10-13-2021, 11:36 AM | #1 |
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Fracture Vs Bobby D - OPEN FOR VOTES
When did this drunk bum make a life of this living...
"Blows like piss" ... not just for a DUI but feedback from the cops who didnt try to resist him Fagture let's be clear we was never "friends" lmao I rock presteen on the beat, I'm the bigger the splendor.. You drop 16 with no heat like a cigarette vendor Fracture, racist cracker reins as forgetful flabby and fray... An Alcoholic n' 6 Dick's in the ass, as he wakes.. tripple double no. shots to remind him that he's actually gay His first words "of daddy love me!" belligerent... But no man could love he, son is ugly, donning buck teeth, not even jay z could give a 50 cent To the sky with ya kid, ima king don't make me taunt ya Only time you catching a body, is when u try swings with ya baby daughter I got nothing to lose, it's a badge no high skill can jab me But you rocking HOEtel a manager, like your face fits the title EXACTLY Plus your raps were always lumped as crazy soft I pull the sheet over my victims, you do it to beds with cum as a daily job Only time I'd ever lie...there's no answering back As only an oxymoron would say Fractures can't crack I'll drop here, leave you lonely and ALL at a lonesome end Especially he don't pepsi and we all know now Cokes his only friend Wait that's Kung I'm not baggin on, he's the one with the jokes again You're just the tag along except Aloes phorce not here to help you win /\ you used to call that shit rap creativity I call it basic but the only shit that ever matched ya credibility Only on this site is you ever near a class killing me Even then it's ya friends that it really be bringing heat And even they silly weak like your titties and shitty speak with ya rejunivity…!? Thinking you dope online!? lulz yeah fracs that kid again on a rare pillow mission... But you spent ya life on the web longer than a dead widow victim Fuck ya lttle bitchin, you were just an Epi likened Aloe clone.. But with more holes and no shows than new splicing at home zones Saving this no hope, Not even sharp E Ts and are asking u to go hoe Put a boxcutter snigger to this bum wigga across ya face U living in a box as a winner, cuz simply any bigger youd get lost in space Always online so guess u rationed the world So I guess your polished, just as NCs are sand blasting ya girl Im serving up home sups, from raw to pure skill... If you oaks your home bru? let me feed ya an English board to your grill ! Got a little personal, spitting it to check this hoe Asked for a verse to settle it, but you gon need a lifetime prescription of omeprezol So worn out...death is seen as a marriage your purpose pursues… With a face sunning so much exposure Hiroshima charities are working for you Until they seen it in person, then just decided on murdering drew What a worthless pursuit, like any verse you refute...this my last post to give words to the truth... Ur nothing but ugly lightwork, here's how to answer it best... I never "switched up" on you, that just what ya girl does when you ask her for sex… I mean both are off! whether it's at the wall or the task she invests... Unstable as ever, so let me kick this joke stand Only time you've really "held it together" is a Kung and zuch dick in both hands An ur petty pathetic, Ur shit at any stunt he passes I've never needed to step it up, like u when you quit your Zumba classes.. As ur real life record reflects when he jumps he fractures... Peace
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10-13-2021, 01:35 PM | #3 |
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Ur lines always been stagnant & poor
Fracs a legend, you've always just been a punching bag on the boards U fucking suck. I'm a veteran dude Bobby A, Bobby B, Bobby C, &Bobby E could probably do it better than you Reading that verse was a ridiculous chore Sounded like you were complimenting me with insults as British as yours Ayo Prince Charles. Diminish your lips Then maybe Baron Mynd could probably give u some tips You're a fag in a box. I saw 'rejuvinity' and 'sniggered' and knew this shit was a lock I know ur determined. I totally know You've got drive, too bad its on the wrong side of the road The Bobbies are cops, thats totally true But even those faggots pack more firepower than you Hey wanna hear a Bobby line? If you really do Jimeny jillikers chim chimery friggedy froo Cool insults bro. I'm worthy tonight You haven't been past the first round of a tourney in life Dont even talk knowledge to me Coming from a country where chimney sweeping is a college degree U just need to stop then I will when someone names Bobby D in their top 10 (Frac told me to post this for him) |
10-13-2021, 04:39 PM | #4 |
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Lol@ you in my DMs apologizing like a little girl then trying to act tough on the boards. Bobby ur a fag oh and that verse was fucking terrible
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Fractures can’t crack isn’t an oxymoron, btw
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09-06-2022, 06:29 PM | #6 |
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Why isn’t anyone voting on this?
Let’s move on people. Fracture More consistent, coherent, rebuttal was funny and relatable after reading Bobby’s lines. Less was more here. |
09-09-2022, 06:22 AM | #7 |
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The standard amount of cigs in a pack is 20. Fracture’s virgin ass for some fuck all reason thinks there’s 16.
Automatic loss. Vote = Khngfuq or whoever this jackass is |
09-21-2022, 02:35 PM | #8 |
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@Frac I need confirmation that this indeed was your verse. If not, I will open this up for feed.
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Um. Despite total lack of context or history for this battle, I will drop a vote / little feedback here this weekend.
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03-06-2023, 09:57 PM | #10 |
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***OKayy,,
ANd, I swear, this is NOT from rapping-fatigue, or "reading-eyeball" fatigue...well maybe a little... no more than 10% But, I thought Bobby D's first (let's go down & check) .... When did this drunk bum make a life of this living... "Blows like piss" ... not just for a DUI but feedback from the cops who didnt try to resist him Fagture let's be clear we was never "friends" lmao Quote: Originally Posted by Fracture View Post my man, only way to settle this is 16 bars I rock presteen on the beat, I'm the bigger the splendor.. You drop 16 with no heat like a cigarette vendor Fracture, racist cracker reins as forgetful flabby and fray... An Alcoholic n' 6 Dick's in the ass, as he wakes.. tripple double no. shots to remind him that he's actually gay His first words "of daddy love me!" belligerent... But no man could love he, son is ugly, donning buck teeth, not even jay z could give a 50 cent To the sky with ya kid, ima king don't make me taunt ya Only time you catching a body, is when u try swings with ya baby daughter I got nothing to lose, it's a badge no high skill can jab me But you rocking HOEtel a manager, like your face fits the title EXACTLY Plus your raps were always lumped as crazy soft I pull the sheet over my victims, you do it to beds with cum as a daily job Only time I'd ever lie...there's no answering back As only an oxymoron would say Fractures can't crack I'll drop here, leave you lonely and ALL at a lonesome end Especially he don't pepsi and we all know now Cokes his only friend Wait that's Kung I'm not baggin on, he's the one with the jokes again You're just the tag along except Aloes phorce not here to help you win /\ Think this part is fire... loved the swing wordplay.. @Bobby D it appears I "bit" a "capped" "Exactly.": in my most recent audio track... it MAY have been subconsciously (as I see this is '21...there is also a (bit smaller) chance it was coincidental...as it fit in properly with a string of 4-5 other rhymes I'd done for writing the line,, at the time...with the "soft a & hard e (y)" vowel sound 2syllables... right? Nice... But, I don't wanna h8 or sound too harsh (or Maybe I do?)....after that I think the verse really falls off (not QUITE) off a cliff..but close...with some old/boring rhymes, hard/or bad/or lazy near rhymes, "freestylie" type execution and writing (unliiiike the above quoted section that I like.)... Whereas your opponent @kungfugrip (and i don't know if he or @Fracture wrote it)... HE DIDNT HAVE TO SAY IT THAT IT WAS A CHORE TO GET THRU BOBBY'S VERSE... Despite the fire start, the middle and finale were rough FOR Bobby....and, he, kung or Frac, did end up saying it, and writing a verrry simple (but safe...and well executed (I thought FOR the most part....)verse ...he had (for the reader) even more "really do" "friggedy froo" "mockery" from fracOrkung here....which is one of my only knocks on an other wise safe/simple verse? ================================ SO It's opening fire... and then a chore.....vs... a safe but very respectabe/nice knock/clapback at the opponent.... (albeit a diff. length? by far).... V Frac/kung by a hair... ONLY because I'm judging whole verses!!!!!!!! (IF I go by Italicized quoted section Bobby would take!) **next. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 03-06-2023 at 10:07 PM. |
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I mean, I did write this whole verse tho because I knew Fracture wouldn't show
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Do you have any personal opinions on why Bobby's opening bars were fire followed by freestyle "chore" filler?
I mean he won if we go by first openers - line length match But YOU/ (not frac i guess?) just took the safer "close dub" Did @Bobby D polish his opening and "key" the rest? Or did he have a ghostwriter legend open for him as he dropped the rest of the "chore" Lol. Just asking Kung in my Gay way = for your opinion,to keep this upped and maybe a vote or 2 more to close. ~ |
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I wrote the whole verse. Frac would have never wrote
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Also, I don't remember writing this at all
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It was pretty dope for a blackout verse tho
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It really wasn’t.
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Like psychedelic British frog man that never beat anyone is gonna tell me whats cool
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