Netcees Inspired Style

[JESODIST]

My Mind Addiction, To build Rhymes Like a Technician,
Adore the Almighty in the Skies, The Mission,
Never ending Warfare is the Life of a Christian,
While You spread more Lies than a Politician,
Don't debate my Lines your Not in A Position,
Stuck in Volition, Scared of the Ghostly Apparition,
Conform to my Decision, Dethrone the Opposition,
With Stock piled Ammunition, Commence a World Wide Expedition,
Don't try to Slice the Nicest Encryption,
You'll just set yourself up for Timed Demolition,
Soldier and Monstrous Savage Going on a Murderous Rampage,
Blundering Carnage With the Power to Damage
Fuckers can't Manage leave you all Covered in Bandage,
I'm a Giant Vortex Devouring Worlds Assaulting With Comets,
Titan Exposing elements in skin used to sharpen Metallic Objects,
Smash Titanic Targets with Gigantic forces of Crashing Rockets,
Terrible Sheep Tremble Deep Whenever the Incredible Speak,
Make you understand you're Just Edible Meat,
So Artistic In Text Unleashing Cataclysmic Events,
Work on Your grammar before Greeting The Best,
Minds evolve by just Speaking Some Sense,
Sore Above The Bright Scene Like Sparrows,
Liars that Follow Get hit with a Thousand Fiery Arrows,
Can't even handle a Tide from the Shallows, Go hide in the Shadows
Luminous Veracious Sargent with Fathomless Margins Spotless Garments,
Regard the Bombardments Bottomless Compartments Shatter to Fragments,
Woeful Poetry Potency in Verbosity,
Choke hold Mediocre Performance of Mythical Tyrants
Lyrical Alliance on some Metaphysical Defiance,
Psychical Amorphous Critical Violence,
Cyborg Gadgetry, Bound Insanity, Bestowed Vanity Explore the Calamity,
Of Berserk Unknown Academy, Experts on Hardcore Brutality,
Assured Tactfully Regrown Rapidly Gradually in Profound Alchemy,
Beyond Gallantly Reach out Breech Clouds Floating in Gravity,
Faculty Exposed Fallacy? get Thrown from Your Balcony,
Colossal Agility Deflect Mortals Seekin Me, Defend with Paranormal Ability,
Abhor So called Flows of Simplicity with Total Tranquility,
Golden Rap Boss Problem Solving like Math Class,
Humming Coded Mantras Absorbing your Glowing Chakras,
Cloaked in Dark Gas Foes get By Pass Build a Fort on their Carcass...

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[gitto138]

Yo dude, i like your style, although it seems to me to be forced in places, but
i was allured by the captivating concepts, enjoyed the galactic theme very
charismatic,,

I'm a Giant Vortex Devouring Worlds Assaulting With Comets,
Titan Exposing elements in skin used to sharpen Metallic Objects,
Smash Titanic Targets with Gigantic forces of Crashing Rockets,
Terrible Sheep Tremble Deep Whenever the Incredible Speak,
Make you understand you're Just Edible Meat,
,, i liked this pert,,

Woeful Poetry Potency in Verbosity,
Choke hold Mediocre Performance of Mythical Tyrants
Lyrical Alliance on some Metaphysical Defiance,
Psychical Amorphous Critical Violence,
Cyborg Gadgetry, Bound Insanity, Bestowed Vanity Explore the Calamity,
Of Berserk Unknown Academy, Experts on Hardcore Brutality,
Assured Tactfully Regrown Rapidly Gradually in Profound Alchemy,
Beyond Gallantly Reach out Breech Clouds Floating in Gravity,
Faculty Exposed Fallacy? get Thrown from Your Balcony,
Colossal Agility Deflect Mortals Seekin Me, Defend with Paranormal Ability,
Abhor So called Flows of Simplicity with Total Tranquility,

^^^ dope flow

[Witty]

Keep doing your thing, you're getting better with each piece you write, some of the wording in this was a little awkward but with some polishing you could be very good...what's with the capital letters all the time tho? It isn't overly important but it does get a little annoying. It felt sometimes you used 'big' words for the sake of using them when something more simple would have sufficed...this was cool tho, keep writing and you'll keep getting better.

I'm gonna have to drop something soon to remind NC how The Fox do...it's been too long.

[Certain]

Why is everything title-cased? I can't read it enjoyably and smoothly.

[Eŋg]

this was good. you have talent. stop molesting the shift button, please. i don't think there is such a thing as a style here. but maybe there is and i have too much ego. if there is, let it impress you, but not make too much of an impression.

[JESODIST]

3 solid Feeds enough to Awaken the Beast with Forsasken Frees ready to Annihilate Emcees
Leave them looking like Blazed Debris to be carried away like a Plague Disease in Raging Breeze
This is the come back you know that I won't just Make a Tease, Burn you like Insane Degrees
I post bomb raps that make your dome crack and Cause your Brain to Freeze
Poisoning rats opposing the dark and roaming the ark trynna Take the Cheese
Battle rap Against These? Baby Please you Can't even handle Ego Playing Grease
Let Us Now Proceed Sign me Up for the League, My Soul is In Need so Show me A Deed
Ama write write write while Puffing the Weed and Torch the Lead from a Fortress Indeed
The Wizard that made the Sorcerers Bleed On the Earth that you See and From each drop a Demon Sprout like a Seed
Trust me am lyrically celebate so you ain't Fuckin with Me when the Monster Release
A be Burning Trees and Murking with Ease, Rattle your skull when Pounding the Keys
Tempt you till you are left Hung from the Trees like that Traitor Juda, Everything I Say is Luda
Calm and collect like a Sacred Buddha, you are not safe when I infiltrate the base with a Range Bazooka
The Acclaimed Kula With more gauntlets and fire balls than A Stage with Cupa
A Trained Eluder that is here to Kill you in cyber brawls then Escape to Cuba
@Eng All gladly take the pill and lock myself in a Rhyme Capsule, Cover you with A Light Mantle
Then relive the events from a Time Vascule trained a Troop of Turtles that Grew the Muscles
That rebelled against splinter and Consumed his Morsels instead of having them Entombed in Fossils
Now you know that I am mad dangerous Inside for @Certain
Pleading to the spirit of Satan watching from Behind the Curtain
He told me Climb the Mountain, That there is going to be a cave and Inside a Fountain
That grants Eternal Life to the Infernal Type like @Witty
Got that topical mind and go all out when it's time to get Grime and Gritty
Anybody want to welcome me Back It's All Right, It's All Hype Am the Far Knight
And go by the Alias Children Guild A.K.A. the Living Shield
Peace and Love Brothers

[Mr. J]

Needs more capitals.


nice to see you giving feed, even if its on your own piece...kidding