03-21-2018, 11:17 PM | #1 |
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Chicken Scratch On A Denny's Napkin
My Cinderella danced barefoot
over broken glass As Humpty Dumpty seeped eggnog from his opened head, while the frog turned prince was asleep When he croaked in bed I hope, he at least, found peace with his troubled past. "... see, there's a Beauty in the Beast, he just needs a bath", Said the Big Bad Wolf to his ethics class. Look Captin Hook sent a message in a bottle that I never read and now it's lost, boy .. ala Peter Pan. Yo, I'm a snobbish alcoholic I like my mascoto red and huffing oxygen is carci°no°genic when you're Aquaman Nah ... I'm really just a comic that forgot to laugh and that's a lazy entendre for my fans and Stans. GOTdamn, man, I think I need a Hand and a standing ovation for my favorite band. Saw John Snow getting toasty in the South of France while I stood upon the Mountain top and surveyed the land. It's crazy, fam ... How everyone's a critic of my dope, guess I'm Breaking Bad ... I'm so HBO when I post, -- that's no basic plan ... I let the drac-o blow like Sopranos at tomato stands I'm Marlon Brando with a 'fro and a Native tan "I sent a Wire to ya folks ... it's like 80 grand and told Proposition Joe what he didn't know about the Method Man" I roll with Marlo smokin Marlboros in an ambulance and keep a bando full of bones for the voodoo jam! ... my hoodoo can ... make u hoola hoop through A ring of fire in the Zulu sands An ancient empire that was too adavanced For modern-day humans and their stupid Klans "Excuse me, Pam. I think I use to be your lover in another life and Bruh Man was the husband of your uncle's blood cousin's wife" So fuck yo baggage I got luggage and my shit is twice the life time supply they allow on flights I lug this ball and chain like a symbol of my pride a simple sigil meant to visualize that I ain't livin' right! ... and so I type. Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 03-23-2018 at 10:41 AM. |
03-21-2018, 11:51 PM | #2 |
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Damn this was long as holy hell. But I read every damn word. And honestly wasn't that long. The fairy tale section was dope but GOT to Method Man section was hot fire dylan. "Excuse me Pam...."lol
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03-22-2018, 12:26 PM | #3 |
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Thanks, Killa. Appreciate that.
And yeah, man. Dope is still relevant...I think. Lol. |
03-22-2018, 09:45 PM | #4 |
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This was nifty.
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03-22-2018, 10:26 PM | #5 |
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Mucho gracias señor.
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03-24-2018, 01:09 AM | #6 |
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03-24-2018, 02:02 AM | #7 |
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very smooth
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03-24-2018, 02:26 AM | #8 |
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Replying to every response and bumping your piece.
Shame is lost.
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03-24-2018, 10:29 AM | #9 |
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Meanwhile, 75% of my total post count consist of nothing but feedback in both the OM and AWOL. So yeah I bump my shit or drop a lot, but unlike so many others, I also give FAR FAR more than I ever recieve in return. But somehow this becomes a topic of discussion more so than that. lol. Shame on you, Pan. Shame on you indeed, sir.
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