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Old 10-24-2023, 11:12 PM   #1
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flesh prisons and pay skeleton stipends
masquerading despite our
alien stripes; over inflated cranium pipes
playing make-pretend while preordained and polite
atheist Christians, gray at the pale of the light
barely submissive and none of us very alike
hailed as a misfit, violence, derailment, and dyfs
nefarious, my, spirit animals’ a tasmanian tiger
manifesting black-&-white gradient types
love and valium viper, dead dopamine sailing erratic
white noised radio critic turned radio static
innately attached. under qualified and over ambitious
mood board’s too forced, highly characteristic
sometimes titanic and sinking.
sometimes paleocrystic
sometimes abandoned to depth
sometimes the mary celeste
inconsistent.
in the subterranean south and never impressed
barely conditioned.
entrenched in gladiator stadium joust
blade in my mouth, durandal paladin remark
counting the harvest, housing thousands of quarks
from cattle farms to atom bombs, any sound and were caught
i obtain that fire breathers usually get found in the dark
to keep the revolution under water like the drownings at Nantes
it's arousing to rot, sort of a triggering warmth
putrefy the Guggenheim, i call my constituents Darth
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Old 10-31-2023, 10:45 AM   #2
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This was really good. I don't think dyfs is a word but I could be wrong. The titanic sinking/paleocrystic couplet was incredible. I've never seen that idea even attempted before, I wouldn't have thought of it in a million years, the concept was absolutely inspired and the execution was immaculate and then following it up with the mary celeste line was seriously impressive. I really admire the thought process behind those lines. All of this was exemplary, thank you for the read.
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Old 10-31-2023, 11:33 AM   #3
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- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek

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This was really good. I don't think dyfs is a word but I could be wrong. The titanic sinking/paleocrystic couplet was incredible. I've never seen that idea even attempted before, I wouldn't have thought of it in a million years, the concept was absolutely inspired and the execution was immaculate and then following it up with the mary celeste line was seriously impressive. I really admire the thought process behind those lines. All of this was exemplary, thank you for the read.
ThX wit

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Old 10-31-2023, 12:21 PM   #4
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Thanks for letting me know brother.
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Old 11-08-2023, 07:50 PM   #5
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"mood board’s too forced, highly characteristic
sometimes titanic and sinking.
sometimes paleocrystic
sometimes abandoned to depth
sometimes the mary celeste "

"entrenched in gladiator stadium joust
blade in my mouth, durandal paladin remark
counting the harvest, housing thousands of quarks "

wow.

almost embarrassed to admit how glad i was to see a fresh post from you here. wherever your flesh prison is at in life, i hope its treating you well

these shades of gray are still my favorite color ngl

bleak
dystopian myopia.
focus on a single ugly feeling and peeled outward into beauty.
and the real beauty is not in the product but in the attempt.
what else can we do?
its what always freed me. personally.
that i suspect is your device as well, even after all this time.

hoping to get back to it eventually as well

idk

stay safe brother

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Old 11-13-2023, 06:55 PM   #6
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- tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek

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thank you Sir dm. all your thoughts are well appreciated and noted.

now write so bb can read. thank you!
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