wording. V - habitat |
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