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Destroyer vs. Jayson fresh {Destroyer wins}
Round One . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Destroyer @Jayson Fresh
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06-01-2020, 09:40 AM | #2 |
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Hello mr. fresh.
I will be going 14 lines cause fuck 12 |
06-02-2020, 08:53 AM | #3 |
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check, sounds good
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06-05-2020, 08:16 AM | #4 |
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dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff
with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck Man, u were missed bro. But des won’t. The SIG still got 9 left make no mistake. there will be lots of clapping on ur return to the lime, fresh des will hurt this bitch. I’m old, but I’m still current kid u had to research me to write ur bars. I already knew that u weren’t shit it’s hard out here for a pimp. harder even when u da bitch Fuck with D Jay? End up on a bathroom floor bleeding like Ludacris that’s filler. not a punch. gotta bring that fire. I feel u, coop. when I light up the Jay son, I get that head pounding before smoke even fills the room this Katniss to go... cue the pointing and yelling... They’ll be mocking jay long before district 2 joins the rebellion des will damage nerds. we both know how this battle turns. if they see a jay v, it just proof that this classic’s filled with amateurs Last edited by ~RustyGunZ~; 06-05-2020 at 02:30 PM. |
06-05-2020, 12:37 PM | #5 |
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Mafucka its showtime.
Cue the training montage. Release confetti. Des wanna brawl ? real head turner 2nite when I pop ya top followed by series of spin offs u Better Call Saul Fresh in clutch form. Readjust the sniper scope target no Undertaker Documentary I unload clip after clip on this choke artist ..sooo.. browsed ur archives & only one conclusion I could see.. planned parenthood pamphlets. not one reading material viable that came out this pussy Ur records proof. That style. The concepts. over & over. Give us something new running same game different beast nigga stop it ya careers Temple Run 2 take it to the streeeeet.. gut shot.. record n go viral when I knock your ass No Applebees but ya ribs’ll lay out roadside u’d think bums used em for doordash Next round pleeeaaase .. this warm up was truly nonsense Fresh the type to knock roof of ya mouth off with a roundhouse.. n lose the security deposit Destroyer vs the king of punchlines.. This battle phased me hardly While panic aint just settling in on u, its hosting the housewarming party |
06-05-2020, 07:26 PM | #6 |
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going with Des here.
Close battle. dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck it’s hard out here for a pimp. harder even when u da bitch Fuck with D Jay? End up on a bathroom floor bleeding like Ludacris this Katniss to go... cue the pointing and yelling... They’ll be mocking jay long before district 2 joins the rebellion vs Fresh in clutch form. Readjust the sniper scope target no Undertaker Documentary I unload clip after clip on this choke artist take it to the streeeeet.. gut shot.. record n go viral when I knock your ass No Applebees but ya ribs’ll lay out roadside u’d think bums used em for doordash Next round pleeeaaase .. this warm up was truly nonsense Fresh the type to knock roof of ya mouth off with a roundhouse.. n lose the security deposit Overall, I felt Des came stronger - same amount of quotables from each, but I liked Des' wording and execution of the concepts more. Jay's in particular sometimes came off too wordy, or didn't really land because of the wording. Best battle I've read yet though, and as i said, it's fairly close. I could see this going either way depending on who's style you prefer more. v - Des
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06-05-2020, 08:19 PM | #7 |
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I got destroyer winning this. It was fairly close, but I thought destroyer was more concise and executed his concepts better. I think Jayson might have been able to take it if he worded his ideas better, but as it stands, Destroyer won.
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06-05-2020, 11:48 PM | #8 | |
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dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff
with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck Katniss is forced wp as fuck. Don't have any gifs to currently react to that, but slowly thinking about it makes me depressed. vs. nothing V - Destroyer. I liked the opener and didn't really like much else from the verse. I thought the Katniss wp was forced, again, but I almost quoted the Ludacris bar. I assume it was a reference to the "Get Back" music video lol, but then, it wouldn't be accurate. Jayson Fresh, for the most part, your bars were long as everlasting shit. Every bar started off somewhere, then the next one was just ridiculously long to the point the punch didn't hit for me. Closest bar for me to a quotable was the Undertaker line, but the wording was soft as hell to me, and it didn't really attack the opponent in a harsh way. It was like a soft jab, and that's the best out of the verse to me. Maybe it's a stylistic thing, or I just don't like the verse, but nothing really hit overall.
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06-06-2020, 02:56 AM | #9 |
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Not sure what everyone else is reading. Destroyer took it pretty easy imo
Destoryer hit a good stride startiing with the 'you werent shit' line. The rest had a good vibe with some mixed in quotables Jayfresh the last two punches were pretty good, but eberything that led up to it fell flat Vote- destroyer |
06-06-2020, 06:58 AM | #10 |
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spin off, undertake, housewarming.. shit with adjustment in wording all those concepts woulda been solid and coulda been made it into good ass lines .. as it is it felt like it was all over.. i did like temple run 2
des was pretty consistant, and in contrast felt effortless, which is a positive.. opener, mocking jay.. yeah u took it v Des
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Destroyer wins
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