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Old 05-06-2019, 04:31 PM   #1
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Default Week 3: Suthaveli (1-1) vs. josh s (1-1) - SUTHAVELI WINS

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Old 05-06-2019, 06:25 PM   #2
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Suthaveli let’s give these fools a banger
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Old 05-07-2019, 02:57 AM   #3
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"Cuz I pack a gauge, fam that'll splat ya brains. BLAM!"

Ade due Damballa. Give the power, I beg of you. This is a sinner’s hobby
Standing over Suth talking shit like Chucky right before I catch a bigger body
u wont blam a damn thing. Boy I’m str8 fooling with da fisticuffs
bet I spook his scary ass, bam boos’ll be coming from my hands when I stick him up
u really livin' ur dream, huh?.... nah, you acting out a cinema scene
even with da hawk I make u catch these hands; black panther, "GIVE IT TO ME!!"
u hardly slap, u got jabari black'd, stfu blam f4got u force da most puns
no moving weights? posin' dope guns? ur more of a bull key poser than Orc and Ghost1
why you got a stick up yo ass, suth? we all gotta read yo shit and is THAT fair?
I will Luiseville slugger this ass hole and give a whole new meaning to bat chair!
u aint got the juice so u knocked black out, stretched hands for the outlet, pass..
NAHHH, u aint got the juice so u knocked Black, outstretched hands for the outlet pass
sunday - monday , i'll show up at ya crib in Baltimore just to see if u street tough
then i'll mock aveli with the kind of seven day theory that'll really fuck his week up
i'm for sure cocky, maybe i didn't do enough but the heads I chopped got more sloppy
oh my god he didn't expect this big a round but as it turns out he's getting Thor Bodied

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Old 05-10-2019, 03:05 PM   #4
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Lettuce prey you go away.


Catch'a late night, pitch black. U bite da bullet while my tommy rests on jaw
Insert dat monsta in ur mouth durnin night vision'll have it look like u ate a Reptar bar
Mask on. Hood up. Tool on me. w.da droopy cig lit.
Bron gif: Shuriken, sure u can, shoryuken! It don't matter.. Suth's champin dis shit.
But fuck all dat introduction, bitch nigga. Just hope ya die please
I'll greet u w. a knee how? In kickboxing stance. U'd thought I was saying "Hi" in Chinese
Ain't gotta magic lamp, but I hope he dies from da mags he take
^ Sheeeit. I got da Will to make my wishes come true-- The Genie in da Aladdin remake
He ain't even about dat life. We feast off of sensing when fear's on
Cats w. stripes would murder dis boy in our jungle. Yea, a bunch'a Shear Khans
Ya hood pass in question. U speak & I can do nothing more than scoff
Cuz if I ever catch u on da block, my bull rush'll be how quickly I let dat Taurus off
Voodoo shit. Shoot his whip. Da machine hit him before he turns da car on
U'll die before I curse ya, mutha.. *Beeeeeeeeep!* Dead. Slumped on da car horn
My fist won't be ignored when ya think I whiff on u & beat ya whore friends
Thas on some Kim Jong Un sendin a message to Trump shit: Those miss'll be my warnings

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Old 05-12-2019, 10:29 AM   #5
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I feel like with the exceptcion of the Reptar bar play, Suth didn't really do it for me here. I liked Josh's verse better and that thor bodied is lotb. Nice. mvgt Josh
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Old 05-12-2019, 10:07 PM   #6
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Ade due Damballa. Give the power, I beg of you. This is a sinner’s hobby
Standing over Suth talking shit like Chucky right before I catch a bigger body
then i'll mock aveli with the kind of seven day theory that'll really fuck his week up
i'm for sure cocky, maybe i didn't do enough but the heads I chopped got more sloppy

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Ain't gotta magic lamp, but I hope he dies from da mags he take
^ Sheeeit. I got da Will to make my wishes come true-- The Genie in da Aladdin remake
Ya hood pass in question. U speak & I can do nothing more than scoff
Cuz if I ever catch u on da block, my bull rush'll be how quickly I let dat Taurus off





Decent battle here. Both should have went less bars imo. You guys almost have the same style, outlandish concepts with not so normal wording. Which is cool, if its executed right. Tighten that up and i think both 'll be beast. But this match was even in quotes to me. Thought Suth had bar of the battle with the Alladin jawn, he gets my vote here.

Vote - suthaveli
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Old 05-13-2019, 08:34 AM   #7
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This battle isn’t getting any votes because nobody wants to keep reading 16 lines per person


Ade due Damballa. Give the power, I beg of you. This is a sinner’s hobby
Standing over Suth talking shit like Chucky right before I catch a bigger body
lol nah
u wont blam a damn thing. Boy I’m str8 fooling with da fisticuffs
bet I spook his scary ass, bam boos’ll be coming from my hands when I stick him up
no
u really livin' ur dream, huh?.... nah, you acting out a cinema scene
even with da hawk I make u catch these hands; black panther, "GIVE IT TO ME!!"
no again
u hardly slap, u got jabari black'd, stfu blam f4got u force da most puns
no moving weights? posin' dope guns? ur more of a bull key poser than Orc and Ghost1
sigh, decent I guess
why you got a stick up yo ass, suth? we all gotta read yo shit and is THAT fair?
I will Luiseville slugger this ass hole and give a whole new meaning to bat chair!
wtf
u aint got the juice so u knocked black out, stretched hands for the outlet, pass..
NAHHH, u aint got the juice so u knocked Black, outstretched hands for the outlet pass
garbage
sunday - Monday , i'll show up at ya crib in Baltimore just to see if u street tough
then i'll mock aveli with the kind of seven day theory that'll really fuck his week up
isnt it makaveli? Mock Aveli isn’t a thing nor is it a word
i'm for sure cocky, maybe i didn't do enough but the heads I chopped got more sloppy
oh my god he didn't expect this big a round but as it turns out he's getting Thor Bodied
decent


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Catch'a late night, pitch black. U bite da bullet while my tommy rests on jaw
Insert dat monsta in ur mouth durnin night vision'll have it look like u ate a Reptar bar
nah
Mask on. Hood up. Tool on me. w.da droopy cig lit.
Bron gif: Shuriken, sure u can, shoryuken! It don't matter.. Suth's champin dis shit.
no
But fuck all dat introduction, bitch nigga. Just hope ya die please
I'll greet u w. a knee how? In kickboxing stance. U'd thought I was saying "Hi" in Chinese
decent?
Ain't gotta magic lamp, but I hope he dies from da mags he take
^ Sheeeit. I got da Will to make my wishes come true-- The Genie in da Aladdin remake
alright
He ain't even about dat life. We feast off of sensing when fear's on
Cats w. stripes would murder dis boy in our jungle. Yea, a bunch'a Shear Khans
decent, coulda been better with better execution
Ya hood pass in question. U speak & I can do nothing more than scoff
Cuz if I ever catch u on da block, my bull rush'll be how quickly I let dat Taurus off
decent
Voodoo shit. Shoot his whip. Da machine hit him before he turns da car on
U'll die before I curse ya, mutha.. *Beeeeeeeeep!* Dead. Slumped on da car horn
no
My fist won't be ignored when ya think I whiff on u & beat ya whore friends
Thas on some Kim Jong Un sendin a message to Trump shit: Those miss'll be my warnings
no


Lol tbh I feel like I just voted on two “idgaf” type verses. Josh, for someone who’s been talking so much on another site about how Netcees doesn’t know shit about live battles etc, talking about that’s why we’re not feelin your bars...nah bro....I doubt you even really believe you dropped nice here. Suth this was a step down from your previous battles, I guess you didn’t care too much cause you signed out etc etc. josh it was tough reading your verse and the lines I quoted as decent were barely that, felt like you were trolling. Suth had a few ok lines in his verse at least so he gets the W. I know there isn’t much motivation to try your hardest this season and I don’t blame you, but the better you write - the more votes you’ll get in the battle.


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Josh gets better every week. I'm starting to really feel his verses, to bad the leagues dying. He could really be a factor in upcoming weeks....

With that said suth was dope here..I think the reptar n Trump bars took it
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Old 05-13-2019, 02:51 PM   #9
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