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02-12-2018, 02:14 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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The intro & that atheist line from habitat was pretty cool tbh.
didnt really enjoy the rest of it though as a whole it lowered the value to me overall I have sour winning this one for having the british cuisine & desolate line. that opener was pretty cool too, your verse came across more concise in delivery. habitats verse felt rushed but he did have a few lines in there.. just wasnt enough. v/joog
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.....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 02-12-2018 at 02:46 PM. |
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