alien

[big baby]

we're wearing
flesh prisons and pay skeleton stipends
masquerading despite our
alien stripes; over inflated cranium pipes
playing make-pretend while preordained and polite
atheist Christians, gray at the pale of the light
barely submissive and none of us very alike
hailed as a misfit, violence, derailment, and dyfs
nefarious, my, spirit animals’ a tasmanian tiger
manifesting black-&-white gradient types
love and valium viper, dead dopamine sailing erratic
white noised radio critic turned radio static
innately attached. under qualified and over ambitious
mood board’s too forced, highly characteristic
sometimes titanic and sinking.
sometimes paleocrystic
sometimes abandoned to depth
sometimes the mary celeste
inconsistent.
in the subterranean south and never impressed
barely conditioned.
entrenched in gladiator stadium joust
blade in my mouth, durandal paladin remark
counting the harvest, housing thousands of quarks
from cattle farms to atom bombs, any sound and were caught
i obtain that fire breathers usually get found in the dark
to keep the revolution under water like the drownings at Nantes
it's arousing to rot, sort of a triggering warmth
putrefy the Guggenheim, i call my constituents Darth

[Witty]

This was really good. I don't think dyfs is a word but I could be wrong. The titanic sinking/paleocrystic couplet was incredible. I've never seen that idea even attempted before, I wouldn't have thought of it in a million years, the concept was absolutely inspired and the execution was immaculate and then following it up with the mary celeste line was seriously impressive. I really admire the thought process behind those lines. All of this was exemplary, thank you for the read.

[big baby]

Originally Posted by Witty

This was really good. I don't think dyfs is a word but I could be wrong. The titanic sinking/paleocrystic couplet was incredible. I've never seen that idea even attempted before, I wouldn't have thought of it in a million years, the concept was absolutely inspired and the execution was immaculate and then following it up with the mary celeste line was seriously impressive. I really admire the thought process behind those lines. All of this was exemplary, thank you for the read.

ThX wit

dyfs not word it an afronym

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Divi...and_Permanency

[Witty]

Thanks for letting me know brother.

[dead man]

"mood board’s too forced, highly characteristic
sometimes titanic and sinking.
sometimes paleocrystic
sometimes abandoned to depth
sometimes the mary celeste "

"entrenched in gladiator stadium joust
blade in my mouth, durandal paladin remark
counting the harvest, housing thousands of quarks "

wow.

almost embarrassed to admit how glad i was to see a fresh post from you here. wherever your flesh prison is at in life, i hope its treating you well

these shades of gray are still my favorite color ngl

bleak
dystopian myopia.
focus on a single ugly feeling and peeled outward into beauty.
and the real beauty is not in the product but in the attempt.
what else can we do?
its what always freed me. personally.
that i suspect is your device as well, even after all this time.

hoping to get back to it eventually as well

idk

stay safe brother

dm

[big baby]

thank you Sir dm. all your thoughts are well appreciated and noted.

now write so bb can read. thank you!