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01-24-2014, 02:53 AM
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Worst of the worst
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Ryan 12 vs Pyro - RYAN WINS
Ryan 12 vs Pyro
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01-24-2014, 08:50 AM
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Shunnin Da Chillins
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checking in.. G'luck bro. Don't let my record fool you ;)
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01-28-2014, 09:04 AM
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Worst of the worst
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Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi This guy is offically gay as fuck Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck @Pyro |
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01-29-2014, 04:06 AM
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Shunnin Da Chillins
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You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic
you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type. which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy? "Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?" Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender. Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me? I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie. you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch sorry Netcees wasn't working for me all yesterday
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01-29-2014, 10:55 AM
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Worst of the worst
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http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=45310
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=49231 OPEN FOR VOTES @Pyro get ur links |
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01-29-2014, 01:27 PM
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Shunnin Da Chillins
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01-29-2014, 02:55 PM
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The Bad Guys.
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Opener, morals
Vs Goal tender V/Ryan, decent battle, pryo had alot of ideas but wording was off.. Ryan had a solid verse. Opener was nice He was more consists here imo he wins.
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01-31-2014, 07:41 PM
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NJ Devil
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Ryan by a neck
Surprised I never saw that more ls wp b4
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01-31-2014, 08:28 PM
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the 'teaching him ethnics' typo was the only lol here.
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02-02-2014, 12:18 PM
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I used to be dope at text
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Vote ryan. The morals line, n the life of pi line were cool. The life of pi line was way smoother. Both of you have weird wording at times.
The fruit smoothie was aite, n that lets see ya smile bitch would've prolly been ok live. |
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02-11-2014, 08:13 AM
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Certified Mother’s Boy
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morals line was dopeee
smoothie line had cool execution ryans had the life of pi that was cool too vote ryan |
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02-11-2014, 03:36 PM
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Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi Ok concept - wording off, IMO. Came off a lil statement'ish. This guy is offically gay as fuck Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar No, doesn't even rhyme either, tho. With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it Dope concept - could have executed better tho. Morals/More L's, I've seen flipped a few times. You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character No, a lot of filler here. Could have choose some relevant to rhyme with character. lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck Played concept. vs You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type. Played concept. which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy? "Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?" Techs/Text wp's are extremely played. Probably more played then Defeat/Da feet. Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender. Eh - could have been dope, poorly executed, IMO. Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me? I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie. Nah. Had potential tho. Lazy execution. you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch No v/Ryan - More consistent with less misses. |
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02-11-2014, 04:17 PM
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Senior Member
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Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi Not great, its lacking sting This guy is offically gay as fuck Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar Damn man this could have been great, decent concept and nice personal but the wording made it a dud With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it This is better, nice punch/wordplay/concept You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character Whats with the no rhyming? This didn't work for me lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck Not feeling it You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type. I see what your going for but the connection isn't there. Why was he left behind? because he was a drag queen? decent concept poorly executed which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy? "Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?" no Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender. ehhh concept there but again execution is shit Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me? I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie. wtf? hell no you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch wtf again no Ryan takes this easily, with the morals line which was dope, and nothing else quotable but still had better bars than pyro. Pyro work on your wording dude, its killing you. You had a couple iight concepts but they fell flat do to poor wording. v/Ryan |
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