Alvin Karpis 8-4 vs DynaMicz 5-2 #1 CONTENDER - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

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@Alvin Karpis @DynamiCz

[DynamiCz]

Check Karp, imma do 10-12

[Alvin Karpis]

10 is perfect, want to post tonight?

[Alvin Karpis]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you
After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks
Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week...

[DynamiCz]

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops
Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker
See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel
He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville

[Incredible]

Alvin Karpis:

"I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours"

"You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you"


DynamiCz:

"When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic"

"My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention"

"Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker"

Overall was a decent battle, expected to see a little bit better/longer bars,(meaning more than 10lines) being that this is a contenders match. But with that aside I think that DynamiCz dropped a pretty solid verse, for me imo at least. Alvins was pretty cool too but I wasn't feeling the ass cheek/last week line and thought your opener didn't really make the impact I think that you were looking for there. Both had a decent flow and cool concepts just think that DynamiCz got this one. Props to both for showing early. good luck to whoever makes it to the champ match.

[Habitat]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
wording is weird
I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours
collar bone is old and didn't feel anything fresh to the flip
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
cool
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you
didn't like this
After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks
Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week...
ehh not hard hitting u shouldn't be saying at least hes cooler than the other guy it would be worse if he was not cooler ya know.. didn't care much for the concept anyway

vs

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
haven't seen this approach before lol framing ur opponent for a crime. tbh didn't care for this bar much. it was creative but didn't really attack ur opponent imo
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
ok
The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops
Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox
"you might don't even see the pops" do one last final edit before you post.
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker
coulda been worded better but decent
See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel
He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville
didn't like this

Close af here but I gotta go with dynamicz for the upset. Alvin maybe u underestimated ur opponent? I dunno. Dynamicz been improving tho so good shit.

v/dynamicz

[Blue Bayou]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
fuck yeah, cool nameplay and the wordings nice
I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours
nice twist on the collar wordplay... liked this
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
decent attack line... solid, not great
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you
okay concept, punch in general seems light
After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks
Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week...
lol, decent enough but not very hard hitting

vs.

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
played, I've seen a lot of these np's and the set-up multi is weak
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
piece/peace would need a crazy flip to hit for me, this was okay as an attack line'
The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops
Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox
nah a miss for me.. and it's very choppy
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker
concept/meta is cool as an attack line.. doens;t hit very hard tho
See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel
He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville
okay nameplay, I can't help but feel like him "in the house" doesn't really hit hard at all tho


Overall decent short battle from both as I'm not familiar with Dynamic & I;ve seen Karp drop better/with more effort... that said tho Karpis won this imo, his opener was my favorite line of the battle, and his so-so jabs throughout were more enjoyable to me due to the wording

Vote - Alvin Karpis

[Cred]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you

vs


My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker

This was nice short match up tbh. I wish Alvin would’ve had jus a punch or 2 more like his opener cus that shit was dope but the bars I didn’t quote I wasn’t really at all. Micz hitchhiker joint was dope too. This one was a tough call but I jus enjoyed dynamicz verse a bit more here.

Vote / Dynamicz

[Concrete]

AK; 1st, liked it. 2nd, decent. 3rd, a bit simple but aight. 4th, meh. 5th, kinda weak finisher.

Dyna; 1st, cool concept, bad flip. 2nd, fresh flip on an old play. 3rd, didnt get the play here :( 4th, ok but could been used better. 5th, what the hell?

Another even match with ups and down from both sides, I'd say its pretty even punchwize n thats why I'll give the vote to AK, for better structure and wording.

[Suthaveli]

ak- i like the carter 5 punch.

dyn- the hippie & the hitch hiker line were nice.


i like the potential approach w.ak & the mike will made it punch. it didn't wrk for me some reasom tho. I felt most of ya verse didn't. like u put something out just because.
Dynamic i feel like this is the first verse i read from u & it was coo. ya gunplay might hv od too much for my taste, but most of ya lines were worded pretty well. just switch up the monotony & u cool.

i thought i was comin in here to do an automatic vote for AK tbh.

but mvgt- @DynamiCz on the upset. even the non quotes were better.

[Schadenfreude]

VOTE ALVIN KARPIS
Dynamicz had too many familiar concepts w/o any fresh flips to 'em. The AK nameplays have been done better & other than 'hitchhiker' the punches weren't impactful enough. As for Karp, his nameplays were off cuz I assume it's dynaMicks, not dynaMikes. Other than that the verse was decent, nothing really stood out, but the verse was more effective than his opponents.

[Destroyer]

karp got this with more creativity
I wasn’t feeling the opener, probably cause I pronounce dude’s name wrong
Collar bone was mean. Coolest Mic - I see u
Most of dynamics shit was just played or simple
Hippie bar for example.

V/AK

[Enbombz]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
okay opener
I’ll hit ya so called bitch up and fuck. she just a stupid whore
I’ll collar, bone, break out just as fast then what I’ll do to yours
doesn't read well
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
basic but cool
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you
dont get it
After this L you’ll rage quit, we all knew you was ass cheeks
Fuck it, at least you’ll be the coolest Mic to sign out in the last week
its an okay angle but could of been done better

vs

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
tied in nice ak plays been done but it was good enough
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
okay but wording hurt this
The heat propped.... single parent home, you might dont even see the pops
Big shots, the flat tommy change this bitch stomach.....think tea detox
don't get it, typo
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker
nice but wording again
See Alvin Karpis was a real gangsta, from you personally I dont get that feel
He just died from the steel, now a voice yelling "Alvin" in the house like Dave Seville
not really into this


Surprisingly this is petty close. Ak came lazy here tbh. Fairly clean and punchy as usual for the most part but was a pretty bland verse overall. Dynamic who? Tbh i thought you had the better concepts here, and did more with them as well. Your end rhymes need cleaning up, that did take away from a coupe here that if done better would of made this a clear v. I got dynamic who here though but i can see why it close.

[Letterman]

Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit

Vs

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker

Personally, I can’t credit the mike flips because I’m pretty sure dynamics would be pronounced as Mick’s not Mike’s. I feel like Dynamicz won this with one more hit than AK.

v/Dyna

[Saint]

Alv edged it, slightly more effective verse.
Dyn had the hitchhiker line I thought was cool..
Neither deserve a champ match tbh

V -- Karp

[bleak]

At work so this might be quick.

Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you

When its crime...no fingerprints left behind, the scene I rinsed it
In the lab w/ the scope....I link the bullets to AK like gun forensic
My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker

Some of these nameplays from Al would have hit but I have never thought his name was pronounced Mics only Mix. It wasn't a bad verse just kinda disconnected me from those specific punches.

Dy surprised me here and had a very consistent verse. Some of them were a little basic but I can dig the vibe.

Dynamicz takes it kind of comfortably Al could have taken it w/ a little more maybe he underestimated his opponent?

[Allen Knight]

All that will power but ya skill sour, no way this weak clown want it
Mic will made it this far but now I’m layin this beat down on em
Or twist ya neck with disrespect, you’ll get dismantled quick
One snap...& that’s an end to your world on some Thanos shit
^^^fire
You better off in the closet & that can’t be more true...
I bet double Destroyer’s raise... Carter 5 comin out before you

vs


My blood pressure hasn't been normal, I been hyper for the tension
If he choose to speak, I greet him with the piece...this a hippie convention
Today I came to box...gloves on.....I'm prepared as a fighter
Or the thumb up w/ the arm extended, i cock the revolver like a hitchhiker



v/Karp, good battle damn that thanos line from karp was firee, & hitchiker line from dyna was dope shit this is close but i thought karp had the stronger hits out the 2 but can go either way, props to both on a nice battle.

[sral]

Damn, close battle.. way closer than I expected..

Karpis had some lines but nothing that really had IMPACT behind it to hit and land, you know? Lay a beat down been done. Thanos was cool but more swag and flow type ish to me. Carter 5 was just okay. Rest I could have done without in all honesty. Not bad, just nothing that really stood out as harsh or fresh as fuck.

Dyna: You did better than I thought you would here, gun forensics been done previously but not bad, give him the piece was okay but again I've seen it before (think it was piece to your head like a hippie, but still similar) Arm extended/hitchhiker again was a cool idea but more swag and flow type ish to me so didn't really land as hard as it could have maybe? It's a close one. I think overall Karpis was the fresher of the two idea wise and had less misses, so I give him the nod. Barely.

Alvin Karpis

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7-7

FIRST UP BY 2 VOTES WINS.