Gaslight 1-0 vs Suthaveli 1-0 - SUTHAVELI WINS

Cred · 03-19-2018, 08:29 AM

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Gaslight · 03-21-2018, 07:50 PM

You no tek' n' all talk. Can't deal with ya switch ups any more bro,
One sec ya flip ya shit the next you lay back n kick it... fake ass Eddie Gordo!
You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em.
So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision.
See this rat will bounce soon as it heats up. I'm sayin he's a right snitcher.
We'll see ya singin 'fore ya step bro...
Fucking Catalina wine mixer!
But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot.
But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot.
You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch
I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up!

Suthaveli · 03-22-2018, 10:07 AM

Look..

I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean
Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave
We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya
But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria
Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump
Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts
Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin
I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas
Tell everyone who u are & I won't even hurt u, fam...
Or end this Alias Investigation in'a snap- Jessica Jones vs Purple Man

g'luck @Gaslight

Habitat · 03-22-2018, 10:39 AM

You no tek' n' all talk. Can't deal with ya switch ups any more bro,
One sec ya flip ya shit the next you lay back n kick it... fake ass Eddie Gordo!
not a fan
You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em.
So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision.
weak
See this rat will bounce soon as it heats up. I'm sayin he's a right snitcher.
We'll see ya singin 'fore ya step bro...
Fucking Catalina wine mixer!
nah man.. 'fore does not mean before so this doesn't work.
But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot.
But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot.
I can't stand these types of bars they don't make sense... Ill put 13 in her guts, that's a rabies shot lol I cant stand when kotd or url guys do it and I cant stand it even more when text guys do it. had potential but missed as is
You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch
I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up!
funny but not that harsh ill give a jab here

vs

I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean
Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave
dated concept.
We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya
But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria
decent
Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump
Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts
ok
Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin
I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas
ok
Tell everyone who u are & I won't even hurt u, fam...
Or end this Alias Investigation in'a snap- Jessica Jones vs Purple Man
not a fan of these types of bars... You changed the execution with your melon / sangria bar and made it better but I don't like these "something something- that's jones vs purple man" formats.

gas needs some work he has the idea but will need to do some work if he's gonna be a problem here. suth had a few good hits.

v/suthaveli

DynamiCz · 03-22-2018, 11:11 AM

You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em.
So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision.

Ok

You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch
I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up!

Lol Coo

------

We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya
But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria
Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump
Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts

Nice

Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin
I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas

I like this here

Going with Suth here, Gas your verse was cool just have to get a little more creative with your setups. Suth had a some nice jabs here. Props to both!

V-Suth

Jabari Black · 03-23-2018, 09:51 PM

Gaslight stats out. I thought the opener was okay at best. The next three were all misses to me. The punches just weren’t there. Your closer was very pauseworthy lol but it was good word play and I liked the line lol.

Suth was more consistent with his punches - they were landing a bit more. Opener wasn’t that great imo but you picked it up. The sandgria line was pretty good and followed up with the sour diesel line. Not haymakers, but punches landed.

Texas bomb line was okay. I’ve already heard similar lines which is kinda bad cus I barely haven’t been here long but it was still fine. Honestly, I didn’t get your closet so it didn’t land to me.

Overall I gotnSuth taking it. He landed one or two more punches and had a bit more consistent verse.

Cred · 03-24-2018, 08:50 AM

But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot.
But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot.

vs

I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean
Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave
We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya
But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria
Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump
Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts

Lol this nigga Suth styled wit his first 3 bars, I fuck wit em. Sangria shit was fuego. I was fuckin wit that one punch from Gas tho, other than that everything jus came up short.

Vote / Suthaveli

Concrete · 03-24-2018, 08:55 AM

Gas; 1st, light. 2nd, ? 3rd, kinda fun. 4th, decent. 5th, lol.

Suth; 1st, nice. 2nd, ok. 3rd, ok. 4th, works for me. Eh, a bit convulted.

Kinda even match, both did their thing with some hits and misses, tho Suths punches hit more direct, better worded and such. Yeah, so vote Suth.

03-19-2018, 08:29 AM	#1
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Gaslight 1-0 vs Suthaveli 1-0 - SUTHAVELI WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday MARCH 22 and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

03-21-2018, 07:50 PM	#2
Gaslight Dead Sheeran Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: NY Posts: 33 Rep Power: 345245	You no tek' n' all talk. Can't deal with ya switch ups any more bro, One sec ya flip ya shit the next you lay back n kick it... fake ass Eddie Gordo! You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em. So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision. See this rat will bounce soon as it heats up. I'm sayin he's a right snitcher. We'll see ya singin 'fore ya step bro... Fucking Catalina wine mixer! But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot. But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot. You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up! Last edited by Gaslight; 03-22-2018 at 07:06 AM.

03-22-2018, 10:39 AM	#4
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519558	You no tek' n' all talk. Can't deal with ya switch ups any more bro, One sec ya flip ya shit the next you lay back n kick it... fake ass Eddie Gordo! not a fan You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em. So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision. weak See this rat will bounce soon as it heats up. I'm sayin he's a right snitcher. We'll see ya singin 'fore ya step bro... Fucking Catalina wine mixer! nah man.. 'fore does not mean before so this doesn't work. But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot. But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot. I can't stand these types of bars they don't make sense... Ill put 13 in her guts, that's a rabies shot lol I cant stand when kotd or url guys do it and I cant stand it even more when text guys do it. had potential but missed as is You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up! funny but not that harsh ill give a jab here vs I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave dated concept. We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria decent Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts ok Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas ok Tell everyone who u are & I won't even hurt u, fam... Or end this Alias Investigation in'a snap- Jessica Jones vs Purple Man not a fan of these types of bars... You changed the execution with your melon / sangria bar and made it better but I don't like these "something something- that's jones vs purple man" formats. gas needs some work he has the idea but will need to do some work if he's gonna be a problem here. suth had a few good hits. v/suthaveli __________________

03-22-2018, 11:11 AM	#5
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829177	You're not a gangster, you're a mama's boy. Her heels, you grew up in em. So I couldn't see you bein raised by the streets without some super vision. Ok You take everything so serious, freakin' at the slightest touch I'll make you drink some anal bleach. This asshole needs to lighten up! Lol Coo ------ We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts Nice Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas I like this here Going with Suth here, Gas your verse was cool just have to get a little more creative with your setups. Suth had a some nice jabs here. Props to both! V-Suth __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

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03-22-2018, 10:07 AM	#3
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	Look.. I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts Baaawse, I'm flex. Got ya bich in her braaa undressin I'm da bomb in'a total package. u're sufferin da fate of victim in Austin, Texas Tell everyone who u are & I won't even hurt u, fam... Or end this Alias Investigation in'a snap- Jessica Jones vs Purple Man g'luck @Gaslight

03-23-2018, 09:51 PM	#6
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Gaslight stats out. I thought the opener was okay at best. The next three were all misses to me. The punches just weren’t there. Your closer was very pauseworthy lol but it was good word play and I liked the line lol. Suth was more consistent with his punches - they were landing a bit more. Opener wasn’t that great imo but you picked it up. The sandgria line was pretty good and followed up with the sour diesel line. Not haymakers, but punches landed. Texas bomb line was okay. I’ve already heard similar lines which is kinda bad cus I barely haven’t been here long but it was still fine. Honestly, I didn’t get your closet so it didn’t land to me. Overall I gotnSuth taking it. He landed one or two more punches and had a bit more consistent verse.

03-24-2018, 08:50 AM	#7
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	But somehow with that minute dick ya pulled a cute chick. I mean ya lady's hot. But I'm the wrong bloke, got a long stroke. I'll put 13" in her guts... rabies shot. vs I'm funny af. What i got in store for u in packs is mean Let's get da jokes up outta da way- So sorry sir, u're gonna have ta leave We can do this either way: I could let these hands greet ya But rather put enough shots up in ya melon& make it into a Sangria Ya ass is grass when i put da eagles 2 ya, chump Spark them biches & gas lights up quicker than Sour Diesel in mah blunts Lol this nigga Suth styled wit his first 3 bars, I fuck wit em. Sangria shit was fuego. I was fuckin wit that one punch from Gas tho, other than that everything jus came up short. Vote / Suthaveli

03-24-2018, 08:55 AM	#8
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158974	Gas; 1st, light. 2nd, ? 3rd, kinda fun. 4th, decent. 5th, lol. Suth; 1st, nice. 2nd, ok. 3rd, ok. 4th, works for me. Eh, a bit convulted. Kinda even match, both did their thing with some hits and misses, tho Suths punches hit more direct, better worded and such. Yeah, so vote Suth.