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Old 04-21-2019, 01:34 PM   #1
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Old 04-21-2019, 08:46 PM   #2
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Old 04-21-2019, 10:06 PM   #3
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Old 04-23-2019, 12:48 AM   #4
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
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Old 04-23-2019, 06:26 AM   #5
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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star

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Old 04-23-2019, 02:46 PM   #6
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
lol ok
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
butch or ease out? I want to understand but don't have the time
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
good grief @Barcotic
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
flames
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
liked the delivery here. good wp


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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
lol I see what you did but this was silly
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
had to look up strewth, australian word I dig it.. wp is ok
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
hardy wp is just lazy
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
dont get the reference but I get the gist
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star
lol aiiiight man



MVGT Dom. Dial back and pop you'll arise did it it for me
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Old 04-23-2019, 03:12 PM   #7
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
cool misdirection
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
nah
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
fiiiire, and DAMN at that double diss
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
not feelin
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
pronounciation of Glasgow varies, only anglo outsiders say glass-go from my understanding, but I'll roll w/it here

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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
not sure where the witty concept is here, maybe I'm missing something
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
eh... looked up strewth and still, nah
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
this is decent
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
meh
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star
this could have been so much better.. OK wp but doesn't hit hard

v/ Dominate but aside from the dial back that faggot shit, not much to really be impressed with. Just a weak battle all around tbh. That one bar was HEAT tho
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Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc

good lord

doms whole verse was good but that was something else

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Old 04-23-2019, 03:45 PM   #9
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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
lol funny, good fresh open
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
butch or he's out...works perfect in slang..set-up well, tbh i think this is jokes
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
ether
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
yup...fresh, pretty smooth...nice
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
pretty cool...not tied in as well as your usual construction of bars but the Scot free angle you took here has good swag to it

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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
okay okay, this was cool havent seen grand scheme done like this
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
its strewth, ehh probably works if i say it in Zelph's lisp voice...cool concept
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
cool effective wordplay...like this
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
lol, dece site play
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star
sure he can in slang? sorry im not familiar with the word so i dunno if ive got it right...if so pretty fresh wp that is smooth in slang


Fun read i thought this was good short battle... Josh you were pretty fresh and had some enjoyable stuff, but i prefered Dom's concepts and wordplay on the whole... dial back was just a killer, first two bars funny and fresh....casper/pop u'll arise yup ... awesome concepts

Props to both.... Vote Dominate
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Old 04-23-2019, 04:11 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
Aight
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
Lol
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
Tight
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
Coulda been better imo but I dug this. Cool creativity
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
Ok

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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
Nah
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
No
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
Good attempt but not too strong
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
Cool
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star
Shuriken isn’t pronounced sure he can, kinda a statement rather than a punch anyways

Cross the line was cool by Josh but other than that this was a wash. V/ Dom
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Old 04-25-2019, 09:58 AM   #11
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Dominate -

Dope verse. You had your own style added to this. Very nice pen'. Good work.

Josh S - I have to give you props. That shuriken line was bar of the battle. Very good work.

Overall -

Dope battle, but Josh S edged this...

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With that brand of wackness there’s no chance that this man is a winner
Fuck praise. If Josh gets ‘attaboy’ he’s pitchin him candlelit dinners
ok lol
He likes girls swole and beefy.. really wants that nookie to POW
He takes his women like the wp memo he missed – butchery’s out
ok wordplay, decent bar overall though
Shut the hell up, peasant. Stop thinking that talk is smart
You need to dial back that faggot shit like u had a missed call from Barc
lol ok, more of a shot at barc but still made me smirk
I’ll have ya soul leave ya body when I pull up n blast ya kid
The mac or fifth. When it popularise a ghost.. It wont be like Casper did
not feelin this
Or get flamed w/ molotovs & flawlessed if u reckon to stop me
I’ll break a bottle off. The Glasgow into ur neck & I’m gettin off Scot free
ok closer


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Lets keep it a hundo, better yet a thousand my g
i bet a band that in the grand scheme of things u aint fucking with me
theres not really a punch in this bar
dafuq is this fag? here, have a fair suck of the sav
no lie, it's strewth, only chance I'm giving u is to get stuffed in the trash
what? Lol I’m trying to give you the benefit of the doubt and be liberal but idk what this is
aint mad max got switched to dominate, & if so fine
but judging by how hardy hits he'll probably waste lands the whole time
nah
kangaroo kid gee goody, nice guy, yes, never seems pushy
u cross the line? nah we'd all be shocked.. Joe Metts with the green hoody
fire af lol loved the wording/execution
dom's weapon of choice; the boomerang! mines a Chinese art
his style is miss and come back but I'm not shuriken be a rising star
nah man


Dominate didn’t have a wowing verse by any means, it was really just a bunch of wordplays that technically “worked” but none of the bars had a haymaker feel to them. He definitely came consistent though and only had 1 clear miss. Josh had LOTB with the Joe Metts bar but the rest of the verse I really wasn’t diggin. If josh had more sht along the lines of that Joe Metts bar he woulda won, but dom gets it for consistency.


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Nothing crazy from Dom, but he didn’t need to do much. I didn’t get the Barc reference but popularise was dope and lotb for me. Everything else was good. Butchery was clever. Glasgow was good. Dom’s tie ins after the wp are always dope.

Josh s. had a better verse than I thought after I read through it thoroughly. Grand was too simple. I googled strewth and still didn’t get the trash connection. Waste lands/Hardy was ok. Didn’t get the Joe Metts line. Shuriken wp was a force to me.

Josh’s verse had some ok spots but just wasn’t polished or creative enough to hang with Dom.

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I feel like dom was more original, his lines were more clever....Josh was either over my head or just wack because I didn't understand a lot of it...I'm sorry if I am just to dumb to understand..but hey guess it's my vote so it's on you

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