08-02-2022, 09:42 PM | #1 |
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Champ Match: Dominate vs Defiant - DOMINATE WINS
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08-03-2022, 03:50 AM | #2 |
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Hey Def.
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08-03-2022, 05:16 AM | #3 |
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Hey dom
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08-05-2022, 05:11 PM | #4 |
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Ext?
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08-05-2022, 05:40 PM | #5 |
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08-05-2022, 06:47 PM | #6 |
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Thats a blast from the past, this is a blast when I pull the trigger for using words like funsies That topical contendership, man that shit was weak One punch will have ya universe shook so bad, you'd pussy out of another battle this week Uk vs oz again, n this convict the type to trap n steal cause we're both part of the Commonwealth, n he couldn't part with it 2 take a girl for a happy meal clearly broke, with ya girl ya can't ball right? I'm saying you'd have a whole date cancelled for a few pounds, like the jake paul fight Say ya an oz cunt n sympathize as this beating u see sounds dark N if that bridge across don't harbour feelings, it will when I throw ya off that Sydney landmark Last edited by Defiant; 08-06-2022 at 08:49 PM. |
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08-07-2022, 02:36 AM | #8 |
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Ur style is hit and miss so good luck if you tryna advance, queer
If MY text is up and down it’s “I ReAlLy ThInK dEfIaNt HaS a ChAnCe HeRe” Chernobyl fallout looking mufucka. You never balling w/ chicks bro If you got the digits for something extra on the side, we’re talking a sixth toe You’re fat AND boring. What you make w/ the pen’s awful Verse the same as your diet is - eighty percent waffle Hear the revolver BLAOW and you’re going down, sonny I SAID THIS AIN’T MY FIRST RODEO. Yea that colt’s coming out bucking Or I’m auto squeezing, even better. You’ll bleed forever See me bare arms going BRRRRR like white women who need a sweater Pew pew
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08-07-2022, 11:46 AM | #9 |
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I tried and wanted to get into it but honestly wasn’t feeling much Dom Sixth toe was cool Waffle was dope Closer was ok.. kinda corny for me but well written Dom takes it quite comfortably |
08-07-2022, 11:57 AM | #10 |
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Funsies a valid thing to call out but you need to do more with it
Universe cool Commonwealth better but a bit long Jake Paul is good considering it’s a pound wp Harbour feelings was cool well setup Opener cool idea but could’ve been done better I think. Like that sTyLe oF wRiTiNg doesn’t imply sarcasm does it? Digits lol that’s good Waffle nice See what you’re trying bringing rodeo back again but it’s light BRRR is corny but I’m like it lol Dominate more good ideas and better wording Vote Dom
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08-07-2022, 10:03 PM | #11 |
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Defiant I feel like you had some clever concepts, but the execution is just not there or the things you’re targeting don’t do much damage in this first place. Like the funsies line, It’s just not a good point of attack, I applaud you for using concepts that are probably fresh but execution comes over the fresh takes. It’s been paying off for me to dumb it down and just focus on hard hitting wording and execution over grandiose concepts. I liked harbor and universe bars were decent
Dom had a solid verse here wasn’t as good as last week but did enough to retain the belt here thought opener digits and waffles was nice So yeah v/Dom comfortably |
08-07-2022, 11:09 PM | #12 |
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This a very good battle..
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08-08-2022, 10:29 AM | #13 |
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We battled years ago, n still acting a bitch with ya dumb pleas
Thats a blast from the past, this is a blast when I pull the trigger for using words like funsies this concept is dope. Something about the bar doesn't work too well for me though That topical contendership, man that shit was weak One punch will have ya universe shook so bad, you'd pussy out of another battle this week solid. Probably don't need the comma in the punch Uk vs oz again, n this convict the type to trap n steal cause we're both part of the Commonwealth, n he couldn't part with it 2 take a girl for a happy meal punch is definitely more stretched out than it needs to be but still good clearly broke, with ya girl ya can't ball right? I'm saying you'd have a whole date cancelled for a few pounds, like the jake paul fight lmao this is dope assuming one of your stupid countries still uses pounds Say ya an oz cunt n sympathize as this beating u see sounds dark N if that bridge across don't harbour feelings, it will when I throw ya off that Sydney landmark that setup is trash. Punch is fine Ur style is hit and miss so good luck if you tryna advance, queer If MY text is up and down it’s “I ReAlLy ThInK dEfIaNt HaS a ChAnCe HeRe” lmao. Nice Chernobyl fallout looking mufucka. You never balling w/ chicks bro If you got the digits for something extra on the side, we’re talking a sixth toe good bar, use of 'on the side' put it over You’re fat AND boring. What you make w/ the pen’s awful Verse the same as your diet is - eighty percent waffle 'what you make with the pen' is a little awkward but the rhyme is good. Solid Hear the revolver BLAOW and you’re going down, sonny I SAID THIS AIN’T MY FIRST RODEO. Yea that colt’s coming out bucking this doesn't rhyme in Philly. Only vaguely aware of the first rodeo stuff from last week, so I might be missing something, but this is just OK to me Or I’m auto squeezing, even better. You’ll bleed forever See me bare arms going BRRRRR like white women who need a sweater gone I fuck with goofy dominate. Def did pretty well here, favorite verse from him this season, but Dom was more consistent V/Dom |
08-08-2022, 10:20 PM | #14 |
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Props to defiant for his run, but this was a matter of diff tiers
Doms wording was cleaner and his concepts were either more unique or more direct This was by no means Dom at his best, but he knew how much would be enough to take the W Vote- dom
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