Lyric Olympics: Orc (C) vs bleak - ORC WINS

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LYRIC

Where the winner/ champion decides the following week’s format.

Rules:
Participants will get an invite via PM and must respond within 24 hours or I’m moving on to the next.

This will all take place in the discussion forum. Matches, verses and votes.

If you no-show you’ll be banned from the Discussion forum. NO EXCUSES. You accept this when you agree to battle.

Votes should have a brief explanation but I’ll take what we can get to keep things moving.

Line limit is 20, 16 minimum (but i'm flexible)
First to 5 votes (must win by two)


Verses due Wed at 12am ET.
Votes due by Friday at 12am ET.



Format champion chose: PIC BATTLE (get pics in latest 2 days after thread is made, or will result in DQ.)

@Orc @bleak



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[bleak]

In ill get a pic up at some point today

That one I used for the roast never got roasted but I can use a diff one of you want



On the right

[Orc]

if possible do 10-12 bro. are u on the left or right? @bleak

[bleak]

Originally Posted by Orc

Jesus what a forehead. Wide face you lookin kinda retarded
Fk this autist's outbursts. I'd cross that hair line if i could find where it started
This frame: bottle service, a hard ass of GOAT tier.
Next frame: bottle service... shards of glass in both ears.
I'm blasting thru the Old Guard... so far I'm burning the stables.
&&&when I put a pound on it: the New Balance got ME turning the tables
wack steez make me wanna clap heat so stop w/ the faking.
Think i wont Jack D's goods? If I pass fists, it's ya watch that I'm taking
get some folk to nick ya hoe. We in the swamps of Something, Dixie.
Yall in the same boat: Irish bitches drinking southern whiskey.
So you top shelf, the bomb right? Don't front like u got wealth.
Cz ur drinking from the bottom... & there's a bomb in the top shelf.

Like I'm IRA @Witty u are worthless

13 @Orc

[Orc]

YOOO

You'll never be the Heir, just a loser witha beady stare
You've Struggled for Growth for soo long it's no wonder you got that receding hair
I know Neighbor's his fav & I'm supposed to grind this man's bones
But I can't even be mad. Frankly I'm impressed that he knows Giant Hand Jones
&&&&know I move in silence, my whooole crew is violent
bleak ain't on that do or die tip...this the ONLY time he's had a Tool Behind Him
Orc gotta b slick. Your swagg is honestly shit, a bottomless pit
U're just an average Joe, but that still dont explain the Metts photobomb in this pic!?
Typical American white trashhh, just a lame n' a drifter
This looks like you're celebrating the fact your brother got engaged to your sister
I can't hang with these hillbilly simpletons that cut no bud
Know how I know you're a dirt person!? You look more like Uh Oh than Uh Oh does

[El Muffin]

Bleak had .. Opener .. I liked how that came off
Bottle service I wasn't feeling
New balance was smooth but conceptually I was lost
Pass fists Nahhh
Irish whiskey was kinda cool
Closer was eh

Orc had Opener .
Giant hand Jones I wasn't feeling
Tool behind him was ok
Next 4 were jokes though xD
Closer eh ok

V/ orc

The metts n incest bars took it lol

[Witty]

I only saw my mention. I don't mean to freepost. But wtf do you mean by that tho? Literally couldn't figure it out.

Orc delete this if you want, I will try to get to this battle.

[Amen]

Bleak had a good eye for concept selection but his executions are bad. If he'd execute the concepts harsh, he'd be a dope picture battler. I feel like I've said this prior for some reason, lol...

Orc had Tools behind him, the Metts photo bomb and the Celebration for incest wedding was dope, lol

V/Orc with the HOMI.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by bleak

Jesus what a forehead. Wide face you lookin kinda retarded
Fk this autist's outbursts. I'd cross that hair line if i could find where it started

not really clever, funny or accurate

This frame: bottle service, a hard ass of GOAT tier.
Next frame: bottle service... shards of glass in both ears.

nah

I'm blasting thru the Old Guard... so far I'm burning the stables.
&&&when I put a pound on it: the New Balance got ME turning the tables

this is ok

wack steez make me wanna clap heat so stop w/ the faking.
Think i wont Jack D's goods? If I pass fists, it's ya watch that I'm taking

whos d? an is there a play on pass fists...I guess cuz it would have to pass his fist to leave his wrist when you took it? this a reach for me...u just have to read too far into it for it to work and it loses impact

get some folk to nick ya hoe. We in the swamps of Something, Dixie.
Yall in the same boat: Irish bitches drinking southern whiskey.

man im not fucking with this verse....I feel like you trying too hard to put together intricate concepts but not tying them together properly

So you top shelf, the bomb right? Don't front like u got wealth.
Cz ur drinking from the bottom... & there's a bomb in the top shelf.

nah

Like I'm IRA @Witty u are worthless

13 @Orc

Originally Posted by Orc

YOOO

You'll never be the Heir, just a loser witha beady stare
You've Struggled for Growth for soo long it's no wonder you got that receding hair

both start out with hairline quips....this one was better tho....take note on how to establish the concept and join it with the punch in clean execution

I know Neighbor's his fav & I'm supposed to grind this man's bones
But I can't even be mad. Frankly I'm impressed that he knows Giant Hand Jones

LMFAO

&&&&know I move in silence, my whooole crew is violent
bleak ain't on that do or die tip...this the ONLY time he's had a Tool Behind Him

flow brazy, relevant pic punch

Orc gotta b slick. Your swagg is honestly shit, a bottomless pit
U're just an average Joe, but that still dont explain the Metts photobomb in this pic!?

lmao jokes on jokes on jokes

Typical American white trashhh, just a lame n' a drifter
This looks like you're celebrating the fact your brother got engaged to your sister

light

I can't hang with these hillbilly simpletons that cut no bud
Know how I know you're a dirt person!? You look more like Uh Oh than Uh Oh does


legit gone

really a matter of staggered skillset here. bleak was outclassed. props for showing up but the bars need some work.

v orc

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This frame: bottle service, a hard ass of GOAT tier.
Next frame: bottle service... shards of glass in both ears.
I liked this
I'm blasting thru the Old Guard... so far I'm burning the stables.
&&&when I put a pound on it: the New Balance got ME turning the tables
Creative and nicely worded imo

vs

&&&&know I move in silence, my whooole crew is violent
bleak ain't on that do or die tip...this the ONLY time he's had a Tool Behind Him
Nice
Orc gotta b slick. Your swagg is honestly shit, a bottomless pit
U're just an average Joe, but that still dont explain the Metts photobomb in this pic!?
Good
I can't hang with these hillbilly simpletons that cut no bud
Know how I know you're a dirt person!? You look more like Uh Oh than Uh Oh does
Lmao good closer

This was good match up to say the least, when I read bleaks verse I was pretty impressed but Orc came and did his thing and I actually enjoyed the humor he brought here. Nicely executed

Vote / Orc