Answer vs Dave - DAVE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 1

Due Thursday, Jun 30th

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@Answer @evaD

[Answer]

smh you couldnt give me someone trash week 1 @Sharp



I'm doing 12

[Answer]

@evaD check in by midnight tonight EST or I go 30

[evaD]

In I guess

[evaD]

No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt @Answer

[Answer]

that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here

[Adverse]

Dave:
No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
^ I liked this, wording felt a little long winded but the general idea was dope

Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
^ this doesn’t hit for me..because stand up comedians usually standalone on stage? Or am I missing something?

He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
^ this was cool, I’m sure it’s been used before but first time I’ve seen it here

N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
^ this was insane to me but again could be overused

I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
^ think this is a deep cut... if you haven’t watched his battle you wouldn’t get it so you’re relying on that from your audience which is always tricky

& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt @Answer
^ this was okay. Expected to see a lot of these this week, even wrote one myself lol

Answer:
that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
^ alright this was a decent opener

veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
^ decent again, wasn’t crazy but did the job

hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
^niceee liked the concept felt fresh

u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
^ cool one here again, good spin on gun bars

shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
^ alright cool

we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
^ this was alright

Thought Answer was consistent throughout even though his whole verse was a gun bar (which is sort of his niche.) Dave was good and had some dope gun bars himself but felt he rushed/whiffed on a couple of concepts and that didn’t help him. Answer wins off being consistent (if not a little redundant IMO)

V/Answer

[Eviction]

I got evad here for landing more punches, answer had a gunbar in just about every bar, sounds like a verse you write against an opponent you ain't done your homework on, bar for bar here is quotables from each.

evad
No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows

answer
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that

I have evad two bars to 1, and that 1 wasn't brutal enough for the two that evad landed.

[Aero]

Dave:

No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
nice concept
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
Witty but didn't too much care for this the stand alone league
He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
Basic
N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
Niiiice
I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
you thought you were funny
& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt
cool cool I dig it


Answer:

that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
alright
veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
swaggy but that's it
hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
lol aight, cool here
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
If I had water in my mouth I would've spit it out. this was FUEGO!
shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
cool but I've seen similar concept done better
we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
lol cool


This was close. Answer had LOTB but I think Dave was tad more consistent. I'll come back to vote on this, only if I feel like it

[White LGI]

I wanted to vote for answer because he's my favorite rapper these days, however


Vote...Dave

If I gotta explain I will

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by White LGI

I wanted to vote for answer because he's my favorite rapper these days, however


Vote...Dave

If I gotta explain I will

You have to explain. Short explanation is fine

[NYCSPITZ]

Dave:
No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
^ Dope concept, hits decent

Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
^ cool personal

He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
^ not feeling

N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
^ this was dope asf but a bounty for 8k seems low maybe like 80k whatever tho nice bar

I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
^ don’t get it

& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt @Answer
^ not bad

Answer:
that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
^ Pretty…crisp wording

veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
^i don’t get the llama inside jokes or is Dave llama? This was ok

hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
^dope gun bar

u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
^ this was fire wp

shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
^ feeling this

we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
^ this was cool

This was close both seem to be top 5 contenders in the league. I got answer edging it out but Dave would’ve won if he stayed consistent

[Dominate]

BOTW here I think.

No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
Heh, pretty good. He does actually get a lot of props for text battling though, would have been a stronger/more personal punch if you set this up to be about his live battles or comedy. I still fuck with it as a generic.
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
My first reaction was "ooooooft!", then I had the same problem with it that another voter mentioned - comedians are supposed to be standing alone while they perform. Then I thought maybe you meant it like he doesn't pull an audience - like he's alone in the room... but bottom line is I'm not totally clear on it. I think this was a killer concept but just not quite executed how it needed to be
He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
It'd be meh as a generic but with the personal angle it's a decent hit
N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
Woooo fire. Haven't seen either the 8k or new reality wp before. This was prob lotb for me
I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
LMAO yeah I like that
& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt
OK as a current event line




that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
Yep pretty good. I'm guessing this is a bar you wrote for a live battle. "My round drops" makes more sense in that context. Here it can be part of the gun talk but shooting someone does more than take them down a few pegs lol. I'm nitpicking. This is good.
veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
"when the shit fall" I'm not 100% with. It doesn't not work, just a bit iffy on the wording. Creative flip though. Maybe "when the shit drops" or "when shit falls out". idk.
hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
Yeah dope
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
Cashius had a similar line against Hush but "no coming back from that" is fresh with this.
shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
Cool. More of a self personal flex than a diss though
we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
Nice! Fave bar from you



OK I liked most lines from both, really good battle. I'm voting for Dave bc he had the personals vs Answer ODing on generic gun/attack bars. It wasn't really an even playing field though - Answer puts so much of his life on here and Dave gives us nothing. I did do my homework when I battled him and all I came up with was he's English. That lack of personal material plus him being quite good at this makes him the toughest opponent in the field IMO. Dave you're on notice. Divulge something interesting about yourself or else @Sharp can invent it and we will all just go along with it.

V/ Dave

[Saint]

This could go either way
I think I have Dave here for me was more varied in his approach
I liked Ans sig an hidden shelves, liked Bermuda idea more than punch.
Dave had the personal, oculus rift concept b(which I had too) Answer had a lot if that live/ gun bar style which got stale imo.i could see Answer taking it if that's ur thing

Vote Dave by preference

[Sharp]

3-2 Dave

[Sharp]

No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
lmaooo. Dope
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
this is a miss from me
He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
lmao. Slightly dated, pretty basic execution, but it works for me
N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
I fuck with this concept a lot. 'send him to a new reality' is a bit of a stretch for me but this works
I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
kind of surprised you upped a thread for this. I know what you're talking about so I like it, but don't love it
& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt
basic, but works



that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
I hate the setup. Punch is cool. If I ever read that setup again I'm going to pop up dabbin on a razor blade until everything fades to black.
veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
this is gonna be so cash when it's live. Swaggy as fuck. Missing the punch
hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
cool, again gonna be fire live, but we're not dissing Dave here
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
this is so dope. Why would you put this and pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit in the same verse. Fire. Hilarious. Tailor made for me to love it.
shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
Swaggy as fuck. Will impress your new black friends. This is not directed at Dave at all and I'm tired of reading about guns
we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
fire. I'm getting tired of reading gunbars but this is fire


Answer had some cool bars, but I was missing personal angles, or really any angle. Dave's personals put him over the edge for me

V/Dave

[Cred]

No one’s fooled when you flex. & For someone who spends so much time flowing
He’s the Alec Baldwin of text - if he ever actually gets props it’ll be mind blowing
this was koo
Second in the power rankings but sure, he oughtta be, yo
This the ‘stand alone’ league and that’s all he does at his comedy shows
decent
He’s either ignored or they sighing and yo I applaud him for trying
But He could be on the bill at astroworld and wouldn’t have an audience dying
this pretty koo too
N If I call my shooters its fatality, they poppin this bitch
8k on his head send him to a new reality like oculus rift
fire
I saw your grocery list gimmick but really the reaction to shit was negligible
They weren’t impressed they just had to check that you had actually listed vegetables
nah
& You can write what you want I’m not the type to just front
And I couldn’t Give a fuck if abortion’s illegal, I’ll still snatch the life from this cunt
good closer

vs

that dave kid's so sick til I pop up dabbin on em til the bingo hit
soon as my round drops it takes you down a few pegs like a plinko chip
didn't get this
veteran packing heat
pop a llama, like a pinata.. when the shit fall u better be ready to grab a piece
good
hollows or metal jackets, my TEC can fit the bullet
hidden bookshelves.. something's inside a case that'll make an entrance when I pull it
koo
u act up & the p320 can adapt to that
deadbeat dad, if I tell you I'ma go get the sigs there ain't no coming back from that
pretty decent
shotgun, let's get it poppin
good will hunting, the kid w/ a mop & a sweeper ready to work out any problem
nah
we know u don't fire rounds queer
bermuda triangle, come thru w/ the chopper & find out that shit don't fly around here
koo closer

I thought I had answer edging this @ first but this was a tough match up but after re-reading Dave barely edged this cuz he had lotb wit that occulus shit. Dope match

vote- Dave