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08-31-2023, 06:04 PM
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Lime Life
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Yayayaya
I hate starting to write a piece, nothings finding me, hey!
I know! [Insert a tired uninspired cliche] And all the guys that read it be like "Oh my that's deep" Yay! It's easy to pull the wool over your eyes if your minds asleep I'm a creep, dreaming of violence each day Murder, decapitation have me in a fervor, I'm salivating And further, I chat to Satan at night when I snooze After a dozen pints of Nyquil and booze He whispers and murmurs the plans he's making. I'm sick as fuck, I'd slit and cut a million sluts Only reason I don't is cuz the beds they have in prison suck Plus I only like to shit alone, at peace in my house Not having Fat Bob with the face tats watch me squeezing it out So if I ever do it there'll be reasonable doubt Leave her head in the North, arms in the West, feet in the South. Then feed my dog with her breasts after beating one out Fuck it I'm bored, don't even know what I'm typing here. Don't fucking feed this shit... Fuck off, you guys are queer.
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09-01-2023, 02:03 PM
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Badgerdick
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I read it.
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09-21-2023, 06:34 AM
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Its witty. Been a long time..
I shouldn'a left you...
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09-21-2023, 10:59 AM
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Dope work love
you killed it |
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09-29-2023, 08:03 PM
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Lime Life
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True.
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04-25-2024, 02:44 PM
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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write more.
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04-27-2024, 11:09 AM
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truuuueeeeee
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05-28-2024, 11:24 PM
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Lime Life
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Quote:
Sorry brother, it must be difficult for you to see a level of ability you will never reach. I wasn't trying to embarasss you.
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05-28-2024, 11:27 PM
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Lime Life
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Honestly, this was awful.
I had something in a few moments but I hope this verse dies in pain. To be fair, it was just drunken rambling.
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05-28-2024, 11:31 PM
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Lime Life
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The first two lines were dope as fuck. I clearly started with a concept. The next two were OK too. Then it got terrible.
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06-04-2024, 07:58 PM
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Sini
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I THOUGHT THIS WAS PRETTY GOOD. ENJOYED!
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06-08-2024, 06:29 PM
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Lime Life
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Thank you for confirming my previous post.
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