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Old 06-16-2015, 11:33 AM   #1
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  • Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
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Old 06-16-2015, 11:41 AM   #2
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Here. Going 10

no EXT, faggot. Make the deadline, pussy.
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Old 06-17-2015, 06:17 AM   #3
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hahaha... nigga kill yo self
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Old 06-18-2015, 09:16 AM   #4
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@Junto sent 10.
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Old 06-19-2015, 03:25 AM   #5
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Old 06-19-2015, 03:28 AM   #6
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yea bro... Kyle Pimpken and I were mad chill... Talked outside of the boarding world. I was the 1st one to know he lost his virginity freshman year in college out in Philly.

Haha damn I'd hate to be Lyrs that's a shame...

Call him ya boy... then spill his name and date he humped a mate
Maybe he did come back as salamander. You just stayed the same... a fuckin snake
We can hold a poll for current #1. Ya know, 'which writer your top / best'
& if everyone's sayin Amen! you musta decided to leave the site in the process
You big lipped queen. Ain't hard to tell, no chicks gettin fucked in this kid's dreams
Last time u had a lady in ya hands in bed... u fell asleep drinkin that Starbucks w/ the whipped cream
But talkin shit my way? Please... you vote for me on all my battles you fuckin wack
u can try to change ya tune. But when u switch characters we ain't seein NONE of that
I wont just take ya off the boards, my team'll run on u... no charges, we're that great
My point man gon handle it... then I'll put u in that hole myself like I go hard on the fastbreak


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Old 06-19-2015, 05:21 AM   #7
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Listen guy...

Junto been stuntin w/ the jaws & now I’m comin for you, dawg,
So dont act surprise when each deceit ya ego, since ya nothin but a fraud.
Everyone guessin; “Who is this BITCH” – IDK but hes far from sick,
Attentions got you spread all over, Nutella can use his gimmick for marketin.
Lets discuss shadow boxin, this mans flawed while Dre hands raw,
A swing’ll end your streak… once the windex you & SHATTERS that glass jaw.
You’re a cry baby faggot, that thread display was SUCH enjoyment,
That meltdown was on a level of hardship, it could regain Muffs employment.
Any chance you get, got my name in your mouth, dude gets sly too,
You’re a natural dick 'n vein, which I seem to easily confuse you w/ mine, dude.

10, now get off my dick faggot
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Old 06-19-2015, 01:57 PM   #8
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Interesting battle, personals were straight on both sides

liked fast Brea, amen at end,
Liked the muff employment for some reason lol..

Deceit ya ego is similar to a line I had vs des this week.
But diss eat/deceit ya ego is kind of ehh wording.
Same with Windex/decks..but the tie in made it better.

I have to vote- junto, better execution.
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Old 06-20-2015, 09:41 PM   #9
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You’re a cry baby faggot, that thread display was SUCH enjoyment,
That meltdown was on a level of hardship, it could regain Muffs employment.


Junto

Call him ya boy... then spill his name and date he humped a mate
Maybe he did come back as salamander. You just stayed the same... a fuckin snake
We can hold a poll for current #1. Ya know, 'which writer YOUR top / best'
& if everyone's sayin Amen! you musta decided to leave the site in the PROCESS


v/ Junto... he had the better structured bars slightly and I got him landing one more than Dre
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Old 06-21-2015, 01:42 AM   #10
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Call him ya boy... then spill his name and date he humped a mate
Maybe he did come back as salamander. You just stayed the same... a fuckin snake
cool personal
We can hold a poll for current #1. Ya know, 'which writer your top / best'
& if everyone's sayin Amen! you musta decided to leave the site in the process
ok.
You big lipped queen. Ain't hard to tell, no chicks gettin fucked in this kid's dreams
Last time u had a lady in ya hands in bed... u fell asleep drinkin that Starbucks w/ the whipped cream
nah.
But talkin shit my way? Please... you vote for me on all my battles you fuckin wack
u can try to change ya tune. But when u switch characters we ain't seein NONE of that
not feeling this
I wont just take ya off the boards, my team'll run on u... no charges, we're that great
My point man gon handle it... then I'll put u in that hole myself like I go hard on the fastbreak
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Junto been stuntin w/ the jaws & now I’m comin for you, dawg,
So dont act surprise when each deceit ya ego, since ya nothin but a fraud.
don't like the wording at all. 'each deceit ya ego'?
Everyone guessin; “Who is this BITCH” – IDK but hes far from sick,
Attentions got you spread all over, Nutella can use his gimmick for marketin.
doesn't rhyme. diss is also weak
Lets discuss shadow boxin, this mans flawed while Dre hands raw,
A swing’ll end your streak… once the windex you & SHATTERS that glass jaw.
like the concept. nice attempt but this is forced as written
You’re a cry baby faggot, that thread display was SUCH enjoyment,
That meltdown was on a level of hardship, it could regain Muffs employment.
concept is cool, but this isn't directed well or written harshly enough
Any chance you get, got my name in your mouth, dude gets sly too,
You’re a natural dick 'n vein, which I seem to easily confuse you w/ mine, dude.
please no.
This is pretty clearly a win for Junto. Dre showed some potential but there were too many misses to pull this off. Not the best verse I've seen from Junto but more than enough to take the W.

Vote: Junto
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Old 06-21-2015, 07:03 AM   #11
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Junto

Opener was harsh af
Sayin amen was lol
Closer was ok

Vs

Dre

Winded was almost if worded better could a been dope
Muffs employment was cool
Didn't recall like anything else

Well I got this 3-2 which is closer than it really is cos juntos hits were much better just feel like dre coulda cleaned his up a lil n made this closer but yeah hit junto taking this fairly easy


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Old 06-21-2015, 08:42 AM   #12
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Starbucks & fastbreak

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Got it tied at 2 quotes a piece, but the rest of Juntos verse was better than the rest of amens verse. Vote-Junto
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Old 06-21-2015, 09:27 AM   #13
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Junto had the first 2 and the ender
Dre had the muffy employment line which I liked

I got junto
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Old 06-21-2015, 04:13 PM   #14
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Junto had the salamander line and the closer which were both pretty solid lines while dre was less consistent but he had the meltdown bar which was cool, so all in all..Junto got this..
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Old 06-21-2015, 08:08 PM   #15
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junto had opener and saying Amen

amen had muff employment, some other stuff that could have been helped with better wording. I'll give you an example of what I mean if you flip about about it.

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