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Old 03-19-2018, 08:23 AM   #1
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Old 03-19-2018, 08:54 AM   #2
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around
stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection
s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?"
our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit
this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice
u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition
Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position

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Old 03-21-2018, 11:39 AM   #5
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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica
faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread
u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop.
But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk
I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits
all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it
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Habitat:

"stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection
s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?""

"our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit"

"this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice"

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"don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica"

"faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread"


Overall was a good battle here felt that Des messed up with wording here and there. I understood the concepts, maybe the execution and wording was off, just made it not all flow together that nice imo. Habitat on the other hand felt that his verse flowed together better. And maybe to other people its played but that Jump the Gun line I liked a lot, if it wasn't for that I think this would be pretty even. Think Habitat got this one, was pretty close. Props to both. Decent read for sure
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One of the things that is sticking out to me a lot is wordplay and how its executed.

2 examples:
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around

Deserter/des hurt her. Phonetically this works, but reading it in the bar it should work 2 ways. As it is written it's just a gibberish sentence. Low level wordplay.

but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
I can read this sentance using hab n aero, or habenero and it's a proper sentence in both instances. Higher level wordplay, much trickier to pull off.

Not the only reason for my vote, but an important factor.

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Old 03-22-2018, 11:48 AM   #8
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around

Nice Opener

our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit

Lol this is coo

this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice

Nice

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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse

Ah, this was nice

don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica

Lmao

faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread

Nice


Damn this was a coo read on both ends, this is actually close as hell in my eyes, I honestly have to go with Hab on this one. I think the moments notice line got it for him.

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Old 03-23-2018, 03:03 PM   #9
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around
I haven't seen the nameplay before so this was cool to me
stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection
s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?"
nah, a miss for me
our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit
hmm, I guess it's comical and works if the guy has long hair ... cool
this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice
cool, solid attack line
u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition
Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position
stand/fetal been played... not enough of a creative twist or flip here for me

vs.

u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
lol dope wp.. this was a strong open
don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica
cool current event punch
faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread
lol, like this
u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop.
But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk
mehh, okay
I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits
all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it
okay close


Cool battle props to both. Ive got destroyer taking this one, both had cool openers but I liked Des's more and he had the next 2 bets bars of the battle... good showing

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Old 03-25-2018, 10:49 AM   #10
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around
np came off a bit force to me. had great potential tho

stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection
s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?"
okish

our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit
didn't care for this


this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice
meh

u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition
Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position
this was okish as well

Imo, Hab has concepts & came across creative. I guess i just didn't rly care for how his lines were use? idk, i can't quite put my finger on it, cuz i def see the concepts there. like the Des hurt her line could've been dope, it just sounds for when i say it. dunno where ur from but it doesn't sound like that to me, but the crazy thing is i can see where it was going. although i had to say it to myself a few times before i figured it out.


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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
I pronounce his name w. long 'a' but pronounce Habanero w.a short 'a'. but heard country people say it w. a long 'a' so this actually wrks for me. bit of a different situation from Hab's first bar

don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica
this was cool

faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread
facts. but just ok

u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop.
But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk
this made me chuckle

I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits
all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it
ok swag. didn't care for the line tho

des had a cool verse imo. maybe its just me & i typically try to steer clear of lopsided battles from my standpoint because u don't want the losing side of the spectrum to feel u're pickin w.them. but i will say @Habitat it is about preference, & im just one opinion. maybe im not seeing the full pic of ya potential. I hope to read more from u. infact after this i might go do some homework on ya earlier battles. but as for now mvgt-@destroyer . felt he had the comfy better verse.

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Old 03-25-2018, 02:26 PM   #11
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Des edged, it was extremely close tho, Hab was definitely more creative, just not as harsh, so that took away from the impact of his punches. Des was solid in every bar except 'drawing board' I hated that lol. Anyway tho good battle gentlemen.
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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around
okay start
stop acting like u a hit w/ the ladies, ur literally a walking infection
s'why every girl has a burning question for des and it's "did you wear protection?"
its not bad but its not good
our previous bout I took it easy, this time I'll bury you I promise
if you were ever holding back.. it was ur homies hair so he could vomit
clean but meh to okay
this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice
nice
u handle losses like a bitch, just peep the condition
Des can't Stand to lose.. legend has it he prefers the fetal position
okay closer


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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
its okay but i used a habenero play a few weeks back so hhmm
don’t even need to try to beat that trash. put a fork in. ur finished brah
if u come out ahead in votes, I got some questions for Cambridge Analytica
this was decent
faced me before and it was clear u got stomped friend...
so ur not just beating a dead horse, ur Cro posting in inf’s champ props thread
dont ged it
u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop.
But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk
this was alright
I’m twisted, bitch. Step to me and get vicious hits
all they gotta do is take a look at the D V and see that I’m sick w/ it
meh

des prob had the best two bars with chalkboard and Cambridge closely followed by jump the gun by fresh. After that prob fresh's opener, des's opener and fresh's closer. After that i def preferred fresh's worst two to des's. In the end i prob got fresh just edging to fresh this time on consistency. Good battle though.
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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse

Idk, I expected more from this battle. Was a bit underwhelming. I feel like Des had the better punch that landed with habanero but even that had lazy wording on it. I got Des winning

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u abuse ur daughter, it ain't physical but u should be dead in the ground
because the way Deserter is by being a dead beat "dad" who's Never Around
this faggots catch phrase is "how high"... my opponents hopeless
and if he doesn't Jump the Gun will end his life without a moments notice

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u need a vet to help word shit. Cuz to me, u got worse
but even with Hab n aero... it still wouldn’t be a hot verse
-- this was a great example of a wordplay that works both ways and should be praised considering the atmosphere we are writing in these days, lotb

u were improving, so what happened? ur latest bars are queer. Just stop.
But don’t just go back to the drawing board... u need to reengineer the chalk
2 quotes are towards Des he had lotb w/ habanero and chalkboard was pretty good too. Had had good consistency, no clear misses but Des didn't have bad misses so he takes it on the weight of quotes alone.
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