XI WK VI: Quill (1-1) vs. brokenhal0 (2-3) (BROKENHAL0 WINS)

[Frank]

Season 11 XI

VERSES: Friday, January, 27th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion

VOTES: Monday, January 30th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON!

Goodluck! @Quill @brokenhal0

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[brokenhal0]

''VALLEY OF THE DOLLS''
''ALLURE''







https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=htlLLRR95kc

With heart strings pulling like carriage and pony's
daylight sunglasses cover the pupils of complicated stories
tabloid pages written by these shameless phony's
entertained by knowing that you don't know me
there's a little bit of truth in all these verses homey.

She lives in it to take pictures with her kids in it
snippets of her playing the front row she bust it wide for knicks tickets
realistic athleticism appears less than a caricature of a stick figure
but she eats less just to think bigger.
what grasp attention quicker then fatter asses
she told me I was just another trick
pulling rabbits out the hat in her magic classes
her chauffeur opens the door, fans and paparazzi scattered flashes..

I told her baby this industry could be rather savage
better yet I walked her through the rappers passage
she said your nothing but a ''Munch'' hal0...your stats are average
I replied sure baby whatever tickles your tonsils backwards
after she let me hit I got blocked the next day
like that matters,no shame in her game
the low lights of a well known low paid actress.

While she tends to share her wealth with you,you tend to care
the tender moments spared that she builds a hell with you ...
I love you dearly, but I don't want to melt with you ...
As threats of pain throw off your character
in a fit of rage shes throwing my wardrobe down the banister
the actions of malice seem practiced
rather than genuine cruel yet crucial
that's how you factor in the settlements
when a man loves a woman
in a matter of months mold can enter in
dispose of such poisonous fruits those spores ain't renderin
a metaphor before you met her for the medicine
divorce courts now you lost dog here's a plaque
the biggest award for another dickless veteran ...

For those who find love outside themselves it's rather excellent
but shes gets men wrapped around her most evident depression spin
flirtatious suburban diva excellence a strapless dress with no bra
keep trying harder mothers milk ain't manipulating my metaverse
im drinking avion mixed with devil springs
in a grey Nissan driving through Bensonhurst..

She can't see in the dark but she can feel me Helen Keller
take a stab at your bleeding heart Heltah Skeltah
if us sharing (Sharron) tainted (Tate) the star of rosemary's baby
Man Women & Child another broken family that was not so lazy.

She worked hard for it all,looking at the stars cherishing the merits
inherited realism and grace,yet with all the sex she couldn't be a parent
her mother said what a disgrace
then brought her a coat made out of ferrets
the meaning to this is everything has it's place
and the truth is often disparaged
through gifts given from all the glitz and the glamours
still can't fill the void which is unconditionally cherished
she sung a song of gloom for every womb that was damaged
if the miracle of birth owned a label who would it manage...

She looked so peaceful decomposing in that compost heap
electric tape wrapped around her feet so tight it stretched her ankles
Hotel California plays through a distant window
news cameras roll over scented candles
excellent powder tested samples
Im just expelling out the vomit for the next example..

In the bath tub sinking into the abyssal depths
shallow breathing pulp fiction how it occurred to her friends
naloxone shots made her heart beat again naked on the bathroom floor
waking up screaming and vomiting bathwater purple and heaving shit
a part of her was still intoxicated receiving visions of the wildest dreaming
beyond the land of oz getting her directions on cut! , attention whores
for only a second she started to question...who the real directors are?
a short glimpse behind the scenes in the land of stars
only good grows as wood can , she was so scandalous on set
reading hers scripts , taking pride in embarrassing a good man.

Life imitates artist so god bless a goddess in a chiffon dress
dominating red carpets walking mezzanines
charming in the arms of piranhas rocking Balenciaga's in Medellin
she got you sweating under the collar hook lined let em bleed.

Expressing whatever weakness remains left
I love eating pussy but don't taste death
is life any better
after sparing your soul just for safe sex
I separated it all
and now the world below the valley of the dolls weighs less
she's far away and remains next ...Whats up!!

Images of Russian tea rooms a blonde mistress crying red tears
dripping on a white napkin her midnight kisses felt crystal clear
the movie writes itself do you remember your the director
beyond the stars she wants to help you untie your belt.

I Who plea maybe's just to please lady's
nah not me lately far out of reach Pleiades,she's like a sister to me
and it's sick how unreasonable some of these bitches could be
something about her beauty shines differently
The challenge is to adjust rather then dance with death
her own thoughts are her rivals off screen,dancer steps
desensitizing the one man who runs hundreds of stations at the sideshows
the subject at hand will open up cloudy eyes though
so you either smile or frown when the bright lights glow.

Looking at the stars cherishing her merits she inherited realism and grace would have made American Idol by looking at her tapes
Looking at the stars cherishing the merits I've inherited realism and grace would have made America Idol if that was the case.

[Frank]

@brokenhal0
WINS!

[Dope girl]

This is dope as hell
I see some slick lines
flows super tight