Defiant vs Answer - ANSWER WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 2

Due Thursday, July7th at Midnight PST

Minimum - 8 lines
Max - 12 lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Defiant @Answer

[Answer]

Oh it’s the guy who noshowed me last time

[Answer]

like the mayans, we seen ur days are numbered & u picked the wrong one
now the stock in my whip ready for icing like the cinnabon truck
ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
You go from running, to passing - audible play shit
I don't gotta hear a pin drop to see a pin drop on your location
Money in the bank, the ladder crawling with cases
I’m taking you out when it ring like a call in the matrix
BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school
@Defiant

[Defiant]

Ext

[Defiant]

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
Rapping online n in person, its not a succesfull life this nerd is playin
I'd say you've found ya calling, if you could hear a fuckin word I'm saying
Every girl thinks you're a loser, bet u wish u could switch with def
If ya got ya finger to the pulse, it's to make sure you haven't bored that bitch to death
Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet
Ya mom's a fucking hero, shes got my support its true
U coming out musta put the fear of God in her, so much we'd legalise abortion with you
Gun bar after gun bar, u with any weapon near I do doubt
This life your portraying is such a stretch, it could take ya fat legs and pull ya hearing aid out

[Aero]

Defiant:

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
lol nice concept
Rapping online n in person, its not a succesfull life this nerd is playin
I'd say you've found ya calling, if you could hear a fuckin word I'm saying
light
Every girl thinks you're a loser, bet u wish u could switch with def
If ya got ya finger to the pulse, it's to make sure you haven't bored that bitch to death
smooth concept, could've been worded harsher
Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet
light
Ya mom's a fucking hero, shes got my support its true
U coming out musta put the fear of God in her, so much we'd legalise abortion with you
this isn't it
Gun bar after gun bar, u with any weapon near I do doubt
This life your portraying is such a stretch, it could take ya fat legs and pull ya hearing aid out
Nope

Answer:
like the mayans, we seen ur days are numbered & u picked the wrong one
now the stock in my whip ready for icing like the cinnabon truck
Seems like a bar a fat person would come with. Right on.
ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
lol good connection
You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
light
You go from running, to passing - audible play shit
I don't gotta hear a pin drop to see a pin drop on your location
Nope
Money in the bank, the ladder crawling with cases
I’m taking you out when it ring like a call in the matrix
Boring
BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school
Nice

Answer was a bit better in his wording and had one more bar I liked =.
Nice battle fellas. Vote Answer

[Adverse]

Answer:

like the mayans, we seen ur days are numbered & u picked the wrong one
now the stock in my whip ready for icing like the cinnabon truck
^ this was alright lol

ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
^ lol alright

You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
^ I liked the connections but didn’t feel like it was great

You go from running, to passing - audible play shit
I don't gotta hear a pin drop to see a pin drop on your location
^ didn’t like it personally

Money in the bank, the ladder crawling with cases
I’m taking you out when it ring like a call in the matrix
^ thought this whole concept was discombobulated but I guess it works

BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school
^ alright cool here

Defiant (you actually showed! Holy shit lol)

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
^ this was a good concept and decent opener

Rapping online n in person, its not a succesfull life this nerd is playin
I'd say you've found ya calling, if you could hear a fuckin word I'm saying
^ it’s okay but two deaf jokes makes it feel less impactful

Every girl thinks you're a loser, bet u wish u could switch with def
If ya got ya finger to the pulse, it's to make sure you haven't bored that bitch to death
^ concept okay execution was meh

Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet
^ see what you were going for but nah

Ya mom's a fucking hero, shes got my support its true
U coming out musta put the fear of God in her, so much we'd legalise abortion with you
^ no. Cool reference to recent events but overall execution is bad

Gun bar after gun bar, u with any weapon near I do doubt
This life your portraying is such a stretch, it could take ya fat legs and pull ya hearing aid out
^ nope. Not for me. And that set up was bad

Overall I think Def had a good opportunity here for an upset, he obviously knows how to battle and had some decent ideas but overall it just turned into him fumbling. Answer won with consistency, far from his best verse but still enjoyed some stuff

V/Answer

[Cred]

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet

vs

ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school

Good battle here. What I quoted I liked. Answer took this tho.

Vote- Answer

[Saint]

Ans: Grocery divider, driving school


def: Hearing aid, almost score sheet
wording looked rusty

I've got Answer here on better hits, wording was better imo

[evaD]

Feel like answer fully half assed this - some didn’t even really rhyme and the concepts were t up to his usual standards. Defiant’s first three were probably the best of the battle for me, tapered off at the end but did enough to win at the start

Vote - def

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Answer

like the mayans, we seen ur days are numbered & u picked the wrong one
now the stock in my whip ready for icing like the cinnabon truck
Pretty good. I don't really like the set up as a set up, coulda been its own bar
ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
Ha, nice
You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
Had to google but it was an easy one to figure out, this is good. Dig the set up a lot too.
You go from running, to passing - audible play shit
I don't gotta hear a pin drop to see a pin drop on your location
Ehh nah. The idea isn't bad but needed a different set up
Money in the bank, the ladder crawling with cases
I’m taking you out when it ring like a call in the matrix
Pretty cool
BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school
Nice! Lol @ Bao in your mouth. Again coulda/shoulda been its own thing IMO but w/e. Second line was dope
@Defiant

Originally Posted by Defiant

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
LoL pretty good
Rapping online n in person, its not a succesfull life this nerd is playin
I'd say you've found ya calling, if you could hear a fuckin word I'm saying
With the combined personal angles this is good
Every girl thinks you're a loser, bet u wish u could switch with def
If ya got ya finger to the pulse, it's to make sure you haven't bored that bitch to death
LOL, liked this
Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet
Creative idea I suppose but not really digging it
Ya mom's a fucking hero, shes got my support its true
U coming out musta put the fear of God in her, so much we'd legalise abortion with you
Current event points but nah
Gun bar after gun bar, u with any weapon near I do doubt
This life your portraying is such a stretch, it could take ya fat legs and pull ya hearing aid out
Not sure what you're saying. Stretching by taking his legs and pull out the hearing aid?

Def's first few bars were good and had me thinking this might be close but he fell off toward the end. Answer was too consistent.

V/ Answer