03-19-2018, 08:28 AM | #1 |
The Biggest
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bleak 3-7 vs Plot 1-2 - BLEAK WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @bleak @Plot |
03-22-2018, 04:47 AM | #2 | |
yeet
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brains look like Super Aqua, what a Wonder this Bat is
quick Flash to his Mans cz there's no Justice for faggots. Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak. Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids. You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs. I front weight it's kilos. Skip and I'm throwing the rockets. Your front weight is that dad gut, keeps ur keys low in your pockets 8
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03-22-2018, 03:48 PM | #3 |
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03-22-2018, 07:51 PM | #4 |
yeet
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For 8? Sure
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03-23-2018, 01:38 AM | #5 |
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Check this nosey faggot pre-swayying... so fucking lousy,
Imma just get busy-bodying the fool, care what he says about me! Fuck this clown Bleak, he's gotta be the dumbest nerd, If he thinks he's fly he got it backwards, he's a hummingbird. Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands, Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man. Winning with those weak bars? pathetic how this fool tanks, Just a shitty pipe dream, guess he must have missed Shawshank. Last edited by Plot; 03-23-2018 at 04:49 PM. |
03-23-2018, 10:21 PM | #6 |
Sun Tzu
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Bleak
Justice League scheme was decent. Basic but decent. I liked the circle get erased with one finger bar. Not gonna lie, I hated that tekashi 69 bar lmao. Maybe I’m tripping but I felt dumb af reading it out loud lol. The closer landed. Plot I think you completely wasted your opener. I didn’t pay attention enough in school to know hummingbirds fly backwards lol. I used context clues though. I didn’t think it was that great though - too simple. Snowman bar was decent. I think you had an opportunity to build up that punch a bit more. Didn’t really care for your closer. Bleak took this one. Punched every line and overall I liked your verse. Plot you wasted your opener which you can’t do when you only going 8 bars. Even then, I think Bleak’s punches landed harder and he had a overall better verse. Last edited by Jabari Black; 03-24-2018 at 09:44 AM. Reason: Typo |
03-24-2018, 08:47 AM | #7 |
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bleak; 1st, cool. 2nd, decent. 3rd, okay. 4th, meh.
Plot; 1st, just a statement. 2-4, the concepts have potential to hit hard but didnt. I mean, there shoulda been more creative flips. Anyways, bleaks gets the vote for better punches, better flips, etc. |
03-25-2018, 10:05 AM | #8 |
Prayers won't help.
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bleak had fb chat & keys low
plot had a nice structured verse bleak obv put up a quickie as most did this week. me included. i hated the justice league line., lol... apologies. IDK much about that rainbow bright kid other than the fact that i do find him to be a funny real life troll to the cali cats. plot had potiental w.the hummingbird line, but i didn't like how it was executed. the problem w.plot, which has always been a issue w.him is he comes rly basic. wording structure is ideal for the site, he just needs to come much more creative w. what he says, imho. mvgt- @bleak |
03-25-2018, 10:31 AM | #9 |
..GunbaR MessiaH..
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Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak.
Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids. You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs. ------- Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands, Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man. I'm going with bleak on this one, just better overall better verse with better content. Props to Plot tho. V-Bleak
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03-25-2018, 01:53 PM | #10 |
Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Bleak forced his opener & that 69 concept was wack lol. FB chat & keys low were decent tho. Plot's concepts were super simple, that only works when your opponent's ideas are convoluted. At least your wording was clear & concise, just nothing special w/ your punches. Neither wowed Me w/ their verses, just an overall OK battle.
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