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Old 12-18-2013, 03:23 AM   #1
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Jesus Christ appeared in the golden flood lights; captive in joy;
basking in joy; he waved me forward; through the field of jasmine;
overjoyed - with happiness; I blushed a blasphemous, flash of the void:
I was ecstatic; I acted coy; In a trance; poised; in rags of decoy;
under the sequoia tree; furthest expression; from that of annoyed.
enchanted; the voice was pure passion deployed
toying with the emotions; of those who inhabited troy;
the masked-men; the black smith; the rabid, the droid
all caught in my auras omega-blast and destroyed.
the rabbit - runs across the field; faster then noise;
the non-believers are captured; dispatched as employed
angels; wing spans; that caused drafts that dampened the spirits of 'bad';
who Sigmund Freud would later psycho analyze; as cracked,
language the lord would not entertain;ears clasped to avoid;
4 corners of earth - unknown to maps and tabloids;
knowledge was power he had; in a bronze grasp of alloy;
From the western alps that lined france - the geograph of Savoy
to the windy city, ferocious flags of Illinois
to the Vietnam veterans of the capital of Hanoi
smiling; with gold teeth; dipping dumplings; splashing in soy
in south east china; chatting in Amoy;
decorative fish, ponds of red, white, yellow patterns of Koi
the Hawaiian woman offers him a bowl of; 'Sweetest mashings of Poi'
he travels around the world met with ever-lasting "Ahoy"
he is elite - Hoi Oligoi
his name is Roy Al.
''Captain Roy''
here to save planet earth from asteroid hemorrhoid

'king, you are not the Lord - perhaps it's a ploy' -

Jesus Christ had returned -


a black little boy
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Old 12-18-2013, 03:47 AM   #2
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Old 12-18-2013, 08:57 AM   #3
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Old 12-18-2013, 09:36 AM   #4
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stop posting this

its just about my least favorite of your verses
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Old 12-18-2013, 10:55 AM   #5
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What's dead bra talking about.

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Old 12-18-2013, 11:36 AM   #6
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Reposting a verse already on page one, this time with your main account and different title?

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Old 12-18-2013, 12:57 PM   #7
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Someday, my sons will repost it too
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Old 12-18-2013, 04:06 PM   #8
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stop posting this

its just about my least favorite of your verses
Interesting. Why do you say that?
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Old 12-18-2013, 05:23 PM   #9
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stadilz, Frank? See u still handling business.

lol i don't know how to feel about this, tbh. In some cases, the wording seemed kind of forced - with the obvious purpose to carry that 'oy' rhyme scheme. ex:

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under the sequoia tree; furthest expression; from that of annoyed.
or maybe i'm just reading it wrong. This may or may not be a flexercise judging by the train-of-thought'esque approach. Nonetheless, i still enjoyed it. To echo a previous poster's sentiment, i too felt this wasnt your strongest piece but there was still finger prints of obvious talent.
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Old 12-23-2013, 05:10 AM   #10
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this was interesting. a little off your usual 'thang', but i thought it was interesting. a little funny too. i'm gonna read this again.
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