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04-08-2016, 10:09 PM
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check it, will give feedback to whoever feeds me
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04-08-2016, 10:51 PM
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Or they Out there smokin crack again
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04-10-2016, 12:12 PM
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wrong beat man. you spit it 'ok' but the beat kicked your ass. flow is to longwinded and the beat isnt meant for that. lyrics were solid
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04-11-2016, 01:20 AM
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First and foremost I liked your lyrics and content. I feel you like you don't have a great mic presence yet, how long have you been recording? It took me awhile to get any bit of confidence going. Also I'd recommend cutting the length of your lines down to make it flow better, another problem I had before. But you're not too bad my dude just got to iron some things out. Keep it going |
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04-15-2016, 03:48 PM
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thanks guys appreciate it, that was actually a track from 1-2 years ago ;) ive made plenty since. hate making youtube video's
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05-22-2016, 12:41 AM
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Emcee 4 Life
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I feel alot of passion in your flow man, i liked the song, It was just the delivery that was off. I always got respect for that positive hip hop
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